Just one thing

You are the one I'd give my life for!
You are the one I'd give my life for!

Only you

In my dreams there is a world where I am set free

I am as beautiful as I wish to be

I am everything a woman should be

Then I wake up

to find that I am nothing more than me.


I don't want to be perfect for everyone

I only want to be perfect to you

I have been waiting for so long

But I fear there is nothing more I can do

I don't want to waste your time If I am not right

Yes it kills me inside

That you deny

I just want us to be right.


In my dream you are a king

and I am your queen

We go together perfect as can be

Then I awake to the fear

that you could do way better my dear

She will find you one day

Then I will fade away!


I waited for so long to find you

now I don't know what to do

I want to be everything you want and more

I love you so much

I never want to see you walk out that door


I don't want to be perfect for everyone

I only want to be perfect to you

I have been waiting for so long

But I fear there is nothing more I can do

I don't want to waste your time If I am not right

Yes it kills me inside

That you deny

I just want us to be right.


No matter what I know this to be true

You are the only one I want

The only one I need

The only one I love

Only you!


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Cagsil 5 years ago from USA or America

Nicely expressed Chrissie. It drives home your point, but also speaks loudly about the writer too. I certainly hope you can overcome the obstacle in your way. Then again, you might not be able, unless you can first identify the obstacle to begin with. Like I said, your writing speaks volumes about you and that is the obstacle you must overcome. Other than, a great poem. :)


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chrissie123 5 years ago Author

Thank you :)


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Astra Nomik 5 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

There is so much want and desire in us all. And we all want it to be fulfilled, and we want to be "found" by that special person. Nothing is more magical than that one thing. Your poetry is wonderful as always, Chrissie. Love the video too. Have a sweet day. :D


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Scarface1300 5 years ago

A great piece of work. This young lady could do with a saving a little of that love for herself...Thanks


rrrr 4 years ago

i donot like it hated


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DREAM ON 4 years ago

You are very clear how much love you have to give.Great poem.


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Astra Nomik 2 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

I had to return to read this again. I miss your great poetry and your wonderful writing, Chrissie. Your writing is always real and from the heart.

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