Is it Gone - A Love Story

Is it gone? A Short Love Story
Is it gone? A Short Love Story

Today, they had a class together in college. She was writing with a pen that used to close by pressing the head. She wrote as the lecture progressed and thought for a while, “What is he thinking about me or does he even know that I am here? She thought and accidentally brushed the pen on her cheek. She asked from the boy in front of him, ‘Is it there?

The boy said nothing; she tried to rub it with her soft fingers and asked, ‘Is it gone?’ He still said nothing, but his eyes smiled a little. She rubbed it more and more, and in the processes of trying to get rid of the mark, her cheek reddened. She kept asking from the boy, ‘Is it gone?’

When he couldn’t bear it, he caught the hand of that girl, which was responsible for the crime, she asked again, ‘Is it gone?’ The boy nodded in reply, saying no. she asked, ‘What?’

The boy gestured in the direction of pen, it was closed. She smiled and both of them laughed (with a little embarrassment) at what she was doing when nothing had happened.

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tillsontitan 4 years ago from New York

A cute little story that most people can probably relate to. How many times do we do something like this? Voted up.


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kksonakiya 5 years ago from Gwalior Author

Sure thing Clairpeek. You too man.


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Clairepeek 5 years ago

Looking forward to the announcement of another short story ;-) Meanwhile, take care.


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kksonakiya 5 years ago from Gwalior Author

You sure know hw to raise the hopes high Clairepeek. I am glad that you liked it. I will be writing a couple of short stories pretty soon. When I publish it, I'll let you know. :)


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Clairepeek 5 years ago

I liked that one too... a kind and simple one to which anyone can relate... I like your story telling, it is like a whisper coming from the dim and drawing your characters very softly. At the end of the story, I could see both characters clearly with a big smile on their faces...

I agree, more short stories please ^_^


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kksonakiya 5 years ago from Gwalior Author

Thanks guys. I'll keep these coming.


Jamesb0nd 5 years ago

hey dude,

it is really heart-touching with a good narration.

Post some more like that this one is really wonderfull.


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shailudhakad 5 years ago from GWALIOR,M.P.,INDIA

what was she asking for?or just she was trying to crack a joke.

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