Jealous

wish you could be my teddy bear at night
wish you could be my teddy bear at night

jealous of the people

you hugged…

because

for a moment

they held my whole world


jealous of the people

you talked…

because

for a moment

they heard my fave song


jealous of the people

you smiled…

because

for a moment

they could had butterflies


jealous of the people

you stared…

because

for a moment

they glimpsed a little heaven


jealous of the people

you missed…

because

for a moment

they had been complete


jealous of the people

you cried…

because

for a moment

they caught my only death


most of all

jealous of someone

you love…

coz every moment

I’ve wished for

is right by her side


I am jealous

freaking jealous

and it’s so bad

that’s all I could do



© 2010-02-02  b l a i s e


See my other poems...

When You're Gone

In a Blur

4 p.m.

Whoever You are

The Killer

Y o u


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hubpageswriter 6 years ago

Awesome. I like the flow of this poem..


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carolina muscle 6 years ago from Charlotte, North Carolina

I very much like this work!!


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Jen's Solitude 6 years ago from Delaware

Excellent expression, as usual!


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

@hubpageswriter

thank you! :) (it's so cheesy to me lol)

@CM

heya CM! thanks for liking it :)

@Jen's Solitude

thanks for the compliments :)


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shazwellyn 6 years ago from Great Britain

Very well put. Jelousy is a torturous emotion.,.. it mainly torchures the owner of it! x


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heart4theword 6 years ago from hub

Jealousy is a hard thing, in many cases it stems from abandonment issues, as a child. Thanks for sharing:)


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Dim Flaxenwick 6 years ago from Great Britain

Oh blaise, that was so, so good., but I feel for you. Jealousy is a very difficult emotion to deal with. Take care.x


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lctodd1947 6 years ago from USA

It is hard to have something you can't control such as jealousy. It is hard to deal with and when you lose trust in someone you much deal with it then and always wonder if they are being true.

It is a hard emotion to deal with.

Linda


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

Shazwellyn. Heart4dword, Dim, lctodd1947 thanks a lot guys for visiting and for the thoughts :)

hmm I wonder if I sounded too dramatic..coz your comments express a torture. This one was originally just one stanza, and I thought twas sweet and lovely..was in the mood to continue it so there it goes.. :p

anyway, glad to hear different views :)


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fiksy02 6 years ago

very good. but you are more possesive than jealous.


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

hahaha I'm afraid I could.. thanks fiksy02 :)


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bulletproofchris 6 years ago from hutchinson, ks

my favorite is the first stanza. strong opening for the poem. good job.


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

we have the same fave :) thanks bulletproof


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christalluna1124 6 years ago from Dallas Texas

Blaise,

what a beautiful and touching poem. I have felt those feelings many times. you took the words right out of my mouth.

Warmest regards,

chris


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

hello Christal :)

glad to see you here..Really? Pleasure to speak them up for you :)

Thanks. God bless.


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Micky Dee 6 years ago

This is how love feels and it's how it feels when it takes a holiday. Thanks Blaise.


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

sure it is. :) Holiday, yah it's an exciting phase...jealous, cute and sweet for me..

happy to see you as always my friend ;)


seasoning 6 years ago

loved the first few lines, and then it just seemed to flow from there, nice. We all feel tinges of jealousy from time to time


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

yeah I know I kinda exaggerated a bit lol Thanks a lot Seasoning :) I'm glad to see you


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Dark Heart 6 years ago

Wonderful.


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

thanks my friend :)


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Cheeky Girl 6 years ago from UK and Nerujenia

Really nice poem, blaise. Jealous is a thing we all get at times. Even if it's on the list of whatever yada yada. We're only human. I always love reading your hubs! : )


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

halloo cheeky girl! yup, human nature..but too much is annoying lol Thanks my friend! I love reading yours, too..gotta visit CG's apartment ;) Say hi to Cathy!


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Moulik Mistry 6 years ago from Burdwan, West Bengal, India

WOW! So very well written, keep writing more...


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

wow, thank you Moulik! yah I will, hope to see you on my next then ;)


cosette 6 years ago

aye, so true. we've all been there at one time or another. very nice!


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

yup, it's normal :) I'm glad to see you Cosette


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denden mangubat 6 years ago from liloan, cebu, philippines

nice poem


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

Thanks denden :) My brother's nickname is Den-Den ;)


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brandonfan 6 years ago from Mid West

How have you been Blaise? Jealousy can really eat at our guts and turn us all into someone else. I loved this poem. Can't wait to read more!


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blaise25 6 years ago from close to you... Author

Look who's back, hey Brands it's good to see you :) Looking great with your new pic my friend. I missed reading your lovely poetry. Hope I could find a new one when I get on your page :) Thanks XX


JadedLove 5 years ago

bes=autifully sad in a way. i know the feeling. i tell My love all of the time that i am jealous of her pillow. Cute she says. up and beautiful. Thanx for sharing your heart. Blessed be

JLove


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girishpuri 4 years ago from NCR , INDIA

One of the most important ornament of humans....lol

without this, we are all incomplete,

original hub,

thanks


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blaise25 4 years ago from close to you... Author

um jealousy? lol thank you for stopping by :)

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