If You Leave: A Poem

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If you leave,

Paint all the sunsets with the color of my eyes,

So you won't forget me when you gaze upon the sky,


If you leave,

Don't let the ocean wipe away my footprint,

So you'll be left with a memory, a melancholy hint,


If you leave,

May the tears you cry be sweetened with delight,

Mingled with healing, making your stoic eyes bright.


If you leave,

Carry on with quiet independence,

Knowing that what once was wasn't intended.


If you leave,

Keep me close in your soul,

Just return my fragile heart you swiftly stole.


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blondey 3 years ago

wow, well written poem here. Puts my hubs to shame! Great poetry! :)


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Ebower 3 years ago from Georgia Author

blondey: That was very nice of you to say, but I'm sure yours are wonderful! Thanks for reading. :)


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Mhatter99 3 years ago from San Francisco

Such remarkable sweetness. thank you


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cleaner3 3 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

great poem ...Ebower.. you write with a style like my own and it serves you well .! expression from the heart ...

michael


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Ebower 3 years ago from Georgia Author

Mhatter99: Thank you!

cleaner3: Thanks so much. I love writing heart-felt poetry. :)


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lambservant 3 years ago from Pacific Northwest

Lovely with a captial L.


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Ebower 3 years ago from Georgia Author

lambservant: Thank you with a capital T.


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Sunny River 3 years ago from A Place Without A Name which resides somewhere between Fantasy and Belief, just north of Reality

I like the melancholy feel of this piece. Just lovely.


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Ebower 3 years ago from Georgia Author

Sunny River: Thank you! I think melancholy is an excellent word for it.


Poetic Fool 3 years ago

Erin, your poem is wistful and bittersweet with a real sense of honesty. Genuine is the word I think I'm looking for. Well written and it pulls on the heartstrings. Thanks for sharing it!


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Ebower 3 years ago from Georgia Author

Poetic Fool: Thank you for your lovely, encouraging words. :)


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carter06 3 years ago from Cronulla NSW

Wow great poem Erin..emotive and beautifully heart tugging expressive..

VUAB & shared


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Ebower 3 years ago from Georgia Author

Amicgood: Thanks for reading! :)

carter06: Thanks so much! I could only hope that all of my poems are deemed worthy of such words. Thanks for sharing!


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ahorseback 3 years ago

Wow , there is a longing magic in these words, exellent ++++.....Ed


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Ebower 3 years ago from Georgia Author

ahorseback: Thank you for your beautiful words. :)


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Laura Schneider 3 years ago from Minneapolis-St. Paul, Minnesota, USA

Awesome poem, Ebower! There's not a dry eye in the audience by the end, I'm sure. What a grown-up way of leave-taking: giving the person permission to leave and still remember the good you had together without pain, while getting your own heart back so that you can do the same. A+ in my grade book! Thanks for sharing such an intimate-sounding poem.


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btrbell 3 years ago from Mesa, AZ

Beautiful poem. Very meaningful! Up beautiful and awesome! Thank you for sharing!


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Ebower 3 years ago from Georgia Author

btrbell: Thanks for sharing!

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