Inspiration Of God

Every breath I take

brings life to the paragraph,

using math to add and subtract what I need.

I write with sun light, illuminating my thoughts

that grow magically

into a galaxy of words

drawn together by gravity.

A new reality forms,

born on paper

which in turn,

gave birth to marks of punctuation

for natural separation.

On different missions

but headed to the same destination.

I am the architect of your construction,

the painter of your picture.

You are the image

I am the creator

come fourth and meet your maker.







Copyright © 2011 Daunt'e Loper


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Mentalist acer 5 years ago from A Voice in your Mind!

A beautifully expansive praise Daunte.;)


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Daunte Loper 5 years ago from Detroit Michigan Author

Thank you acer, I'm glad you enjoyed it


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Fossillady 5 years ago from Saugatuck Michigan

Seriously, I have goosebumps! Thank you for starting my day with beautiful thoughts and a powerful message!


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Daunte Loper 5 years ago from Detroit Michigan Author

Thank you for the positive feedback Fossillady


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malonge 5 years ago from Western New York On Hubpages

I like your poems. Keep writing.


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Daunte Loper 5 years ago from Detroit Michigan Author

Thanks malonge


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DREAM ON 5 years ago

You opened up in a way I never thought of.Great work!!


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Nellieanna 5 years ago from TEXAS

Magnificent. You really are a rare poet. That's high praise. And I'm 'getting' the beat and feel of your special inspiration.


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Daunte Loper 5 years ago from Detroit Michigan Author

Thanks DREAM ON and Nellieanna, positive feedback inspires me.


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valeriebelew 5 years ago from Metro Atlanta, GA, USA

Rather interesting.


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Daunte Loper 5 years ago from Detroit Michigan Author

Thanks Valerie


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PegCole17 5 years ago from Dallas, Texas

Beautiful cadence and style. Especially loved the line "I write with sunlight illuminating my thoughts".


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Daunte Loper 5 years ago from Detroit Michigan Author

Thank you PegCole


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Joy56 5 years ago

I like that, i can almost imagine you sitting writing it..... lovely


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Daunte Loper 5 years ago from Detroit Michigan Author

Thank you Joy


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Lakshmi Murukesh 5 years ago from Kollam

Magical and you are truly blessed by the muse!


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Daunte Loper 5 years ago from Detroit Michigan Author

Thank you Lakshmi,I am honored by your comment


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tnderhrt23 5 years ago

"I am the architect of your construction,

the painter of your picture.

You are the image

I am the creator

come fourth and meet your maker."

This is powerful stuff, Daunte! Crazy as this may sound, I truly believe that God has communicated directly to me through my poetry. It's not a burning bush, and I don't Hear His voice, with my ear...but this strikes me as directly from the Throne...Perhaps that is the message of this poem, that He speaks through the words. I truly felt this!


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Daunte Loper 5 years ago from Detroit Michigan Author

Thank you tnderhrt:) I agree with you. Sometimes when i'm writing, I don't even have to put much thought into it. Like the pen is moving by itself.


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Sarah Writes 5 years ago from California

So very beautiful, with a perfect ending. Powerful and thought provoking.


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Daunte Loper 5 years ago from Detroit Michigan Author

Thank you Sarah


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mindyjgirl 5 years ago from Cottage Grove, Oregon

Beautiful!


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Daunte Loper 5 years ago from Detroit Michigan Author

Thanks mindyjgirl


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Norma Budden 5 years ago from Nunavut, Canada

Daunte, this is another exceptional poem. I browsed through some of the comments and, honestly, most times I feel I am not the one writing - merely the instrument which is being used at the moment.


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Daunte Loper 5 years ago from Detroit Michigan Author

Thank you Norma

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