Inside She Screams

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Thank you Lma on Flickr for this photo. http://www.flickr.com/photos/photoactive/3566917714/


I sit

Wait patiently

Primly


But inside she screams

Desperately craving

To be ravaged

The wild thing imprisoned there

A famished nymph with untamed hair


Unnoticed the fire flashes

Behind my hungry eyes

As savage scenes play

In the theater of my mind


I pull the scent of you deep into my lungs

And then salivate like some beast

Invited to a primal feast

And there you to take me

Roughly

Fingers buried in waiting flesh

As you devour me completely

repeatedly

with out apology


The spinning room slows

Reality reconvenes

I force a smooth exhale

Controlled

Composed


I sit

Wait patiently

Primly

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shamelabboush profile image

shamelabboush 7 years ago

A great depiction of a long supressed and passionate desire! I could hear the inner screams, thanks Randy.


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Randy Behavior 7 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

Wow, that was quick Shamel. I'll try and keep my.... err her voice down. ;)


JoJo08 7 years ago

Im not sure what to think of that, kinda freaked me out a little bit but made me think, I felt sadness, maybe fear..not sure


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dohn121 7 years ago from Hudson Valley, New York

Why am I sweating after reading this, Randy? Geez! You are one helluva writer, you know that?


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Cris A 7 years ago from Manila, Philippines

If only there's no need to keep it under control... this puts the OH in sO Hot!

My foreplay poem is among the related hubs - why is that? *wink*


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Randy Behavior 7 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

Wow JoJo, certainly didn't mean to scare you. lol! Its a little thing called lust. Mine has a little personality all her own I guess. :) Don't be frightened I keep a tight reign on her.


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Randy Behavior 7 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

Oh Dohn I do so love to make you sweat!!! And thank you.


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Randy Behavior 7 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

Hi Cris :) I'm kinda one of those water behind the damn girls. Ya damn well better know how to swim before you open it.

I think it is quite appropriate that Foreplay is in related hubs... it did give me my sultry send off to lustful poetry land. Remember?


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Cris A 7 years ago from Manila, Philippines

Yeah I remember! And we even started a trend, didn't we? We brought sexy back if I may say so. :D


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Randy Behavior 7 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

Did we Cris? Big (up to something) grin from me if we did. Now I just need Sandy to say "Fierce" so I can go to bed. :)


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Cris A 7 years ago from Manila, Philippines

while sandy's out of sight, would VICIOUS do?


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Randy Behavior 7 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

*Giggle* Haven't heard that in a while.... ya I think I can sleep on vicious. Thanks.


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I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s 7 years ago

wow this is smokin hot! :) A force to be reconned with!


poetlorraine 7 years ago

sooooooo passionate, run the bath, and soak a while, the two of you maybe


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Randy Behavior 7 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

Well thank you Invictus. It did get a little warm in here.

Yes Lorraine, a bath is always the perfect answer, no matter the question.


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Jess Killmenow 7 years ago from Nowheresville, Eastern United States

I may have to go for an EKG. :)


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Randy Behavior 7 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

Glad to have got your heart going Jess.


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James A Watkins 7 years ago from Chicago

My goodness! I think I my blood pressure just went up. I do love a prim lady. And a famished nymph? Well, it doesn't get much better than that. Outstanding poetry. Thanks for the pleasure.


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Randy Behavior 7 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

One can be both. I'm walking, talking proof. Thanks for coming by James. :)


Am I dead, yet? 7 years ago

Randy--you definitely can torment these men here! Now look, you have em all out there, tongues wagging--I told you that you are just freaking FIERCE!

Ha! I read the dialogue there between you and Cris (he is a cutie, isn't he?) Yes, fierce is your writing dear Randy--just so sensual as you are a woman. -superfreakinhugs-

I am kinda 'notmyself' nowadays--I am having an existential crisis at the moment. I hope to get better soon.


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Randy Behavior 7 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

Glad I didn't wait up for you Sandy, Geez!

My grandmother used to knit while she talked business. The idea being, part of her brain would be distracted by the work of knitting and it would free her mind to think creatively. Sometimes when we focus on a more logical task the creative juices flow more freely. Its almost as if we have two selfs. One will allow the other dead self to come alive again.

