If I couldn't breathe anymore

Tears fall when they want to.
Tears fall when they want to.

I guess If couldn't breathe....

I wouldn't feel......

I would not feel this pain.

I guess I couldn't breathe.....

I wouldn't want help.....

No one will help me.

I wish I couldn't breathe anymore.

I wish the pain would melt away.

Dissolve like a pill I take.....

To take the pain away.

I'm so tired of breathing.....

No one is here to save me from myself.

I tear apart all of the good left in my heart.

If I could not breathe anymore...

I would not feel this pain...

I wish the pain would melt away.....

Dissolve like a pill I take...

To take away the pain

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shamelabboush 7 years ago

You have so much pain in here! This one is nice dear. Let's have another look...

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I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s 7 years ago

Bleeding pain, yet nicely expressed.

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gjfalcone 7 years ago from Gilbert, Arizona

It approaches Hamlet's soliloquy "For in that sleep of death what dreams may come". Tears fall when they must, I'd have it no other way, would you. it great your in touch with your soul. nail it...

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HubCrafter 6 years ago from Arizona

Hi chrissie123:

When Life is a struggle of confusion..

it's good to have someone to rely on.

Someone so calm and warm...

the fear can melt away.

Someone who sees in the darkness...

who knows the trembling heart.

Someone who loves...

despite my shame.

The One

who loved



as I am.

His name



His name


Do you know Him?


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chrissie123 6 years ago Author

Hubcrafter do you mean god?

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