I'm sorry - poetry contest

I love you so much, every moment we share. I’ll cherish it for ever.


I’m sorry I’m the reason why your heart is bleeding. If only I could turn back time


I’m sorry my past is the reason why you’re hurting your self badly.


I’m sorry every one hates you because of me.


I don’t know what to say to you, to make you feel okay.


I don’t think my love is enough to heal your wound.


There’s no word to explain how much I love you.


I try my best to make you feel okay, but I don’t think is enough for you to see it.


I try to make you laugh but your still crying.


I’m sorry because of me you lose your self.


I try to help you but you kept running away from me.


If only

If only my love

If only I could turn back the time. I will do it for you.


I know this is not easy for you but I want you to know that I’m right here behind you.


My love, my heart, and my soul will always be here for you.


If you need hands to drink, you can use mine. If you need eyes to see the light, you can use mine. If your legs are hurt, you can use mine. If you can’t breathe, I’ll breathe for you. If your heart stops beating, I’ll give you my heart.


I do everything to make you feel okay but I know this is not enough.


I want to help you, but I know no one can help you. Only you can pick up your self.


If letting you go, can help you to heal your wound, I will do that.


I ask god to help you, he just smile at me. I ask god to protect you, he just wink at me. I ask god to light your way, he just laugh at me. I ask god to love you, he said “he will be alright because your there to give everything to him.”



My inspiration writing this poem is my current relationship now. You know that every relationship have ups and down. Every relationship have problem, like mine to day. My relationship is under construction for 1 year and 6 months, but I had a feeling that he will left me soon because he can’t stand the pain. It’s hard to love someone when you know you’re the reason why his hurt. But I keep holding on, that he stay strong. I want to believe we can make it through the rain. And I know with god beside us we can make it through. If we place god center in our relationship I know there’s nothing possible. I hope every time, someone reads my poem, it’s give them courage to love some with all their heart. Because I think if you cannot give it all, you cannot call it love. I want to keep believing that one day everything will be okay. If you love some one don’t be afraid to love with all your heart.

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Derdriu 5 years ago

Mondkill: What a metrically insistent, linguistically persistent and analytically resistant poetic expression of love which may or may not survive the obstacles, one of which is self-defined by the poet herself! It is a valiant passion which subjects itself to self-analysis, but refuses to be determined by such introspection, because "it is better to have loved than not to have loved at all." Therein lies our destiny and our hope, individually and collectively.

Thank you, best wishes, voted up, etc.,

Derdriu


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Debby Bruck 5 years ago

Dear Mondkill ~ I hear the suffering, I feel the pain. Time heals all wounds. Look to the future, don't look behind. There is a light ahead. Blessings, Debby


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mondkill 5 years ago Author

@ Derdiru - You are correct about everything you said Derdiru, Thank you reading my poem..

Good luck..


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mondkill 5 years ago Author

@ Debby Bruck - yes time heals all wounds but we all is not easy. Thanks Debby...


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Debby Bruck 5 years ago

It's rough going while it is happening. I hope you have as much support as possible. Some tears do fall.


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you...

This is so heartfelt and well written. I feel the pain on every line. I hope the guy realize how you love him so much.


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Movie Master 5 years ago from United Kingdom

Oh mondkill, I am so sorry you are hurting and sad.

I felt the pain, this is so well written.

My best wishes MM


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mondkill 5 years ago Author

@ Debby Bruck - Sadly I'm all by my self...

Have a wonderful day...


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mondkill 5 years ago Author

Thanks for stopping by, I think he already know how much I love him is just that is not enough...


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mondkill 5 years ago Author

Hi MovieMaster, thanks for the comment. I really appreciate it! and don't worry I'm okay, love is not perfect.


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qlcoach 5 years ago from Cave Junction, Oregon

Thanks for following me. Yes to the power of Love and your faith in spirituality. But love doesn't remove the pain our partner feels. Everybody needs to find their own pathway to the balance between mind, body, and spirit. Sending you yellow butterflies and blue Light today. Peace...Gary.


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mondkill 5 years ago Author

Thanks for commenting, your comment is appreciate... Every body needs to find their own way, which road, how and decide where you want to go...

Have a sunny day...


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asmaiftikhar 5 years ago from Pakistan

Mondkill tht is a beautiful and full of meaning piece of writing.keep it up!


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mondkill 5 years ago Author

Thanks Asma,glad to see you...


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Frannie Dee 5 years ago from Chicago Northwest Suburb

Good work...hope your relationship survives.


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marcoujor 5 years ago from Jeffersonville PA

ONLY YOU CAN PICK UP YOURSELF...........

My dear,

I am really glad to have met you. You are hurting but you are like Dorothy in OZ. Click your heels three times and you are home. You have identified the answer to a very difficult subject at a very very early age. Always believe in your inherent strength, keep looking ahead and tomorrow will be here, as it is meant to be for YOU. I will come back and visit soon, mar.


