If You Don’t Watch Out You May Become One Too (limerick)

When a bartender this one became

His friends thought it’s really a shame

But to change his mind

Which to crime resigned

Some time locked behind bars may tame


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bravewarrior 3 years ago from Central Florida

Let's hope so!


dreamseeker2 3 years ago

Interesting poem. Voted it up as it was cleverly done. : ) Sorry it took me awhile to get here Mhatter99.


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wetnosedogs 3 years ago from Alabama

Now you got dreamseeker2 on your side, you are in for a treat.


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drbj 3 years ago from south Florida

Sometimes, Martin, the bartenders' stories are even more interesting than those of their customers.


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Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

Yes, a little time, will surely tame most ...


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always exploring 3 years ago from Southern Illinois

Yes, a time in the hooskal might work..Funny Martin..


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Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Make it a double!


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vkwok 3 years ago from Hawaii

I wonder what he did.


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aviannovice 3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

And I was thinking about the "other" bar! Silly me.

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