Not that I would personally know about having two selfs, I'm totally just talking theory here. -BiggerHugs-


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MellasViews 7 years ago from Earth

Oh la, la.... Randy...Dah'ling... I friggin loved it!


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Randy Behavior 7 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

Oh I'm glad Mella. I have a feeling you are not the type to keep your feelings, wants and desires bottled, though. Are you?


philip carey 61 7 years ago

Primal and gorgeous.


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Randy Behavior 7 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

Well thank you Phillip.


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MFB III 7 years ago from United States

Now you have me licking my own lips in a facsimile of the lips I would lick in stereo places...lol....how the atirst in me would dabble for long blissful minutes.... hours fingerpainting smiles....a man can dream..can't he/???~~~~~~~~~lol~~~MFB III


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Randy Behavior 7 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

Happy to have awakened your dreamer's mind MFB. Finger painting smiles, hmmmmm. :) :) :)


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Carson Creek 7 years ago

Randy, well done the page is a blaze with raw emotion. I can relate to the line,"I pull the scent of you deep into my lungs And then salivate like some beast." When all of our sensors are firing at once the experience become intense. This writing has some serious HEAT!


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Randy Behavior 7 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

Thanks Carson! Sometimes I feel like I'm a pressure cooker. Need to vent the steam. Poetry helps. ;)


ralwus 7 years ago

I could barely get beyond those toes in the photo. I feel ravaged somehow.


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Randy Behavior 7 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

Oh CC! Check out the toes in Intermingle.


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Christoph Reilly 7 years ago from St. Louis

I never knew you were a famished nymph. You have a skill for this hotness, and not just in your superlative poetry. ssssssssizzle!


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Randy Behavior 7 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

Some days, but some days I'm well fed. Speaking of sizzle, when is Victor coming out of moth balls?


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Christoph Reilly 7 years ago from St. Louis

Funny you should ask. The writer's group is starting an erotica workshop, and Victor is asking me if we can join. LOL


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Snake Eyes 7 years ago from Canada

I only have one word to say about this DAMMM


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Randy Behavior 7 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

Sometimes one word is enough. :)


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James McV Sailor 7 years ago from Northern California

Snake Eyes beat me with the one word routine, but really "nice". JM


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Randy Behavior 7 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

O.K. James, I guess I'll settle for "nice."


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crickette_w 6 years ago

Awsome RB, I am glad I found your sight. Very awesome!!!!


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Randy Behavior 6 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

Crickette I'm glad you found me too :)


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BenWritings 5 years ago from Save me from, Tennessee

Mmmm

You never cease to bring fire to my innermost animal

Dainty, yet devious

Fragile, yet furious

Beautiful, yet a beast

Eloquent, yet erotic

If only your words could lay here with me


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Randy Behavior 5 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

Print 'em out... then they could. :D


Doug Turner Jr. 5 years ago

Ha -- a typically Randy reply to Ben's comment.

You really know how to let down your veils and expose the raw, pulsating Id of your subconscious. This ability is more important than knowing the fundamentals of writing (which you are also very good at). Many artists would kill to have such access to their inner fears and desires. This one is savagely vivid.


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Randy Behavior 5 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

"Savagely vivid" I like that very much. I've never taken any poetry classes nor even read a book on it. So I'm sure I don't do it correctly at all.


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PabstPenrose 5 years ago from Dardenne Prairie , Missouri

This is the first I have read of yours after your feedback. This is pretty intense, but I guess I can say I can relate. -_- Great stuff!


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Randy Behavior 5 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

Thanks Brett, I'm glad you've decided to read me.


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Cardisa 5 years ago from Jamaica

OMG! You got fire!

Cardisa


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Randy Behavior 5 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

Yes but I keep it bound tight. :) Nice to meet you Cardisa.


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ahorseback 5 years ago

Randy , I though it was me that waited patiently? for everything to happen in love. All of the fire concealed inside , but women too? Excellent read.......


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Randy Behavior 5 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

Well I don't know about all women ahorseback, but this woman conceals much. Thanks for the comment.


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Izombiheartzoey 5 years ago

Hmm, thats what they say. The difference in Male and female Relation to freedom. In the cage the man fights his damnest to escape, but the woman oh no she fights to struggle in the cage.


