Jaw-Dropping Beauty (limerick)

My jaw really did hit the floor

When this beauty walked through the door

Mid stars by the scores

Mind this thought explores

Don’t stand by closed doors anymore


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kj force 3 years ago from Florida

Mhatter99...Walking through doors ??? better she walk through the walls ???

loved your twist...


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lrc7815 3 years ago from Central Virginia

Dreaming again I see. lol


Beth37 3 years ago

I think she was looking for her clothes.


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travmaj 3 years ago from australia

Have a black eye? - worth it?


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wayne barrett 3 years ago from Clearwater Florida

Lol. Great one!


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Vinaya Ghimire 3 years ago from Nepal

Don't get into this too much. LOL


Beth37 3 years ago

I think Mhatter would like very much to get into it.


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Amy Becherer 3 years ago from St. Louis, MO

We must all be careful what we wish for!


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KoffeeKlatch Gals 3 years ago from Sunny Florida

I hope it didn't knock you completely out.


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always exploring 3 years ago from Southern Illinois

Daydreaming again? LOL


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aviannovice 3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

Yep, it'll sure hit ya on the way out!


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Deborah Brooks 3 years ago from Brownsville,TX

wow Martin.. lol she is a knockout.. like ruby said daydreaming? lol

blessings

Debbie


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Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Oh, yeah and behind door number 3 .....


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shara63 3 years ago from Delhi

ya, daydreaming or surely something wrong with you...i'm worried naughty hatter!


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ImKarn23 3 years ago

Yep..she could hurt ya M...LOL..


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debbiepinkston 3 years ago from Pereira, Colombia and NW Arkansas

Wondering how long she would stick around...


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Eiddwen 3 years ago from Wales

Brililant Martin!!

Eddy.


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bravewarrior 3 years ago from Central Florida

Yep, you never know when you'll get knocked in the head!

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