In Love with a Dream

The moment he saw her

He fell head over heels

She was a dream walking

And her smile was as bright as the sun

She was what he thought of

From morning till night

And every day he looked for her smile

Then came the day

When she went away

He’d never thought

That he wouldn’t have the time

To tell her she was so fine

But then one day

It was over

And he couldn’t find

Her anywhere

His friends would tell him

That he had been in love with a dream

But every time he closed his eyes

He’d see her just beyond reach

He asked around

But no one knew

About the girl

Who he loved

And why she went away

It was the angels

Up in heaven

Who decided they had to be together

And so the girl who had turned his head

Had a dream

In which she saw a guy

That made her heart beat faster

She wondered who he was

And so it happened

That she remembered

Where she had seen him before

And went to visit her friend

Once more

This time his friends

Laughed no more

Especially when they saw

His dream walking

As real as bright as day

It was her smile

That made them sigh

And then she walked up

To the guy who

She had been dreaming about

The angels above

Rejoiced in their love

They fell and they fell hard that day

Love sure is the grandest thing of all

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billybuc 3 years ago from Olympia, WA

Love your choice of that song...and love your poetry. Well done once again, Rasma. This is how I felt the first time I saw Bev.

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thost 3 years ago from Dublin, Ireland

So romantic, well done Gypsy.

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Vickiw 3 years ago

Lovely description of falling in love with love!

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Sueswan 3 years ago

Hi Rasma,

"Love sure is the grandest thing of all " Then chocolate is a close second.

Voted up +++

Take care :)

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Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

Always the romantic one. Very lovely poem of love.

Voted up ++++ and sharing

God bless, Faith Reaper

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marcoujor 3 years ago from Jeffersonville PA

Lilting, lyrical and this, Rasma and the Beatles too!

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Deborah Brooks 3 years ago from Brownsville,TX

Rasma wow girlfriend I am impressed.. this is simply awesome poem I love it.. so good to see you dear one

blessings to you

voted up and sharing


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dghbrh 3 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

I liked this poem all through out....shared and votes way up:-)

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shofarcall 3 years ago

Lovely romantic poem. "falling" in love. And great choice of music. Always so good to hear the Beatles. They seem to have a song for every occasion! God Bless

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Mhatter99 3 years ago from San Francisco

Just like you, raking a dream to uncover a precious flower. thank you

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DDE 3 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

Love and dreams are just great hopes

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MrsBrownsParlour 3 years ago from Chicagoland, Illinois

Lovely love story! :-)

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ocfireflies 3 years ago from North Carolina

I love the feeling of dejavu found in this romantic poem. Beautifully crafted. Thumbs Up!

Best Always,


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Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia Author

Glad you enjoyed this Bill and what nice memories for you.

Glad you enjoyed this thost.

Glad you enjoyed this Vicki. When you fall you fall.

So true Sue chocolate certainly comes second to love.

Glad you enjoyed this Faith. Thanks for the vote and share. God bless.

Glad you enjoyed this and the Beatles Maria. Hugs.

Glad to hear from you my friend. Thanks for the vote and share. Hugs.

Glad you enjoyed this Deergha. Thanks for the vote and share.

Glad you enjoyed this and the Beatles shofarcall. They can certainly inspire. God bless.

Glad you enjoyed this Martin the pairing of dreams and memories can be wonderful.

One should never lose hope Devika. You never know where love can find you.

Glad you enjoyed this Lurana.

Glad you enjoyed this Kim and thanks for the vote.

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kashmir56 3 years ago from Massachusetts

Great video, love that reading your beautiful poem as well !

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Sunny River 3 years ago from A Place Without A Name which resides somewhere between Fantasy and Belief, just north of Reality

Lovely poem with a beautiful story. :)

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rajan jolly 3 years ago from From Mumbai, presently in Jalandhar,INDIA.

Love is a beautiful feeling and not being able to see the loved one makes the heart go sad. Lovely poem. Up and shared.

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Genna East 3 years ago from Massachusetts, USA

This is love at first sight, Rasma, and so beautifully expressed. And it does happen. Voted up and away. :-)

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Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia Author

Hope you're all having a sunny and relaxing Sunday.

Glad you enjoyed this and the video Kashmir.

Glad you enjoyed this Sunny.

Glad you enjoyed this Rajan and thanks for the vote and share.

Glad you enjoyed this Genna. Thanks for the vote.

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shanmarie 3 years ago from Texas

What a sweet tale, my friend!

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