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Randy Behavior 5 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

Interesting! You fight to get out while I fight to keep myself in? I believe it!


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Katharella 5 years ago from Lost in America

Hi RB! You know what really stinks about these feelings is, you can't let a man know until after you're married to him, because if you do, then you're not the girl he'd bring home to mother. It's really sad, because that pent up girl who is like the saying on the dirty back windshield of a car, the man is dissatisfied.. the saying "I wish my wife was this dirty" if you're that before you're married, you're not marrying material. Then by the time you find that man, you're too old to enjoy the fun woman you wanted to be. In my 30s I left my husband in search to be "that woman inside the cage" now I'm 52, and EVERYTHING HURTS.. in the mornings I walk like i'm 90. lol. But it's a sad reality. with my bf it was all fun, but he didn't want to take it to marriage. I guess a good thing cos I'm back with the guy I was with before I got married and someone needed to throw a bucket of water on us. We broke the sofa.. fell off the bed, never missing a beat (so to speak) but now we're like ugh.. TIRED, old, ::sigh::


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Randy Behavior 5 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

Thats hilarious. Marriage is NOT a goal for me and my BF doesn't have a mother so I'm safe there too. I guess I'm more afraid if I let myself go the guy might get incinerated. Its either that or my Catholic upbringing coming back to haunt me.


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Katharella 5 years ago from Lost in America

LOL RB, trust me, too many men have told me "men secrets" (tell and die)LOL so I'm telling you anyway. Forget the upbringing and inSINerate your lover! Only you can haunt you! :) See, I was right about the saying on the dirty window LOL! If you're shy, candles are great across the room, GET CRAZY girl!! Be the only thing he can think of! (Oh, and get rid of any family photos on your side as well as religious items that might hinder your animal instinct! lol) :) LET GO GIRL WHILE YOU'VE GOT YOUTH!! TRUST THIS OLDIE!!! :) If me and my bf break another sofa it'll be because we're old and fat now LOL!!!! haa.. :)


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Randy Behavior 5 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

I do feel youthful Katharella but that is not what the calendar says; I'm not that far behind you.

I am only shy when I am not completely brazen... Black panties with an angels face an old boyfriend used to say of me. Tired of playing angelic though. Check out the other me and you will see a poem more in line with my current idea of a "church service." :D


misz μεταμόρφωσις 5 years ago

she seems so passionately familiar.....


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Randy Behavior 5 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

Ah misz, you too?


misz μεταμόρφωσις 5 years ago

fiery brimstone within... yes.


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Katharella 5 years ago from Lost in America

Um, yes, I understand, Your shyness is just a veil, you'll shed it soon enough. I'm getting pushes for something entirely different, so I figure maybe I just don't want you to let things get too far away. I smashed a clock once, and it didn't stop time! :) lol As an artist, journalist wannabe, poet wanna be, I'm anxious to see stand up that I can't see in person! That's what living in the country does to a person :) (NOWHERE LIFE-but I do love it) :)


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Randy Behavior 5 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

Pushes for something entirely different? Thanks Katharella for all your encouragement. I truly appreciate it. Surely you have coffee shops?


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Katharella 5 years ago from Lost in America

In Greenville, a college town, it's about an hour away. Raleigh has more, bigger city, about 2 1/2 hours away. Oh, when I say I moved from Detroit to nowhere.. I mean, we have a small general store. A post office the size of most houses rooms. And a fire department that doubles as Town Hall LOL. Oh yeah, and a couple of churches. Some for whites, some for blacks. But don't take that wrong, our crime rate is zero. It's a choice of our people. We wave. We have no police department. It's not necessary. :) But if you came to one in a nearby city, I'd come to see you slam it like the poet I know you can be! :)


~L 5 years ago

Short and amazing.... Sometimes I wonder how I can say what my soul is feeling with less words. I wrote a poem that talks about the silent scream.... It just seems to long and not organized. I have enjoyed reading your work.


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Katharella 5 years ago from Lost in America

Didn't meant to let pushes question go unanswered! Um, I guess I was just saying everyone always wants me to do something other than what I want to do. I'm pushed, pulled, redirected, manipulated, teased, taunted, but pleased! My dad is the only real direction that was me.


