Poem of a Broken Hearted


A glass fell down

Everything was broken

Its fill is wasted

A heart is tearing apart.

I fell down on my sit

I am so down

Thinking the thing of being betrayed

And dumped just by that.

If crying could just make me

But these cries are not enough

Still longing for you

My world is going to end.

I feel the anger

I feel the pain

It’s irrevocable

I want you back.

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lovedoctor926 4 years ago

I'm so sorry to hear. I didn't know that men suffered from broken hearts. I've had so many that I lost count! Lol. But I do understand, it does make you feel pretty lousy, now I'm sure that you want to hear something positive so I will tell you that it will get better with time. Don't stay home! Keep yourself busy, go out with your friends, play sports etc etc. And don't pick up the phone and call your friend in a moment of weakness. Now, if you do want her back, well then that's a different story. You guys might have to get together for coffee and talk and then see how you can get bring that spark again.thanks for sharing!

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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

the hurt when someone tears your heart is very painful. i saw my best guyfriends cried because of broken heart..

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xBlizz08 4 years ago from Laoag City, Philippines Author

Thanks for reading my poem lovedoctor and spy...I really appreciate your comments. It motivates me a lot. I never expect what happen, until yesterday, all are still well. But when I woke up this morning, there it went..it was just like...BOOM! I got a wrong message from him, must be intended to "him"!

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lifeoflata 4 years ago from Tacoma Wa

Very sad...i hope it'll work out for the best for you xblizz. Good poem

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xBlizz08 4 years ago from Laoag City, Philippines Author

thanks for the appreciation lifeoflata...im glad you like this one. Im hoping she will be happy with the other guy. I know this hurt feelings will be healed soon enough.

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snowdrops 4 years ago from The Second Star to the Right

this is very sad and no tears can pieced it back again once its broken.

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Mhatter99 4 years ago from San Francisco

nice work. welcome to the club. thank you

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xBlizz08 4 years ago from Laoag City, Philippines Author

@snowdrops, only time can tell, when they get fix. We just need to be strong and hold on with our life. thanks for the comment:)

@Mhatter99, thanks for stoppin', your welcome:)

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