Lullaby's Song

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Interwoven in many facets

Strung and tied together

Time passes

Flowers enmeshed

And tangled around

The lullaby's song is always in tune

It brings me to a sleepy slumber

Under the full moon

Where my dreams give rise

One after another

Lace spun slowly

Gentle and delicate

From a mistress spider

Weaved in fashioned etiquette

The lullaby's song in it's dreamy haze

Entrenched in deep sleep through my mind's maze

Where will it take me next

I still don't know

So many levels and mysteries bestow

Deeper and deeper I fall through the dust

Wrapped up in it's coils sealed by it's rust

The path it takes me on I can't decipher

Only to be led by my mind's piper

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cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

Cut me open,

look at the hole

reach deep inside me,

touch my soul

your words are great

So beautiful are they

like good food on a plate

Thank you, you are awesome!!!!!!!

What a picture.!!


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Deborah Brooks 4 years ago from Brownsville,TX

Caroline..what can I say...wow you out did yourself..just beautiful...I am so glad I am following you...you are very talented and very inspiring...I voted up and awesome and beautiful..debbie


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SubRon7 4 years ago from eastern North Dakota

Just catching up, Caroline, I will just agree with Deborah Brooks.


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Sky9106 4 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

Hi there Caroline I see you are experimenting with the richt meter, something like that ! Too lazy to look it up .But you will understand. The poem flows nicely and it feels you! and I love the pic as always.

Bless.


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raciniwa 4 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

this is amazing...a lullaby song will lull me to sleep...


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Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

That was creatively put Caroline and such a beautiful free flowing poem that the thought of a lullaby makes me feel so peaceful and calm. Love that picture at the beginning.


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mathira 4 years ago from chennai

You were expressive carolinemd21.


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carolinemd21 4 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

@ Cleaner thanks for the support!

@ Hi Debbie wow that was the best compliment. Makes me feel good about sharing these. :)

@ SubRon thank you! Missed you around.

@ Sky my friend thank you for your support. I am glad you liked it!

@ Raciniwa Thank you!

@ Gypsy thank you for the constant support. I appreciate it. :)

@ Mathira thank you!


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cherylone 4 years ago from Connecticut

Very creative and beautiful, and the picture....well...what can I say but that it matches the poem perfectly. :)


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carolinemd21 4 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

Thank you very much Cheryl. :)


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always exploring 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

Very beautiful Caroline..The title, very unique..


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carolinemd21 4 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

Thank you Always!


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tom hellert 4 years ago from home

*TH raises his hand*

um carolinemd questions-

was your poem about sleeping in the woods?

at night?

or is it a dream of sleeping in the woods?

there is defibitely slumber... it sounds like your just sleeig out in the open under the moon and stars so maybe your sleeping in a greenhouse?

i have another question but its even to cheesy to say

TH


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cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

A beautiful woman you are

did you change your picture on your bio?

For some strange reason you look different


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cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

Caroline, Thank you for the info.

You know I'll give you your props

for the question that was asked.

I'm waiting for your next hub

anticipation is a blast


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carolinemd21 4 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

@ Tom - lol Good analyzation, but it's not sleeping in the woods or greenhouse. It's talking about the idea of sleep and the whole mind experience comparing it to the beauty of nature and how everything has it's certain order or cycle of life. Thank you for reading and your comments!

@ Hi Cleaner yes I did change my photo. I got bored of having the other one. Thanks for the compliment!


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cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

Caroline could I use your pic. in a poetry hub? Please, I'll send it to you first to read if you want to see it before I publish.


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tom hellert 4 years ago from home

c21,

Ahhh i suck..*snicker*

TH


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Senoritaa 4 years ago

Another brilliant one Caroline. Wish you a good night's sleep. :)


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carolinemd21 4 years ago from Close to Heaven Author

Cleaner yes you can.

Tom lol.

Senoritaa thank you, wishing you a good night's sleep too. :)

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