Isn't This A Beautiful Life?

I feel the rain drops on my skin

I need them

just like I need the sun


I hear a door that opens

I hear it close

A little voice is screaming

come on, let's play”

and I hear footsteps

from four small feet

running on the ground


I see these barefoot children

playing and laughing

and there I see a wet nose

oh, it's the cat again

looking for some entertainment

lika an innocent mouse

he can play with for a while


I'm blooming right now

I can see all the things around me

this beautiful summer day

because I am a flower

in a garden full of life


I am a flower until I fade away

and the voices

the footsteps

the laughter

and a cat's wet nose

no longer exist in my world


I will move on when the summer is gone

but right now I'm blooming

and enjoying my life


Isn't this a beautiful life in a beautiful world?

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billybuc 3 years ago from Olympia, WA

The beauty of life seen through the eyes of a flower....only a poet could write that, and you, Made, are a poet.

I love the different angle you took in relating how beautiful life is. Well done my dear friend.


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AudreyHowitt 3 years ago from California

Ah! Beautiful write!!


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Made 3 years ago from Finland Author

Bill, thank you. I am a poet? Wait a minute. I have to think about it. LOL!


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Made 3 years ago from Finland Author

Thank you Audrey Howitt and goodnight from Finland.


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Sunshine625 3 years ago from Orlando, FL

Come out, come out, where ever you are.

Barefoot children laughing and playing makes me want to play too! :)


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Pamela99 3 years ago from United States

This poem is beautifully written and from the eyes of a flower is truly unique.


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old albion 3 years ago from Lancashire. England.

Hi Made. So uplifting and from such an unusual angle. Thank goodness for the flowers.

Graham.


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Made 3 years ago from Finland Author

Hi Sunshine, what a freedom to go out for some barefoot playing. Thank you! :)


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Made 3 years ago from Finland Author

Pamela, I got the inspiration from the picture. If a rose/flower is that beautiful it needs a beautiful life.


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Made 3 years ago from Finland Author

Graham, she has a pretty good life that little flower. Thank you!


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DDE 3 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

Sounds a lovely experience, rain and barefoot such a fun time


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bravewarrior 3 years ago from Central Florida

What a beautiful perspective, Made. If only flowers could talk!


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Made 3 years ago from Finland Author

Hi DDE, summer is so much fun and sun!


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Made 3 years ago from Finland Author

Hi bravewarrior, I'm sure they would have much to say to us. :)


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tobusiness 3 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

Simply wonderful...all that is best about Summer, beautifully written.


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Made 3 years ago from Finland Author

tobusiness, I'm glad you liked it. Thank you!


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midget38 3 years ago from Singapore

We should always cherish the moment. Thanks for sharing!!!


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Made 3 years ago from Finland Author

midget38, that is very important. Thank you for stopping by.


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Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Voted up and beautiful. Everything is now most lovely that the summer is here.


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Made 3 years ago from Finland Author

Thank you Gypsy Rose Lee, summertime is great!


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poetforlife 3 years ago from Dallas, Texas.

Wow. What a beautiful poem and a great way to embrace summer. The flower is pretty too.


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Made 3 years ago from Finland Author

Thank you poetforlife. Summer is a beautiful season.


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Thelma Alberts 3 years ago from Germany

Beautiful! Thanks for sharing.


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W1totalk 3 years ago

Sweet observation. Sweet poem. Thank you.


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Made 3 years ago from Finland Author

Thank you Thelma Alberts!!!


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Made 3 years ago from Finland Author

W1totalk, I'm glad you liked it, thanks.


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janshares 3 years ago from Washington, DC

A poetic view from a flower's perspective, delivered so well. (sigh) Voted up and beautiful.


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Made 3 years ago from Finland Author

Hi janshares, I'm glad you liked it. Thank you!

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