Keeping Our Love Going!

Please, read with this song...thanks!

Against all odds and wrong thoughts

We have survived this hurricane from people's rants

Bad wishes for our rewarding love from those stars

Sad they thought we will never make it this far



Enjoying those curly hairs behind your neck

Belonging myself to a love encased in a nuttshell

Learning to explore those areas that never were felt

Singing a song that would always cast a spell



From the very moment we met

Yours eyes have shown me that sunset

Stunningly flickering in my own mind

Trying to compose an unrested kind of love


We have known about those enemies within

Trying to look for our mistakes and sins

Having held back so many second thoughts

Until we learnt to control senses that ran amok


I Knew you would follow my personal path

and finally discover our passive insightful chants

Sharing our hearts with no upcoming end

Smiling with no reason and never making any sense


The best medicine is seeing you so happy

Heart to heart and never too crappy

Our love being a rebound against life

Found to make us sigh...within sight


Sad that others never felt it like us

Too bad seeing them breaking apart

Just enough of us aroung that clock of midnight

Mkaing out, having fun and feeling our might


Surviving against that stupid hearsay

Culminating these words with a simple advice

Love your mate like never before

surprise her with so much more...

Just read between the lines amour

Keep your imagination really afloat

Hold on to that love, a gift from the one you know..!



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Comments 43 comments

Ghaelach 4 years ago

Morning Lord.

An excellent poem showing us that "It takes two" and when you stick together you can succeed.

UP/A/B.

LOL Ghaelach

PS. Word #42 ??


pras 4 years ago

Young love is more powerful than adult love


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MartieCoetser 4 years ago from South Africa

Beautiful!


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Eanatas 4 years ago from Ohio

Seems like a song itself. Very nice. I love Celine's voice.


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Lord De Cross 4 years ago Author

Good Day Ghaelach,

Certainly it takes 2 to make this happen and you are welcome to stop by our realm...You ask for #42? Not sure about the question, but run amok is turning wild, likle the Cherooke from within. Thanks my friend!

LORD

HI there Pras--you have your opinion, I hope you are not over 40's

LORD

Hi Martie Coetser,

I think I wrote this piece thinking of my life with Charlize next to me...all happy and with my Affrikaan tongue well learnt. LOL!

LORD

Hi there Eanatas,

yes it can turn into a song, and we can write some songs if asked...but this was an overnight inspiration and just happened to have my computer on. Thanks Buddie!

LORD


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picklesandrufus 4 years ago from Virginia Beach, Va

You put it so well in this poem. To find that right one can be a life long challenge, but well worth it when you do.

vote up!


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Lord De Cross 4 years ago Author

Hi there Pickles,

I might need advice in getting a pair of sunglasses for the upcoming spring...(joking)

But you did nail the main concern or idea in this poem. Might take your whole life to find real love and now , there are less chances than ever! Takae care my friend!

LORD


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wonderful1 4 years ago from Southern California

Oh, what a gift you have for words. I wish I could have said that so eloquently! You have a romantic heart. There is a flicker of hope now that I might meet such a man some day... thanks for that!


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Lord De Cross 4 years ago Author

Wonderful1.

We have more pieces like this and you will get to know us better. Humor and words, Chanting paragraphs that can awake any desperate soul for the upmost feeling of all...Thanks Sheila! driving through Anaheim now..seeing that smarty mouse house oh is Disneyland...I guess/

LORD


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wonderful1 4 years ago from Southern California

Did you see me waving near Camp Pendleton? Thanks for cheering me up!


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Lord De Cross 4 years ago Author

You are welcome wonderful1//Have a nice weekend...Yeah I saw the Marine base..area..were you that chick on the road..like a cheerleading type?


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raciniwa 4 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

such sweet words from you Lord...so eloquent...


femmeflashpoint 4 years ago

de Cross,

This reminds me of my sister and brother-in-law. They've been married nearly 30 years. They're still happy. They still flirt with each other. They still hold hands when they walk together. They still go on dates.

Sweet work.

:)

femme


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PurvisBobbi44 4 years ago from Florida

Lord,

So beautifully worded, and I loved the song too. When two people are truly in love--it is the greatest emotion of all times. How one feels in their heart and mind at the time. Promising that there can be no other for them, and they truly mean it. It is earthly bliss.I voted up and beautiful.

Thanks for sharing,

Bobbi


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Lord De Cross 4 years ago Author

Hi there Raciniwa, long time no see, Lol!

Well, this inspiration is opened to me overnight and when I'm done It's Just amazing how the words fall into gear. Nice to hear from you again!

LORD


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Lord De Cross 4 years ago Author

Femmeflashpoint,

He might be one of the few left for the ladies, and unfortunately is a dying breed. Do you think a young 28, or 24 years old guy is going to think like your brother in law? I don't think so...all they know is that there is plenty of fish, as it's known. Glad to see you in here. Have a nice one Femme!

LORD


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Lord De Cross 4 years ago Author

Hi there Barbara Purvis,

Nice weather for tonight, 56 degrees for January the 7th. A night to show love and feel emotions that were hidden on this past year. You keep up your good work too my friend!! Glad to see you tonight too!

