I Was A Good Learner Or Dad Was A Good Teacher (limerick)

Hawaiian dad taught me to dance

To chorus of exotic chants

The lessons he dealt

The meaning I felt

As he applied belt to my pants


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Mary McShane 2 years ago from Fort Lauderdale, Florida

Ouch! Dancing indeed!

Very well done :)


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Ericdierker 2 years ago from Spring Valley, CA. U.S.A.

Well done


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kidscrafts 2 years ago from Ottawa, Canada

Well done.... and I love the picture :-)


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MsDora 2 years ago from The Caribbean

That's a dance alright! Funny now, but not then.


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FlourishAnyway 2 years ago from USA

Lessons learned the hard way


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Eiddwen 2 years ago from Wales

Another great limerick Martin.

Eddy.


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vkwok 2 years ago from Hawaii

That must hurt!


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Gypsy Rose Lee 2 years ago from Riga, Latvia

There always must be discipline.

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