It's Moving

It's Moving

A stranger is moving on the outside
There are no more walls
Only clouds in darkness
Looming overhead
I feel the calm touch of my short war condemned...

It's Moving

Some worthless thought stirs inside
A light flickers out
A candle in the darkness
The only clear way out of all this madness
What more could I have said...

The thunder from the rocks
It burns like you wouldn't know
Rambling aimlessly Southward in a daze of forgotten hopes
That Sinister feelings about again
The Sun won't shine in time to save this soul
To save this soul...

From Moving

From Moving the way the stranger came
I'm Moving
Moving away...

It's Moving

I hear lightning striking very close to my body
Strange days are upon me
Upon my body
I'm moving away
I'm gone to far from the astray
I'm moving onto other ways to stay
Another time, Another place...

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dotty1 6 years ago from In my world

i am loving this .... :-)


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blake4d 6 years ago from Now Rising Out of Phoenix Arizona Earthlings Author

Thanx so much Dotty, this is very early in my years of writing. And maybe the first piece I actually caught the emotion and the mood I imagined. Pretty Groovy huh?


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Moulik Mistry 6 years ago from Burdwan, West Bengal, India

It just moves me, you are so good as a poet...


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blake4d 6 years ago from Now Rising Out of Phoenix Arizona Earthlings Author

Thanx so very much MM...everyone is so supportive of my work on the hub, I am double and triple blessed. =)


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thevoice 6 years ago from carthage ill

great poem well read thanks


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blake4d 6 years ago from Now Rising Out of Phoenix Arizona Earthlings Author

You are no April Fool my poetic reader and friendly webster.

Thanx to you as well.


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Lady_E 6 years ago from London, UK

Nice deep Poem - Thanks for sharing.


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blake4d 6 years ago from Now Rising Out of Phoenix Arizona Earthlings Author

Thanx to you as well MiLady_E


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MFB III 6 years ago from United States

Still waters run deep, even in one's soul, far too often we are moving away from our ordinary lives, even while we are still sitting in a recliner, clutching something remote.

A vast world whispers in everyone's ears, we are all flying dutchman marooned in Anytown U.S.A. longing for the highway, the my way, that trip we have yet to take. One can travel in their writing, it is my method of escape, I enter the long lines and move toward a satisfactory finish, but it is the journey of words that is the rush from the norm. Someday I will become a poem, written in long squiggles of black tread across the asphalt to my completion, I will seek what

my life has denied me, abandoning my faith in man to become a man of faith who chronicles what's really out there to discover. In some thatched hut on Easter island communing with the stone heads, or in the back room of a fish market in Cambodia, or right here on some unclimbed southwest mesa I will embrace the stranger and make it my friend.

Superb write~~~MFB III


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lalesu 6 years ago from south of the Mason-Dixon

Dear Poet, These days I find myself moving away and being moved away from so many things. I feel your strange days and looming clouds, but I hope for all of us the sun will shine in time.


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blake4d 6 years ago from Now Rising Out of Phoenix Arizona Earthlings Author

Thanx for your support and all of you

Keep on Hubbing...

Blake4d


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DarkDisOrder 6 years ago from B.A.D. (Beyond All Dimensions)

An interesting piece, well done...


dreamreachout 5 years ago

Lovely lyrics, lovely thoughts that moves us!!

Cheers!!


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blake4d 5 years ago from Now Rising Out of Phoenix Arizona Earthlings Author

Thank you DD and DR. Keep on Hubbing. Blake4d

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