Is this Love? (a poem)

The first time you went away

was a surprise

the deepest hurt

forever in my mind.


Next time

was expected

par for course

no reason to notice.


Wrapped in yourself

you failed to notice

my attachment weaken.


Sweetest words afterwards

never to replace

your cruelest act of silence.

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always exploring 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

My feelings exactly. Well done!! Thank you.


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truthfornow 5 years ago from New Orleans, LA Author

Thanks always exploring for reading my poem.


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kittythedreamer 5 years ago from the Ether

Voted up and interesting. Beautiful yet seemingly sad words. Very intriguing. Keep writing poetry!


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Au fait 3 years ago from North Texas

Well said. For some reason it's hard to accept the truth sometimes and move on.


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truthfornow 3 years ago from New Orleans, LA Author

Thanks Au fait.

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