It’s Beating (poem)

It’s beating

It’s beating

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Occasion repeating

A gaze then a meeting

It’s beating

It’s beating

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His mind is unseating

As she waits his greeting

A scent in the air

Entrances this pair

It’s beating

It’s beating

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He feel his chance fleeting

A thought she’s repeating

He’s caught in her stare

As words meet the air

Then there in their eyes

They both realize

It’s beating

It’s beating

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Soft thoughts now entreating

This shared wish completing

That all future’s fare

Be found in their stare

But could she surmise

This wish in his eyes

And as time had planned

So she took his hand

It’s beating

It’s beating

Music only

Comments 17 comments

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Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

Mh, the manner in which this is written, while reading, one's heart does start beating every faster, catching up with the words. Very lovely music and video.

Vote up and up and sharing everywhere

God bless. In His Love, Faith Reaper


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ashleeosborn 4 years ago

so great flow to your writing, and such a lovely poem. Two thumbs up from me.


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Minnetonka Twin 4 years ago from Minnesota

Lovely style of writing-hit lots of buttons and voted up :-)


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btrbell 4 years ago from Mesa, AZ

Up and awesome ! So easy to get caught up in the frenzy! Thank you!


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lrc7815 4 years ago from Central Virginia

Oh, this is a good one. I like the flow and feel of anticipation a lot.


Janhorner 4 years ago

Some wonderful lines in this poem and the image is brilliant. Voted up,

Jan


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Amy Becherer 4 years ago from St. Louis, MO

"He's caught in her stare, As words meet the air"...sublimely poetic, Mhatter. I love it!


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aviannovice 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

And the beat goes on...


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Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

Brillaint as always Mhatter and another gem to vote up and share

Enjoy your day.

Eddy.


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jhamann 4 years ago from Reno NV

I can feel the beat as I read, well written. Thank you. Jamie


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tammyswallow 4 years ago from North Carolina

Your cadence is perfect... your poem is like a dance. Very well done!


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Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Voted up and beautiful. Got me into the rhythm for sure.


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shiningirisheyes 4 years ago from Upstate, New York

Sublime and beautiful. Wonderful use of stanza as well.


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krsharp05 4 years ago from 18th and Vine

Well spoken. Love the photo. I think this is what I felt like the first time I saw my husband....wash dishes. :)


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coffeegginmyrice 4 years ago from Toronto, Ontario

I am at awe with your poems, Mhatter. So lovely. It's beating inside me.


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Jools99 3 years ago from North-East UK

Wonderful poem :o)


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DDE 3 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

Good poetry and yes beating and beating as he gets closer

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