A Journey To The Visible (Poem)

Introduction

In this poem i was describing abstractly the process by which several sperm cells struggles to fertilizes an egg but only one succeeds.

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Poem

It all started in the invisible
Joint by stream of in-separation
Recognition was the order of the day
Even in the indivisibility
There was the battle


Separation was the prize
The path to success was a Cart
The cart without windows or door
The Cart that came from the world of love and hatred
To rescue but one

Struggling to the cart we were
The strong, the weak, the slow and the fastest
All, but one leg
Yet, only one must succeed
A path we must all go through


No entry was found
Searching, we were, for the door
On touching by mistake
And there I was, engulfed in the cart
An entrance to the beginning we all desired


A journey to the visible
The world we ever seek for
Where Separation rules the day
And uniqueness is the goal
I, only I survived


Abba Elijah also known as elija_god (elijagod)

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abbaelijah 3 weeks ago from Nigeria Author

i will change Sir !

cause i back with more poems and article you will love!

thanks for the comment !


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abbaelijah 3 weeks ago from Nigeria Author

Thanks Vocalcoach !

i really appreciate oh !...


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Wusto Chapel 7 months ago from Ondo

Nice poem there!

I have not been seeing any more new poems or articles,what is happening sir?


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vocalcoach 14 months ago from Nashville Tn.

I just ordered the book "Think Big" by Ben Carson. I purchased this book from your Amazon ad above. Your poem reveals a strong message to each of us. We are, what we think. Dwelling on the positive and eliminating the negative brings us to the visible.

Well done and I am sharing your poem. Thank you.

Audrey


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abbaelijah 3 years ago from Nigeria Author

we are designed to survive...


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abbaelijah 3 years ago from Nigeria Author

Thanks CrazedNovelist !


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CrazedNovelist 3 years ago from Hampton, GA

Nice piece!! :) Awesome!


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abbaelijah 3 years ago from Nigeria Author

Thanks Pastor Paul Olabanji for the comment

Your comment is another powerful Poem.

That's lovely of you.


Pastor Paul Olabanji 3 years ago

Millions streaming randomly

the way to find we all in fusion diffuse

each refusing to give up

yet, one, only one, the crown must wear

but, why was it ME?

me! me! me!

but, why was it you?

you! you! you!

everyone his battle must fight

everyone her battle must win

oh! i won

you won!

we won!

why then are we not going to keep winning?

since to win are we born

to win the battles of life

just as we won and became visible

you and I

Elijahgod, this poem of yours is indeed metaphorical. 'If we cannot win the battles of life, we would not have been born a winner at conception.' It's a floodlight of assurance, that i am born to win. more grace!


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abbaelijah 3 years ago from Nigeria Author

Thanks for reading and your comment is encouraging !


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MarleneB 3 years ago from Northern California, USA

What a great message about success and survival - told in an interesting way. I really enjoyed your poem.


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abbaelijah 4 years ago from Nigeria Author

Thanks for the comment!

I'm a living witness to Positive Word and i Think big!

I said i can't be sick and because i can't be sick therefore i can't take drugs and it has work for me. for more than 10 years now i have not taken drugs although i have been down sometime, i came back to health without drugs!

Yes! You can create your world Just the way you want!


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Askme 4 years ago

Exactly Abbaelijah, EXACTLY. "Nothing can't stop you except YOU" this is so true. If you can see it, you can believe it. Positive thinking and blocking out the negative always works!


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abbaelijah 4 years ago from Nigeria Author

We all have all it takes to Survived,

Nothing can't stop you,except YOU!

We just need the breath of Life!

that's all we need,

others will come at the right time not in our own time

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