In A New Morning Sun.......

In a new morning sunlight the
curtain pulls slowly asside
As the delicacy of a womans hands
turn to the wonders outside

She stands at the edge of the curtain
her arms wrapped below her breast
Milk white arms encircling herself
the smallest of hands at rest

Fumbling to unlatch the glass doors
as a breeze lifts her silken gown
Looking one way and the other to be sure
no one hovers around

And lifting her small chin to the
early breeze she breaths in deep sighs
Opens her gown to the sun ........as light strokes
her beautiful thighs

The only eyes that watch are the ones
seeing through a dream
She drops the gown below her shoulders
an angel I have seen

There is nothing in natures world as the beauty
that shines from deep inside
And with such does the morning sun complete
changing the world inside

Breezes raise her gown even further
as I encircle her shoulders with my arms
And turn her back to our pillows
jealous of the sunlights charms












Comments 13 comments

jami l. pereira 5 years ago

Bravo! This piece had me engulfed in every move she made , all to find out it was a dream of your love that lay next to you ! Amazing! amazingly written and i voted up ,awesome and beautiful and will be sharing too ! :)


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Frank Atanacio 5 years ago from Shelton

this was wonderfully written up and awesome!


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Cardisa 5 years ago from Jamaica

Sooo possessive, jealous of the sunlight's charms!

This is so beautiful, I pictured myself in it.


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ahorseback 5 years ago Author

Hi JamiL. Pereira ! how are you ..... thank you ! Glad you liked!....:-}


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ahorseback 5 years ago Author

Hi JamiL. Pereira ! how are you ..... thank you ! Glad you liked!....:-}


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ahorseback 5 years ago Author

Frank A, Thank you sir, appreciating a nice vision ,thats all........lol..:-}


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ahorseback 5 years ago Author

Cardisa , Then this is for you and him! If it can't be me , just kidding sweet woman....lol...:-}


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Lady_E 5 years ago from London, UK

Mama Mia!!

Very Captivating read. :)


daddysgirl 5 years ago

Beautiful dad! Your in love with an angel dad!! Love and hugs always!


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ahorseback 5 years ago Author

Lady E. You are so kind .....and beautiful!.....thank you as always........:-}


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ahorseback 5 years ago Author

Daddys Girl , You know it ! Nothing better for such a man as I , A beautiful wife and Daughter! Blessed by both........oxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxooxoxooxo:-}


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QudsiaP1 5 years ago

Ever so delicate, delightful and beautiful!


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ahorseback 5 years ago Author

QudsiaPI, thank you so much , loved your last hub!....:-} Even though you forgot me !!!!...:-}

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