Infatuation's Fire

Infatuation can be a tricky thing

Getting caught up

In it's sticky sweetness

Can be

Intoxicating

The dance of two lovers

Senses can be blurred

Immobilzing

Passion stung from the heart

Your mind raptures

In breathless harmony

You glow with fire

As if you were born again

Seduced by it's madness

Can be terrifying

Perfection saught

Can be a mirage

Be careful of what is

Really there

Many have become entangled

Within it's many folds

Losing their air




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NiaG 5 years ago from Louisville, KY

Love this! This poem expresses so much about infatuation. Great poem.


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Sky9106 5 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

Woo! Losing their air?

Following a mirage that's some web Caroline. It's very nice, sometimes following you leads to some deep places , but then that's where the real things happen.

Well done.

Bless


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brandasaur 5 years ago from Planet X

In this poem, I see that too much is strictly wrong when you love somebody. Everything should be enough only, not less and not too much!


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tom hellert 5 years ago from home

C21,

its poetry-I'd say its good .... It has a beat I can dance to. and yes the axiom put forth that love has to be just right not obsessive crazy or wheres your pulse...

well said. The fame that burns to hot exhausts itself of its own enthusiasm yet a flame that does not burn hot enough dies for lack of fuel.

TH


The Fastionista 5 years ago

Excellent poem, Caroline! It's perfect, comparing infatuation to fire - not only the passion and heat, but sometimes the danger, too. Voted up and awesome!


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carolinemd21 5 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

Nia G thank you for reading it and your compliments!


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carolinemd21 5 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

Sky thank you again for all your great comments. This poem is about losing oneself in infatuation which can be a good or bad thing depending on the situation. lol. We must first learn who the person really is before we fall in love. :)


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carolinemd21 5 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

Brandasaur thank you for stopping by! Yes everything even love should be in balance in order for it to work well.


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carolinemd21 5 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

Tom thank you for the compliment! Love this that you wrote. "The fame that burns to hot exhausts itself of its own enthusiasm yet a flame that does not burn hot enough dies for lack of fuel." - Gorgeous line.


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carolinemd21 5 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

The Fashionista thank you for your support and comments! Infatuation can be dangerous yet desirable!


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tom hellert 5 years ago from home

C21,

amazingly-it never worked to well with the ladies...

so if it these words can be used somewhere take it... just put a TH after the quote for it is an original-

TH


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carolinemd21 5 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

Tom LOL You should put it in a poem of yours when you decide to finally write one. I am sure it would be great.


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mathira 5 years ago from chennai

Good poem about infatuation which is so often confused with love.You really brought about the mood,carolinem21.


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mckbirdbks 5 years ago from Emerald Wells, Just off the crossroads,Texas

Very fiery piece. I personally would have changed the last line to: Losing their hair


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Nefarious_Misery 5 years ago from on the move

Very alluring piece you've got here. I think I'll read some more.

voted up


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carolinemd21 4 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

Mathira thank you for reading and commenting. Infatuation can be good or bad depending on the situation. Yes it can be confused with love.


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carolinemd21 4 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

Mckbirdbks LOL maybe I will add that line.


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carolinemd21 4 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

Nefarious thank you. You have some great poetry too.

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