Just The Moon (poem)

What did he say that made her leave

What was the reason they now grieve

What heartaches didn’t he perceive

What moment lost could he retrieve

Or was it just the moon

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Their kisses flowed like any day

In Joy their time was swept away

There wasn’t cause to fear dismay

When suddenly she couldn’t stay

And there it was the moon

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He cried as she passed through the door

You’re leaving tell me I implore

She didn’t turn to tell him more

But left some teardrop on the floor

While walking toward the moon

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What was this pain he never knew

Where his mind slipped he had no clue

His conscience groans what did you do

Some soft replies she feels it too

As he’s caught by the moon

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So many years did he befriend

And still some scars will never mend

There in the moon some time he’ll spend

To listen why their love did end

It was just in the moon

Music only

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Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

Have to come back later and comment, sorry ---just too sad right now.


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Angelme566 4 years ago

This poem made me emotional , beautiful but poignant. I loved every line of it.


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snakeslane 4 years ago from Canada

Mhatter, Such a lovely musical flow to your words. Regards, snakeslane


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Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

Oh so sadly beautiful!!!

You are indeed a master of poetry and I love each and every one.

Voting up and sharing.

Eddy.


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lrc7815 4 years ago from Central Virginia

How many broken hearts have asked the same question - "was it just the moon?". Beautifully sad and poignant my friend.


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aviannovice 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

The time on this is perfect and the emotions are plainly stated. Awesome and up!


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always exploring 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

Beautiful as always, a tad sad...


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Vellur 4 years ago from Dubai

Beautiful!! very well expressed. Sad though, such things should not happen. Voted up, awesome.


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LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

Wow, excellent piece, MH! So touching, and sad..... But your words flow beautifully!


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carolinemd21 4 years ago from Close to Heaven

Gorgeous poem. Love the moon. :)


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shiningirisheyes 4 years ago from Upstate, New York

Mhatter - Just a beautiful rendition. So often we stop and wonder what we could have done differently or what we did do to make it different.


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ImKarn23 4 years ago

sad, M...very...

sometimes there is no, um 'rhyme' or reason..

Sometimes...it's just the moon...

sigh..


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teaches12345 4 years ago

Although the moon is usually a romantic backdrop, you have used it as a setting for deeper meaning still. Beautiful, deep, and a bit sad. Truly a well written thought.


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eHealer 4 years ago from Las Vegas

Mhatter, just beautiful and your video is so relevant. Thanks for making my day!


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Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Voted up and beautiful. So sad and romantic. The moonlight can do so much.


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starstream 4 years ago from Northern California

You have been able to express such deep questions that many of us ponder as life moves through us and cycles onward without a full understanding of the answers which are often hidden or erased in time.


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jhamann 4 years ago from Reno NV

Wonderfully written rhyme my friend. Jamie


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Pearldiver 4 years ago from Tomorrow - In Words & NZ Time.

Nicely done... yep Blue Moons are like... always beaming at the pretty girls! Cheers for this poem..take care..


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mary615 3 years ago from Florida

So sad, but so sweet, too.


Hikari 24 months ago

Yes! we do Sports (ea. Season) and various Church based Groups and Activities. now, my older Son wants to do Scouts also! soetimmes I feel like they do too much! :/

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