If it Was Because of the Sea......

Then it would be okay to live life
within the faultlines of altered souls

As all the others walk by and leave you
wandering among the tides and shoals

Perhaps alone is alright after all as that is
from where man came and where man returns

And all the answers of life that the sea
knows and yet never reveals in turns

If the sea was a woman and left me in deserts
and never to see her again

If all there was after immersion was a broken
heart it would be okay to be friends

If it was because of the sea I could at least
come around to forgive myself ...for trying

And just because it is the sea .....I will understand
and lose this yearning before the dying

And the tides roll in again.....and again......and again





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QudsiaP1 5 years ago

The sea is uncharted, unforgiving, loving and giving, filled with paradoxes that one can never truly see.

Beautifully written.


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ahorseback 5 years ago Author

Qudsia, You are right about that , again that was a beautiful poem you wrote of the sea too! You just described the sea in one paragraph , and I've been trying to do that in entire poems.lol.....:-} You are beautifully written!.......:-}


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QudsiaP1 5 years ago

Oh you flatter me too much personally I think you have done a fantastic job with this piece. As or the sea, she is vast, I don't think there ever could be enough poems on her. :)


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Cardisa 5 years ago from Jamaica

Ahorseback,

we believe the sea is a body of healing waters. Forget all your troubles, replenish the souls and mind.

Yes, the sea......how wonderful

Cardisa


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ahorseback 5 years ago Author

Qudsia , You are so right ,there can never be enough written of the sea! Hey , thats our job , let's get busy! You're turn!.......:-]


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ahorseback 5 years ago Author

Cardisa ! I wish I were there now , when I go there even my breath is revived . Lets go play in the tides!....:-}


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always exploring 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

Beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Aha The Elusive Sea

So many Treasures lie hidden beneath

The Magestic Beauty, swaying among the Coral Reef

Sunken Ships, full of memories, waiting, yet untold

Ahorseback they're waiting for their story to unfold

I know you will tell their story..........


Maggie-May 5 years ago

How lovely ahorseback,...MM


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ahorseback 5 years ago Author

Always Exploring , I actually wrote a poem of a sunken passenger ship in the St. Lawrence seaway , another one to finish! Be well dear friend.


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ahorseback 5 years ago Author

Hi Maggie May , and no picture for such a beautiful soul , where did it go?....:-}

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