LOVE STRIVE


Today, when I saw the rays of sun, then,

Today, when I felt the cold breeze of air, then,


Today, when I focused on the flow of river, then,

Today, when I saw the shadow of sky, then


I felt, as if I had the power to hug sun,

I felt, as if I had the habit to fight wind and won,


I felt, as if I can flow fast then rivers to reach heaven,

I felt, as if I can take entire sky in me and churn.


Today, when I deeply viewed the sharpness of sun rays, then,

Today when I realized the freezed breeze blowing around, then,

Today, when I sinked mind into the continuous flow, then,

Today, when I admired the soothing shadow, then,


I felt, as if I had the power to shape these rays,

I felt, as if I had the habit to freeze these waves,

I felt as if I am the source of this continuity,

I felt, as if my heart giving this soothing to shadowy.


Today, when I saw the vibrations of my heart, then,

Today, when I gone through the peace of my mind, then,

Today, when I examine the forceful flow of river, then,

Toady, when I fully devoted to the grace of God, then


I felt, as if I had the power to make heart to heart links,

I felt, as if I had the habit to tickle my mind films,

I felt, as if I can welcome the glow remaining racy,

I felt, as if I had the power to grasp the God’s supremacy.


Today, when I saw the eagerness of rays then,

Today, when I focused the peaceful nature of nature, then,

Today, when I examined the end point of flow then,

Today, when I viewed the face of graciousness then,


I felt, as If eagerness is demanding Love pain,

I felt, as if the flow is from the Love rain,

I felt, as if the peace id bound in Love service,

I felt, as if the face is pouring the Loving grace.


Today, when I decided to complete my this need,

I felt, Love is not and never to achieve,

Today, when I desired to live happily,

I felt, Love is to give and only to give.


Today, when I desired to bound this flame,

I felt, Lovers are intentionally getting bind in blame,

Today, when I decided to wet this rain,

I felt, the cloud of Love is the biggest flame.


Today, when I decided to grace this graciousness,


I felt, only God and only God could be my loving highness,



Every particle is the universe,


Every moment in the life,


Love floats to sink Lovers,


Claiming God: the aim to strive.

Comments 27 comments

jami l. pereira 5 years ago

Beautifully written , thanks for the read , Voted up awesome and beautiful because it is!:)


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abradford55 5 years ago from Howell,MI

So awesome and beautiful, full of passion that is hard to find, thanks for that


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moneycop 5 years ago from JABALPUR Author

Thanks jami! thanks for ur precious vote.


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moneycop 5 years ago from JABALPUR Author

Thanks! abradford....tried my level best to make it unique and useful to every heart.


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abradford55 5 years ago from Howell,MI

it was great


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moneycop 5 years ago from JABALPUR Author

thanks again abradford for making a visit to my hub.. and i really pleased to have u in my list. this poem i wrote long back. and originally i wrote it in Hindi language 3 years ago. Today i translated it in Hindi, and really amazed that it is being liked. thank you very much.


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abradford55 5 years ago from Howell,MI

Your welcome and thank you i will definatlly be around in the future to check out more.Thats pretty impressive about tranlating this great job


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moneycop 5 years ago from JABALPUR Author

Thanks...and always welcome!!!


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Sweets21 5 years ago

This is the type of poem that makes you want to just stop time and live in that moment and SEE the world around you instead of just looking at it. I love this hub! Thanks for writing this and helping me to see and take in the beautiful sights around me!!


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moneycop 5 years ago from JABALPUR Author

Welcome sweets 21......and thanks for the elaboration of my poem.


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Sweets21 5 years ago

Thank you and your very much welcome!


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moneycop 5 years ago from JABALPUR Author

my pleasure too....Sweets21


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Movie Master 5 years ago from United Kingdom

This poem flows with passion, beautiful!


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moneycop 5 years ago from JABALPUR Author

thanks movie master


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Rosemay50 5 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand

A beautiful poem full of passion.

My favourite line

'I felt, as if I had the power to hug sun'

That is a perfect description of love.


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moneycop 5 years ago from JABALPUR Author

Welcome Rose many to my world........

Thanks for ur precious comment...........and cohhing a line u like most....i wrote some od soul driven poem and u can enjoy them too....and meditation is my deep rooten subject here...

thanks a lot


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KoffeeKlatch Gals 5 years ago from Sunny Florida

moneycop, beautiful writing and pictures. So much feeling. Up and beautiful.


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moneycop 5 years ago from JABALPUR Author

thanks koffeeklatch.....poetry itself is the base to feelings,,if not touched than of no use. Its an honor if my poems are making you feel and driving you in, the beauty of poem is not mere a rythem..its a lesson and universal too.

thanks again


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sweetie1 5 years ago from India

Very beautiful pictures and very nicely written poem .. Voting it up and keep up good work. You definitely got talent for poetry,


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moneycop 5 years ago from JABALPUR Author

thanks sweetie...even u have the fine arts...i know u also write well...i am just practical and follower of natural things which makes all done by self...


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Astra Nomik 5 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

Your poetry reminds me of Rumi, the sufi poet of the days of old...you have a wonderful way of writing and getting your emotions out and it is so amazing to read. What a great writer you are. :)


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moneycop 5 years ago from JABALPUR Author

thank you ASTRA .........U HAVE GIVEN ME A VERY HIGH STATUS AND I FEEL HIGH PROFILED NOW....

i don't know how good i am but i know that i an original and a servant of god.


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epigramman 5 years ago

...oh my goodness - this is one of the loveliest hubs I have ever laid my eyes on - for your beautiful images and of course, the words!

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moneycop 5 years ago from JABALPUR Author

thanks epi once again..ur visit to my hubs adds an extra mileage to my energy and hubitivity...keep coming


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cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

"Every particle is the universe" I love this. Let me add " your eyes are brighter than the stars and way prettier.


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moneycop 4 years ago from JABALPUR Author

i will eye on it too...thanks


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penofone 4 years ago

When I think of the sun its beastiality in the harsh rays reckon the faith in my heart and soul... If I were to be a dog in the tale of Mahabaratha as Yuddhistra goes to hell and back to heaven because of the dog... it is in his faith of the one who admonished his inner spirit that reckoned the gods to feel sorry for his plight... If only the world could see us through difficult times without the steering of our fate through melodies of dream world function... If we have faith in the lamp of oil or the droplets of dew... The sun rises in the east and sets in the west...

Love ya less,

Anish "Randomness" Patel

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