In a Blur...

there are so many things

that I wanna do

sometimes I’m a fool

sometimes just so sure

the unexpected

the unpredictable

just don’t go away…


and I’m in a blur

baby, listen to me

there are so many things

that I wanna do

never thought I’d wake up

missin’ missin' you

never thought I’d stare out

wishin’ wishin’ you


so meet me outside

tonight gotta tell you

bits can no longer hide

no more can I deny this


and I’m in a blur

baby, listen to me

there’s nothin' much clear

than you and me

never thought I’d feel this

wantin' wantin' you

never thought I’d write this

thinkin' about you


there are so many things

that I wanna do

I’d like to do ‘em with you

so baby come to me

let’s kiss and gone in a blur


nothin’ else I wanna do

nothin’ else I wanna say

I’m in a blur

and nothing is much clear

now

it’s just me and you

listen to me when I say

I wanna be with you...



***about 3am, 31102009

on the road…going home



© 2009-10-31 b l a i s e


See my other poems...



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4 p.m.

Whoever You are

The Killer

You



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creativeone59 6 years ago from Gold Canyon, Arizona

Thanks for a very nice, cute and sweet hub. thanks for sharing. creativeone59


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

thank you creativeone ;p

it's nice to see you here again


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CiscoPixie 6 years ago from I'm in a world of my own, but aren't we all?

beautiful... absolutely beautiful... :)


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

it means a lot...thanks Ash... :)


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lancelonie 6 years ago

Your poem is awesome!!! :)


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

thanks lance ;p


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keira7 6 years ago

You are a very good writer. Thanks for sharing this beautiful poem. God Bless you:)


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

thank you Keira! you have a good heart..God bless ;p


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Dark Heart 6 years ago

What a captivating image-to be in a blur.

Is everything vague and indistinct. Unfocused?

Except fot that one part-that needle sharp burning.

I love the simplicity of this work and it's emotional

power. I can feel the desire in it.


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

yeah vague but so clear at the same time...

didn't use some deep words as I don't want anythin in a blur anymore LOL

thanks Dark Heart! ;p


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wolfpack5 6 years ago from Alberta Canada

Oh blaise, your a romantic very nice hub :)


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

thank you wolfpack! :)


ralwus 6 years ago

Not too fast though, take the time to enjoy. LOL One day you will be old and hopefully able to relive it all in your heart and mind. Romance/love is such a wonderful, destructive, life changing, challenging, and life building thing. Nice poem. CC


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

LOLOL thanks for the good insights Ralwus. I always concur in them :) Life is crazy beautiful, enjoy!


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Dim Flaxenwick 6 years ago from Great Britain

Don´t know how I missed this one before now. Beautiful. xx


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

Reading oldies is so good isn't it? :) Thanks Dim. XX


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Astra Nomik 6 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

More than amazing, you are a great poet. It oozes along, very natural, and easy. Oldie but Goldie, blaise. :)


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

haha my vintage poetry, I love em :) I sound like rapping here lol Thanks for the goldie comments :)


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Astra Nomik 6 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

I am being pursued slowly by Cassy through your hubs, have you noticed? She is following the hubs I have visited. I'm going to check hubs on hairy men, see can I throw her off my trail. LOL. Oh funny...


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

Yeah but I like seeing you both in my pages. You are deep and Cassy is straightforward. Sometimes, Cassy is deep and you're frank ;) LMAO you're so funny Cath! Hubs about hairy men? Seriously, are there? LOL Wow, chasing each other in Hubpages, how cute is that :)


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brandonfan 6 years ago from Mid West

I love this, sounds like it should be made into a lyric! Well done Blaise. :-)


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

Yeap it's lyrical poetry. It's so good to see you back here in HP and here in my pages Brands ;)


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Astra Nomik 6 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

We do that. We play games on each other. Ha. Don't mind us. Oh the hairy men, what the crapula was I thinking? Hahaha. I am embarrassed by that.

As for who is deepest? I think I am. LOL. (Frank = talks too much?) Maybe. xx


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

hahaha It's cute seeing you two chasing each other here. Hairy men LMAO i dunno what's gotten into you moi friend. LOL Everyone just turns deeper once in a while hey. Frank is NOT = to talking too much. Hmmm you just are honest and uncontrollable like me maybe? hahaha TC moi friend.


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niceandcool 5 years ago from Philippines

i really love to read all your ingenious thoughts... how i wish i could write superb stuff just like yours. :)


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you... Author

Hello again Ron! Superb?! Nah I just write...... :) XO


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Freya Cesare 5 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

Sweet, Blaise. Like always. I love the way you write your feeling in poem. Always sweet.

Becoming halloween girl? Which one is you in that avatar? In the middle? Cute one.


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you... Author

Oh thank you Freya :) hahaha Yup, I'm in the middle


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BeyondMax 4 years ago from Sydney, Australia

Yes, Fehl, I can confirm, I fell into your creative, captivating blur, it was amazing =)


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you... Author

Clearly, my Hubpages won't be amazing without reading from Maxi :) Happy weekend my friend! xoxo

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