I Miss Them I Mean Him So Much (limerick)

At funeral I cried a score

For brother I’d come to adore

And life’s memory

This man gave to me

And tools I won’t see anymore


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kidscrafts 2 years ago from Ottawa, Canada

Sad to begin with but I was ready for your punch line :-)


DJ Anderson 2 years ago

Super limerick!!

I do understand men and their tools.

I also understand the issue of others borrowing tools.

DJ.


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Vellur 2 years ago from Dubai

Sad about your brother. Tools are treasured by men.


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ImKarn23 2 years ago

some brother! he coulda left them to you no?? lol


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tsmog 2 years ago from Escondido, CA

I shall be haunted today. The imagery and the limerick offer so much to ponder of 'whom' or 'who' while pondering the 'what' of 'what.' Nice!

tim


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vkwok 2 years ago from Hawaii

LOL about the tools!


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Gypsy Rose Lee 2 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Those tools get you all the time.


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teaches12345 2 years ago

Nice thought and pondering.

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