It's Hard to Say Goodbye; Dear Friend

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Can't look upon the lifeless shell

Can't look upon the lifeless shell

This chrysalis from which you fly

Can't look upon your grave and cry


No mournful dirge, you did not die

Like passing clouds we'll say farewell

Can't look upon the lifeless shell



The sun that brightens up the gloom

Your smile, a summer rose in bloom

Can't look upon your grave and cry



Our hearts won't say the last goodbye

Say it's not true, it's just a lie

Can't look upon the lifeless shell


Bring back the shocked numbed disbelief

Before the squall of pain and grief

Can't look upon your grave and cry


Inside we rage, this isn't fair

That life goes on though you're not here

Can't look upon the lifeless shell

Can't look upon your grave and cry





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tobusiness 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K Author

Your Cousin, very nice to see you, it is very hard to look upon the shell of those we care about and know that they are truly gone. Thank you for stopping by, the visit and comment are very much appreciated.


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tobusiness 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K Author

Michelle, thanks for popping round, much appreciated.


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Your Cousins 4 years ago from Atlanta, GA

Thought about my Big Mama when I read your poem. I'm not into funerals so when I looked upon her "lifeless shell," she just wasn't there. It is hard to say good-bye. Voted Up.


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midget38 4 years ago from Singapore

Jo, thanks for the great write. We all fear death, no matter how much we may say we don't. It's even worse to see it occur to our loved ones. Thanks for sharing, and I share as well!


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tobusiness 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K Author

Katrine, Thank you so much for stopping by. You are so right, move on we must It's tough to lose a friend but tougher still for the families who are left behind.


KatrineDM 4 years ago

A beautiful but sad poem. Although we all know life goes on, we must move on, it's not easy. It needs time.


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tobusiness 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K Author

Debbie, it is very sad but like you said, we have to say goodbye, we must let go and allow them continue their journey, as we must continue ours.

Thank you for stopping bye.

My best to you.


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Deborah Brooks 4 years ago from Brownsville,TX

Oh so beautiful my friend and sad. I know how you feel.. it is such a shock to see them laying there just a shell like you said.. it's just hard to believe. you don't want to say goodbye but you have to.

voted up and sharing

Debbie


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tobusiness 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K Author

Suzettenaples, many thanks for the visit and comment, much appreciated.

Best wishes to you


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tobusiness 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K Author

Shimmering Dawn, You're so very kind and generous thank you for such a lovely thought, hugs right back and my best wishes to you.


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suzettenaples 4 years ago from Taos, NM

Lovely poem. I can feel the emotions. I like that you feel them in the breeze and in the sunshine etc. So they are not completely gone. We feel them in a different way. Very beautiful thoughts of someone who has passed on.


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tobusiness 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K Author

Jennifer, thank you so much for the visit and comment, very much appreciated. best wishes.


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tobusiness 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K Author

Unknown, thank you for the visit and comment, You are so right, good bye is indeed the saddest word. take care now.


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shimmering Dawn 4 years ago

Your love shines trough this powerful poem. ((((hugs ))))) to you I know what it is to lose a friend... I wish I could share your pain. Take care.


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tobusiness 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K Author

PHILLYDREAMER, sorry for the multiple choice links on you page I had a little difficulty placing it. Yes death seems so final, unless of course you're a person of strong religious faith. many thanks for the visit and comment. Best wishes.


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PHILLYDREAMER 4 years ago from Lodi, New Jersey

It's hard to deal with the fact that someone you love is gone. I think I'd prefer if I never had to go through this, but I know it's something we all must do.


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

wonderful Jo. i think goodbye is the saddest word in the english language..it's really hard to utter those words to someone you cherished the most.


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Jennifer Stone 4 years ago from the Riverbank, England

I think you have done a wonderful job of making the reader really feel the grief you describe, Great poem! Voting up and stuff, Jen


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tobusiness 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K Author

Ruchira, you are so right, on some level we know it's inevitable but still hard to accept. Thank you for taking a look at this, I do appreciate it.


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Ruchira 4 years ago from United States

Goodbyes are tough to bid, my friend!

but, what comes has to depart thus, with a heavy heart we do the needful.

voted up as beautiful.


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tobusiness 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K Author

harliquinn, many thanks for the visit and lovely comment, very much appreciated.

My best wishes to you


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harliquinn 4 years ago

Beautiful poem. I liked the rhythm and repetition, it really added to the poem as a whole. The loss of someone we love is never easy to get over or let go of. I think you captured this struggle very well.


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tobusiness 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K Author

Gotabegod, thank you so much for the visit and comment, it's always good to know others feel the same.

Bless


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Gottabegod 4 years ago from Southern USA

such heartfelt words of grief and sadness - beautifully done! You have put expression to the feelings I have felt. Thank you!

God bless!


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tobusiness 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K Author

Max

Lesley

Thank you so much for the support and encouragement

It's good to know you like the poem.

Bless you, and all my best wishes


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Movie Master 4 years ago from United Kingdom

Your words struck a chord....

An incredible piece of writing, thank you and voted up


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BeyondMax 4 years ago from Sydney, Australia

Such a sad, heartfelt, emotional poem, Jo! It's a tough job to go through the hard times, Hugs!


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tobusiness 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K Author

Myownlife, you are right, death is the one certainty in life, but when it is sudden and unexpected, it is just that much harder to come to terms with.

Thank you for the visit and kind comment, very much appreciated.

My best wishes to you.


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myownlife 4 years ago from london

Fantastic writing, yes this is immensely hard to say though we can't avoid nature.

God bless


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tobusiness 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K Author

Mhatter99, I don't know about the funerals but you certainly know your poetry.

Always nice to see you, my best to you.


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Mhatter99 4 years ago from San Francisco

great twist on a villanelle. Very creative. I was very good at funerals. so good the masons had me perform 247 of them since 1999.


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tobusiness 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K Author

Frank, thank you for being so generous, it means a lot.


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tobusiness 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K Author

Hi Jo, many thanks for the kind words, it's very much appreciated.


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Jo_Goldsmith11 4 years ago

A very beautiful poem. Sometimes the heart can say things better than we give it credit for. Voted up and shared :)


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Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton

tobusiness you just blew me away.. I loved it!!!!


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tobusiness 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K Author

Thank you Angel, very much appreciated.


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Angelme566 4 years ago

This is sad but beautifully written. Hard to lost a loved ones .

Voted ..


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tobusiness 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K Author

Thank you Billy, it is so very hard trying to put our feelings and emotions into words at a time like this, bless you for understanding.


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billybuc 4 years ago from Olympia, WA

Beautiful piece of writing about such a painful subject. You have captured the feelings and emotions well here.

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