It’s Moments (poem)

It’s beating it’s beating

It’s message repeating

The moments are fleeting

A fact so unseating

That from it retreating

It’s beating it’s beating

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But faced with the meeting

Its beating its beating

Ourselves we’re competing

Our grace waits completing

As seconds depleting

It’s beating it’s beating

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Just what are we cheating

Retreating defeating

When dreams await greeting

And passions are heating

A question entreating

It’s beating it’s beating

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The moments are fleeting

It’s beating it’s beating

Its warning repeating

It’s beating it’s beating

And what are we cheating

It’s beating it’s beating

It’s beating it’s beating

It’s beating


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xstatic 3 years ago from Eugene, Oregon

What great rythm and percussion witht the words when combined with that beat! Great!


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Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

Makes one's heart beat faster and faster! Lovely music.

Voted up +++ sharing.

God bless. In His Love, Faith Reaper


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lrc7815 3 years ago from Central Virginia

You know that I'm not a poet and I understand so little of the tehnique. But, I know what I like and this was was great. I love the rythm and rhyme and when the pace picked up I felt the anticipation building. This one was really lovely MH.


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DDE 3 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

The heart goes on through all times thanks for this poem.


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Rosemay50 3 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand

Love the rythm of this poem, love the music too.


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aviannovice 3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

I like this, because no matter what happens, the heart continues to beat...


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always exploring 3 years ago from Southern Illinois

And the beat goes on and on and on. Beautiful! The video rhythm completes this piece. Thank you...


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Eiddwen 3 years ago from Wales

Once again you create a gem .

Have a wonderful wekend my friend.

Eddy.


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teaches12345 3 years ago

The heart is what keeps us going and as long as we hear the beat all is fine. Very well said and lovely.


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Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

And my heart beats in refrain...


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Olde Cashmere 3 years ago from Michigan, United States

One of your finest works Mhatter, really enjoyed this. Voting up and rating beautiful and interesting.


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jhamann 3 years ago from Reno NV

-ing is hard to work with, but it is an incredible way to speed the beat to a frantic tempo. Jamie


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picklesandrufus 3 years ago from Virginia Beach, Va

Oh how smoothly this poem flowed. Great work!!


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nighthag 3 years ago from Australia

You could almost dance to the rhythm that pours out of this poem, a marvellous work of art that captures not just the heart but the imagination

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