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mondkill 5 years ago Author

Awww... thanks for your sweet comment marcoujor... Glad you mention Dorothy, I like OZ... And yes I'm young and strong to face the obstacle...


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mondkill 5 years ago Author

@ Frannie Dee - I Hope too..

Thanks and have a nice day..


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MartieCoetser 5 years ago from South Africa

mondkill - this is truly a heart-touching poem, and my heart goes out to you, because you give so much love without any rewards. After half a century on this planet, I have finally realized that the love between a man and a woman should not be a matter of give to each other and take from each other, but rather of living happily in the shine of each others love. You have a large aura of love. To be happy you need to connect with a man with the same aura as your own - to make your love a joy to experience. Men with smaller auras as your own, will be your children... outgrown... forever parasites sponging on you. Believe me, it is better to be alone in your own aura of love than having a parasite in your aura. God says: Love your neighbor (man) AS you love yourself and not MORE as yourself. In your shoes I would give this guy a kiss and a hug and send him back to his mommy, and I guess even she does not have the enormous amount of love he needs to become a mature adult able to shine a large aura of love. Sorry I am this rude and cruel, just know I had suffered 20 years with such a parasite in my life. They steal your love and leave you with nothing for yourself. Be wise!


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frogyfish 5 years ago from Central United States of America

Mondkill, your urgency, persistence, your pain is evident through all your expression. This is a time for growing and no matter what happens, you will! Keep loving, anyway.


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mondkill 5 years ago Author

@ MartieCoster - I understand you and it's okay If you speak your mind, we leave in a world of democracy. And I know you only speaking from your experience. I'm sorry to hear you suffer 20 years, and I know how it feels.

Thanks for the wonderful advice...

Best wishes...


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mondkill 5 years ago Author

@ frogyfish - Thanks, yes I will keep loving :)


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mckbirdbks 5 years ago from Emerald Wells, Just off the crossroads,Texas

The best analogy I have heard concerning this is the “Uneven Yoke”. When two beast of burden are put together at a task in a field, a yoke is placed over their necks. If one of the beast (us) is stronger, faster, mightier, the other beast will soon expire. Perfectly clear right. You have to be careful who you select as a partner for that yoke.


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mondkill 5 years ago Author

I totally agree to you mckbirdbks, we have to select the perfect partner or else nothing will happen. Thanks for the advice, I really appreciate it.


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cherylone 5 years ago from Connecticut

It is hard sometimes to be in love, especially when you are somehow causing pain to the one you love. Only you can make your life better and only they can make theirs better. If they stay, then they are happy somewhere in their lives. I hope it all works out for you soon.


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mondkill 5 years ago Author

@ cherylone-Yes it's hard when you know your the reason, why the love of your life is hurting. I hope and I want to believe things will be okay...


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Vinaya Ghimire 5 years ago from Nepal

Your emotions are beautiful because they come from your true feelings.


anonymous 5 years ago

well written poem .Pray and hope for the best things to happen. Be positive. With best wishes. Thanks for following me.


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mondkill 5 years ago Author

@ Vinaya Ghimire- Thanks, I like what you said :)


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mondkill 5 years ago Author

@ anonymous - thanks for the prayer for me, I really need that now... I try to stay positive every time..


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John Sarkis 4 years ago from Los Angeles, CA

Excellent poem, very powerful stuff!

John


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RealLee916 2 years ago from SACRAMENTO, CA

I HAPPEN TO BE GOING THROUGH A RELATIONSHIP WITH SOMEONE WHO HAPPENS TO BE A SOCIOPATH AND ALL THE YEARS I HAVE KNOWN THIS PERSON SHE WAS ONE OF THE BEST GIRLS TO HANG WITH.."AS FRIENDS" ONLY AS WE BECAME MORE AND MORE INTIMATE THAT'S WHEN THINGS BEGAN TO CHANGE LONG STORY SHORT I DON'T THINK YOU ARE THE REASON IF I UNDERSTOOD YOU RIGHT...BUT IF HE DOESN'T LOVE YOU HE DOESN'T LOVE YOU NO MATTER WHAT YOU SAY OR DO..BUT ASKING GOD IS AS GOOD AS YOU'LL GET IT..AND WHATEVER YOU FEEL IN YOUR HEART AFTER ASKING GOD FOR SOME KIND SIGN OR DIRECTION THEN THATS WHAT YOU DO...DO NOT GO THE OTHER WAY LIKE I DID SO MANY TIMES WITH THIS PERSON I WAS SPEAKING ABOUT..BECAUSE YOU WILL BECOME SADDER AND SADDER EVERY TIME YOU THINK IT'S GOING TO BE BETTER..I HOPE YOU UNDERSTAND WHAT I'AM TRYING TO SAY...TO ME YOUR POEM IS VERY SWEET AND FILLED WITH HONEST LOVE FOR THIS PERSON AND THEY DON'T SEE IT...

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