In Love With Love That Doesn't Exist

I can see her anytime.

But night-time is best.

It’s the nightly visits,

That suggest I am blessed.

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So quietly, she slips,

In and out of my bed,

Becoming the loveliest figure,

Inside my head.

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My clouded visions,

Are permanently etched,

With distinct outlines,

Perfectly sketched.

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Her vision returns,

To persistently insist,

That her form and charm,

I can never resist.

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Overpoweringly suggestive,

She’s seductive, persuasive,

Explicitly expressive,

Consumptive, and submissive.

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Consistent fulfillment,

Ardent endearment…

She empowers me to be,

All and only what she isn’t.

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But her kiss is a kiss,

That is utter bliss,

Engulfing, captivating,

Impossible to dismiss.

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She’s so real to feel.

She’s so easily kissed.

I’m spell-bound to a love,

That doesn’t exist.

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~Micky Dee~

04-19-13

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Tom Rubenoff 3 years ago from United States

You are a rhyming field, Micky :) Voted up


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Theater girl 3 years ago from New Jersey

This has a nice flow to it. i enjoyed it very much.


Vincent Moore 3 years ago

How true your title is, love is fleeting and elusive like a butterly in flight. Nicely versed Micky and as always brilliantly shared.


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Nikkij504gurl 3 years ago from Louisiana

Literally, shes the girl of your dreams. Don't let this one go! lol Sometimes our imaginations can just run away with us it almost seems real, like Alice or Dorothy, created worlds of their own, and the question still remains..was it ever real?


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Hummingbird5356 3 years ago

Beautiful as always, Micky


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vocalcoach 3 years ago from Nashville Tn.

Micky - This is so beautiful! I adore your writing. You have such a gift for planting just the right word in the right place. Thank you dear man!


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dialogue 3 years ago

The title made me to read the hub. The writing is great, i felt like reading the same again, it is beautiful. Great work!


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prasetio30 3 years ago from malang-indonesia

Beautiful, uncle. I always love your poem. This is one of your best. Thanks for writing and sharing with us. Voted up!

Prasetio


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Fossillady 3 years ago from Saugatuck Michigan

Hey Micky you're so fine you blow my mind, hey Micky


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jhamann 3 years ago from Reno NV

Great poetry, thank you for sharing. Jamie


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MartieCoetser 3 years ago from South Africa

Beautiful!


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Dim Flaxenwick 3 years ago from Great Britain

Brilliant construction of a rhyming poem. Some of the words were pure genius.

The content was beautiful, though a little sad.

Super work, Micky.


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drpastorcarlotta 3 years ago from BREAKOUT MINISTRIES, INC. KC

NICE!!!!!!!! Voted-up! I have missed you! Been very busy counseling, but I am back! Come visit when you have a chance. God Bless you!!


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ocfireflies 3 years ago from North Carolina

Terrific poem from start to end. Voted Up Awesome!


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Brenda L Scully 3 years ago from Ireland

awwwww I so liked this ........


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Prisana 3 years ago from Thailand and Colorado

To a love that doesn't exist...is there one who does exist? Nice ebb and flow, she comes and goes...

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