It's my Life Story

My life

 

 

Life is too short to hate

But still I keep on hating

People come closer and gone away

But still I am waiting

 

Why hating and why waiting

Nobody knows

But this is the way

That make my life slows

 

Wanna come out from this trouble

But not getting those hand

That give me relief and

Be my friend

 

People say

Life is easy so keep on smiling

But how would I tell

It’s difficult and trembling

 

Sometimes I feel

What is the fear?

There are so many

Who take my care

 

Some make me laugh

Some make me cry

Some make me learn

That keeps on try

 

Some force to do

What I don’t like

I just wanna tell that

It’s my Life.....

Comments 16 comments

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pooja0908 6 years ago from Delhi Author

Its my first poem

so give your views

how did i do


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skyfire 6 years ago

Whoa.. pooja good first attempt there, keep on writing :)


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pooja0908 6 years ago from Delhi Author

you are first one who are encouraging me

Thanks a lot


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ShallyD 6 years ago from USA

Awesome ..your first attempt and such a good one...keep writing looking more of such kind..


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pooja0908 6 years ago from Delhi Author

Thanks shally

i was waiting foe your comment


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ShallyD 6 years ago from USA

my pleasure...well when I would be able to see the second one...


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pooja0908 6 years ago from Delhi Author

When i would be able to write second one


James 6 years ago

wow your first attempt is really cool. Are you not a poetess?

I cant believe it. You should keep on writing. Really nice one


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Hokey 6 years ago from In the energy.

I like this. Thanks for sharing.


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pooja0908 6 years ago from Delhi Author

thanks to you for giving your precious time for my poem


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Moulik Mistry 6 years ago from Burdwan, West Bengal, India

We are all stranger in this life - it is not that life is strange or not, very well written...


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pooja0908 6 years ago from Delhi Author

yes mistry i also dont want to include strange but that was not allowed. someone had already used that. Thats why.


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cupid51 6 years ago from INDIA

"Life is too short to hate" Yes that is the core of our philosophical knowledge - "Life is too short to hate, to love, to live and everything". A great poem. Thanks pooja for sharing this.


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pooja0908 6 years ago from Delhi Author

Thanks cupid


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Mountee 6 years ago from india

your poem inspired me to write abt my life....

frankly saying .................................your poem ..is much silent ...but rocking...cheers...........


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MyValentine 6 years ago

Great job!... about to read your second one!

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