Judgment Of Dread (limerick)

I felt bitter judgment of dread

The weight of cruel ax overhead

From heaven I’m cut

Through hells I must strut

‘cause I forgot what wife had said


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cleaner3 3 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

yea.. know what you mean.!!!


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FlourishAnyway 3 years ago from USA

Forgot to take out the trash?


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bravewarrior 3 years ago from Central Florida

You should pay attention if you want to save your neck!


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drbj 3 years ago from south Florida

If you forgot what wifey said,

Then you are off to the races.

She will remind you from now on

And on a daily basis.


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billybuc 3 years ago from Olympia, WA

Off with his head indeed. We men only do that once!


DJ Anderson 3 years ago

What a menacing photo!

You certainly won't forget, again!


Valleypoet 3 years ago

There is always a price to pay...which is worth remembering lol :-)


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jhamann 3 years ago from Reno NV

Ah yes, the cardinal rule "Always Listen To My Wife!" Thank you. Jamie


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wetnosedogs 3 years ago from Alabama

Great imagination.


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Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

Now don't go and lose your head over such! hehehe


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Eiddwen 3 years ago from Wales

Wonderful and voted up Martin.

Eddy.


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ImKarn23 3 years ago

Ooooooo...no exaggeration there! lol


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shanmarie 3 years ago from Texas

Come on, man, you should know better! Haha


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blondey 3 years ago

Creative :)


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tobusiness 3 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

Simply brilliant! loved the ominous image. :)


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vkwok 3 years ago from Hawaii

So true.


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rasta1 3 years ago from Jamaica

There will never be a next time


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BlossomSB 3 years ago from Victoria, Australia

Now you're in trouble! Funny.


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aviannovice 3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

Forgetting such things will definitely banish you.


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teaches12345 3 years ago

I am sure this is purely imagination on the man's point of view.

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