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Randy Behavior 5 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

L, thank you so much. Poetry is literature under pressure.... can't remember who said that. Edit, edit, edit. Sometimes I over do it. You know when people go, "huh." :)


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Randy Behavior 5 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

So "K", what do these non-Dad people want to push you into? Raising chickens? Selling brushes? Doing nails? What, what, what?


Doug Turner Jr. 5 years ago

Primly, I enjoyed hearing this one out loud. If "good" girls have such thoughts swirling in their heads, there is no telling what the naughty ones have going on upstairs.


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Katharella 5 years ago from Lost in America

Sorry for delay! (got my house deed YaY)

Yeah, these non-Dad, and dad's that only own a name, not a "TITLE".. either they want to bring you down or they do want you raising chickens or shining shoes, or worse yet.. they JUST DON'T CARE.

a Dad can love you but possess you, manipulate and direct you, shun you, but still love you, never turn their back on you, but if they seen the you they don't want you to be, they are disappointed in you.

Only YOU, me, anyone, can be who we are, take it or leave it, just let a person be who they ARE, accept them or NOT but, as my friend said, "love me or hate me, you will never change me" I love her.

@Doug.. lots of "good girls" live a very unsatisfied life, and I'll tell you exactly WHY. I was married. Sex life was horrible to say the least. We HAD sex, but it was not satisfying for ME. So I rented a porn, and told my hubby, let's get something NEW in the mix, things need to change. Rather than doing that, he took the tape out (that I rented, yes, that "good girl rental") and he demanded I take it back, that I just wanted to look at other men. Very calmly I said "So, look at her boobs, they're up there unlike mine, I don't care, if you love me, you'll love ME, and give me what I crave and not embarrass me to never tell you anything again".. he made me take it back, and then I put a deadline on our marriage. Certain things were to change or I was leaving, when I realized I had to do that, it was time to go anyway. There's a naughty girl in every girl you see, some of them just don't let her out.. because of men like him!

Don't judge. Just don't. That's exactly why a girl, any girl, gets called a 'slut" if she has more than one man in a few months, but a guy is "a stud" if he's been around.. what a double standard!


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Randy Behavior 5 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

Hi Doug, in my pursuit of making myself uncomfortable I had to move on to the racier ones. I went out with a girlfriend the other night that I don't know very well. An hour into the night she turned to me and said, "And all this time I thought you were a good girl!" Lol.

Kath, I don't think Doug was judging. I'm guessing it was more a pleasant thought for him. Something along the lines of, "If low-fat ice cream tastes this good, I don't know if I could handle the full fat ice cream. :P


Doug Turner Jr. 5 years ago

Ha haha, Randy. Well put in your explanation to Katharella. You have me pegged.

And yes, Katharella, I understand your point entirely. Girls should be able to enjoy life and the pleasures that come with it -- (by that, I mean, sex) without being branded as whores and whatnot. Hip-hooray to both of you.


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Randy Behavior 5 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

Always the gentleman. Thank you for that.


mindlovemisery 5 years ago

I love the images you use. Stunning poem, I really love your style. Thank you so much for the nomination *hugs*


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Randy Behavior 5 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

Thanks for coming by mindlovemisery. I've been liking your stuff as well.


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Captain Spaceman 5 years ago from Manhattan Beach

I don't know what it is but your poetry just captures such visuals...It's like you put us in the room with you for just that moment. Very impressive


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Randy Behavior 5 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

Hmmm, guess that means I'm doing my job then. Thanks for coming by for a read Captain.


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QudsiaP1 5 years ago

This was ever so beautiful.


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Randy Behavior 5 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

Thanks QudsiaP1 :)


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Storytellersrus 5 years ago from Stepping past clutter

Sensuality in words. Beautifully done!


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Randy Behavior 5 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

Ah, thanks Storytellersrus.


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Minnetonka Twin 4 years ago from Minnesota

Wow Randy-I must go take a hot shower after that. LOL

Seriously good poetry my friend. I loved your metaphors and poetic words. If I were the gal in the poem, I wouldn't be patient for this kind of experience. Hee Hee


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Randy Behavior 4 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

I'm glad you approve MT :)


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cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

Randy, I'm falling in love

or is it lust

Because I keep going back to your hubs

something telling me I must


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Randy Behavior 4 years ago from Near the Ocean Author

Cleaner3 you are a flatterer!

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