Jump In It's A Free For All

We call this a free for all

Where writing is off the wall

Poets from around the way

Masterpieces I like to say

Give it a try Give it a twist

I know you crafters can't resist

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Mentalist acer 5 years ago from A Voice in your Mind!

Mentally capable,

I find this challenge insatiable.

On Bella's whim,

My face a grin,

Her kindness she sends,

Atom by atom,

Her creativity I jealously fathom,

Her distance deep by far,

I apprentice your star...

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bellawritter23 5 years ago from California Author

Lol Acer you are too cute!! Very clever!

Apostle Jack 5 years ago

I don't get the invitation.Can you relate more?

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bellawritter23 5 years ago from California Author

Poems anything goes add to what Mentalist wrote and it will continue with who ever else joins in on the next verse!!Try it....

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vietnamvet68 5 years ago from New York State

this is a neat one, i like it.Lets have a Free for All

God Bless

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Daunte Loper 5 years ago from Detroit Michigan

As you set the stage, Okay, lets play!! No holds barred, free of charge. This can go on all day....

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saddlerider1 5 years ago

Daddy's Little Girl

Came back into his life he wept like a baby when he saw a message in his Facebook

"i love you to daddy , i never have stopped loveing you. im sorry its taken me this long to contact you , and ill be sure to contact you when im ready. i just was listening to a song that reminded me of you and me. & im so happy this made you happy dad"

My 11 year old blue eyed curly head princess

left with no goodbyes simply disappeared out

of sight and mind four long years ago leaving

me stunned and sick to my stomach lost like a

puppy in the dark of night wandering aimlessly

looking for his mother to come to his rescue

that's how I felt LOST empty and shattered to

the pit of my soul

No reasons given torn from my heart taken away

without any goodbye's not even a call ever again

four long years many tears lost and long empty days

and nights without her in site my heart fragmented aching and full of sorrow and loss

My blue eyed princess made the move she left me a message in my Facebook and tears fell from this poets eyes to wet the fingers that trembled and typed this message back

I love you so much sweetheart. There isn't a day that has gone by since you disappeared from my life that I have not thought of you. I am so glad you made contact and I am here when you are ready to talk to me and eventually meet

Your timing couldn't have been better, I don't want to lose you ever again. Take your time and when you are ready, please contact me. I will always be here for you and I so much look forward to picking up where we left off, a daughter should never be without her daddy in her life, never, never, never

So today my heart is swollen pounding from the good news left for me to read my trembling has stopped my eyes are dry no more tears left to flow my soul is at peace I hear God's voice and whispers to me I delight in you my son and bring your daughter back to you to love and cherish I feel restored to life and bow my head in prayer and thank fullenes for my makers grace my life restored my princess retruned to me

Daddy's little girl whispers in his ear, don't worry daddy, I'm here, I'm your daughter not lost but found and wanting her daddy's bear hugs wrapped around her holding tight and never letting her go again, found not lost she whispers in her daddy's ear I love you daddy I will never leave your side ever again he reads he weeps he smiles he closes his eyes and reflects and says to all the fathers of the world find your lost daughters and sons to love and cherish and never let them go keep them close to your heart until your dying last breath on earth blessed are our found not lost children

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Diana Lee 5 years ago from Potter County, Pa.

A great idea I must say,

To brighten up a poet's day.

As I can see you know us well,

Many tales we have to tell.

Some may be small, some may be tall,

For you we have a free for all.

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jami l. pereira 5 years ago

Dang Ms. Bella you got alot of free for all feed back ! this was great! short ,sweet and to the point and then i read all the comments ! , maybe a twist and add them all together to make one long multi~poet poem ! just sayin' lol voted up and awesome have agreat evening!

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mckbirdbks 5 years ago from Emerald Wells, Just off the crossroads,Texas

Bella and Ben

were at it again

each alone in their den

fencing with pen

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bbnix 5 years ago from Southern California

I lift ourselves from the dark ages

Yet carry our dreams in little dark cages

Yet give our lives hence

To traffic jamb nonsense

We settle complete

With never great feat

Just give each day to bills paid

Before we just know it

We 're to old to do shit

And just spend our days watching Oprah...

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Clairepeek 5 years ago

Free for all or a free fall

Into the pits of creation

I cannot fathom

Wasted inspiration

Long fall from the wall

Of my desperation

Into the overjoyed

Abyss of devotion

For my 'crayon'




When Bella writes

A free bliss into

My heart...

Then Bella brings

Beautiful peace into

My soul.

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always exploring 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

We weave our thread of love and broken dreams

We write about sadness and rainbow beams

We see visions on mountain tops

We see lumps of gold among the rocks

We write of pain and joy combined

Our heart and soul are forener intertwined....

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bellawritter23 5 years ago from California Author

Saddle, I am happy for you as I read your comment my eyes began to cry in happiness for the one I adore who I call my current time Shakespear!! Sincerely I am happy that she is now once again part of your life.

All of you are awesome!!! Keep them coming!!!

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Nikkij504gurl 5 years ago from Louisiana

I leave you with some words of wisdom

I leave you with a taste of spice.

To dream is to live, to live is to dream,

so make the best out of your life,

its a free for all,

theres no admission charge,

to come into this world,

so live it large!

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bellawritter23 5 years ago from California Author

Just perfect Nikki!! You rock sunshine!!!!!

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b. Malin 5 years ago

I Love You All,

I'm Having A Ball...

I got up at Ten and thought Once Again,

It's Great to be Alive...

On Bella's Hub Page,

It's Always the RAGE,

When She sets the Stage.

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bellawritter23 5 years ago from California Author

Haha thats right B. I am a rage at most of the points in my life lets keep going guys

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sassyk73 5 years ago from Milwaukee, WI

Bella this is very clever.

I hope this free for all goes on forever.

It's an honor to be part of this.

Being able to share my poetry puts me in bliss.

For all of those who participate.

Vote her up because Bella is great :)

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Billrrrr 5 years ago from Cape Cod

I like to mark time to a another drum

please do not think I am rather STUPID

It's just that life is not like a rhyme

and you don't have to do it all the DAYS.

Since nobody ever gets my sense of humor

My lack of twin-ablity is merely a rumor

I know that DUMB should follow DRUM

and that TIME needs to follow RHYME

It's like many years ago when I smoked

and people would question why I toked

"My Mother told me to do it", I joked


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bellawritter23 5 years ago from California Author

Thanks guys we will see who else posts in here and what theyve got!!

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QudsiaP1 5 years ago

Great hub.

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bellawritter23 5 years ago from California Author

Thanks Qud!


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Midianite 5 years ago from Australia

Nice poem, great work.

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bellawritter23 5 years ago from California Author

Thanks a bunch Mid!


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