Leave Me Here

The Dream - Acrylic Painting by Kelly Pittman
The Dream - Acrylic Painting by Kelly Pittman | