It Is When You laugh - A Poem

San Antonio River Walk

A poem From 1983

 

It is when you laugh

I love you most

Your head thrown back

Green eyes shining

No

It has got to be your eyes

When you are happy

That is when I love you most

The sparkle in your eyes

When you smile

No

It has to be your smile

That happy smile

When you laugh and

Your eyes shine and

And your laughter fills

My heart

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Just Ask Susan 5 years ago from Ontario, Canada

Very beautiful Poem!


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Darknlovely3436 5 years ago from NewYork

Profound love the poem

thank for sharing


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kennynext 5 years ago from Everywhere

It is all of you, that is the answer. Great poem.


ralwus 6 years ago

lovely strawberry sentiments. yes


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Minnetonka Twin 6 years ago from Minnesota

What a beautiful poem and tribute to your wife. I hope she saw this masterpiece. Hee! Had to rate up, awesome and beautiful.


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2uesday 6 years ago from - on the web, I am 2uesday.

I loved this poem, it made me think we should take time to notice such things about the special people in our lives. Thank you.


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Tamarii2 6 years ago from NEW YORK

Enjoyed your poem.Thanks for being a fan.


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kari olfert 6 years ago

Beautiful poem!


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GNelson 6 years ago from Florida Author

JJ,

Thank you for reading my poem.

And the nice feedback.

Gary


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GNelson 6 years ago from Florida Author

Peggy,

I am a lucky guy!

Thanks for the comment.

Gary


JJ (pachuca213) 6 years ago

This was beautiful!


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Peggy W 6 years ago from Houston, Texas

Oh.......you have so many reasons to love her! Those and probably many, many more.

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