LORD


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wonderful1 4 years ago from Southern California

Ah, you noticed me... :)


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Lord De Cross 4 years ago Author

Sure Elance lady! Lol! Well in real timing you look better, Nice white high heels stilleto. I guess from L.A.

LORD


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FloraBreenRobison 4 years ago

I had to laugh when I read the line about surviving people's rants. I write a lot of those...

But it's a beautiful poem.


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Lord De Cross 4 years ago Author

Thanks Flora!!


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Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

This was so nice and beautifuly expressed. Love does take two. Me and my husband still hold hands walking now and then and it just feels comfortable and gives one a warm feeling. It's enough for awhile cause the love is there.


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SanneL 4 years ago from Sweden

Beautiful and a very emotional poem!

You got my vote up.


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Lord De Cross 4 years ago Author

So glad to hear it from you Gypsy, I guess you will go to the end of the world with him(Latvia) You can shout his name and could be heard in Bensonhurst! Take care and share your love with a friend...in the most awesome way...like coming to our hubs and drop a comment, which you always do. Thanks!

LORD


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Lord De Cross 4 years ago Author

Hallo! from Sweden!

Danke! SaneL, this was an overnight inspiration and We think we did good. We love to write as you do...and we have fun doing it. Au revoir!

LORD


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Deborah Brooks 4 years ago from Brownsville,TX

Mr. Lord Have you ever been in love? Oh love that song.. love your poem.. You are AWESOME.. you REALLY INSPIRE ME.

I VOTED UP AND BEAUTIFUL

DEBBIE


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Lord De Cross 4 years ago Author

Hi Debby,

Sure I did. Didn't we all? Is just an inspiration from our own head..and the words just kept coming...Thanks for stopping by!

LORD


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Ivona Poyntz 4 years ago from UK

A positive blast into the New Year, peace, happiness and love abound...


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Lord De Cross 4 years ago Author

There you go Ivona! Have you ever? did you ever? Our Parents did, and we all try to find it...and would come around when least expected. Thanks Ivona!

LORD


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tammyswallow 4 years ago from North Carolina

I LOVE Celine Dion. I love, love one of her early songs, "Incogneto.." Excellence! That is a fabulous suggestion for keeping the love going. Fabulous.


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Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

Onbly one word I have here::- Beautiful !!

I loved it and have to award that up up and away.

Take care and enjoy your day.

Eddy.


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saddlerider1 4 years ago

A beautiful song by Celine Dion, I love her music. Above all odds and obstacles, true love rests between the two in LOVE. We must never ever let others come between the love we hold for each other. Mates in LOVE must stay united and focused on them. There are many jealous and egocentric people out there who want to tear lovers apart, why? I'll never understand. Keep united, keep together, keep focused on the BOTH of YOU first and foremost, of course showing and sharing your love with others in a different vein. Peace my brother, stay Happy, stay LOVED...


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Silent hurricane 4 years ago from Israel

Beautiful... Thank you. :)


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Lord De Cross 4 years ago Author

Hi Tammy,

Celine Dion is a Diva and she has so many hits! like this one we chose. Thanks my blonde friend!

LORD

Eddy, you are so supportive of our stories that we feel compelled to keep on writing..Thanks my dear friend!

LORD

Hi there Saddelrider1,

You inspire me to write deeper inspirations, after knowing that a brother like you, have a heart to produce hubs with the highest sentiment between the lines. Glad to be considered like a brother and always respecting our vein and soul. Have wonderful day my friend!

LORD


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Lord De Cross 4 years ago Author

You are welcome silent hurricane,

We see that you just joined HP. Hope you enjoy it in here!

LORD


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Silent hurricane 4 years ago from Israel

Thank you! I hope that too. =]


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KDee411 4 years ago from Bay Area, California

That was beautiful, and the video of Celine Dion so good.

Kay


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jeyaramd 4 years ago from Mississauga, Ontario

"Read between the lines amour, Keep your imagination really afloat" - These lines from your poem encompasses the spirit of love. We have to have faith and imagine wonderful things that we can do to put a smile on their face. Great advice in the form of a poem.

As you said, sometimes we should not blindly accept the opinion of others. They are not facts. The fate of our relationship relies on our imagination.People are on the outside, true lovers are inside the relationship. Believe from within and you will surely succeed in love. Voted up.


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Lord De Cross 4 years ago Author

You are becoming a philosopher of Love Jeyaramd, Lol!

You did a good re-wording of this piece... Was fun to read your comment.

LORD


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jeyaramd 4 years ago from Mississauga, Ontario

Thank you for the compliment. I learn from the master. Your poem inspired the response. Inspired philosophy it is. Great hub.


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LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

Beautiful! A great reminder.... Sometime we forget what we have!

Sharing, and voting up.....


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Janine Huldie 4 years ago from New York, New York

Thank for the beautiful and eloquent poem. I loved reading it and will share and vote up, thanks!


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Lord De Cross 4 years ago Author

Sometimes we forget what we have La. Sure you are so right. Life can be so unpredictable as well. Thanks! for unearthing this oldie!

@Hi there Janine Huldie,

Glad you enjoyed our piece of inspiration. We have been loved and have shared our love. Sometimes we run out of words to explain true loving. Much appreciated!

LORD

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