In Deep- a poem

Can you come to the River's edge?
Can you come to the River's edge? | Source

Deep in my socks are toes that can go...



Deep in my gloves are fingers pointing upward...



Deep in my hat is a mind that thinks deep thoughts

Taking me to places unknown...



Deep in my pockets are keys to my heart...





Deep in my heart is love waiting for

Someone worthy to accept it...


Deep in my soul is the Word that has saved me

Yes... I know how to swim...

The water is not

Too Deep.


copyright @2012 CMCastro

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Fennelseed 4 years ago from Australia

Deeply lovely!! I like this alot, I am just learning to swim and hoping the water doesn't get too deep too soon!!

My votes to you and sharing!


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always exploring 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

Very deep poem..Beautiful...


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SidKemp 4 years ago from Boca Raton, Florida (near Miami and Palm Beach)

I love "deep in my hat . . ." so original. Thank you for a poem that inspires hope in difficult times. Voted up.


Jesshubpages 4 years ago

every one is saying it's lovely! yes it is!


Hubert Williams 4 years ago

Very nice expression of your feelings. Loved the video.


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Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

Such a lovely poem. Voted up across the board. In His Love, Faith Reaper


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Vegas Elias 4 years ago from Mumbai

A short poem full of positiveness. St. Paul is my favorite. He takes lot of pains to explain deep topics to the common people.


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cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

yes, very nice. true feelings expressed. very good write


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Pamela99 4 years ago from United States

Very beautiful poem. Voted up.

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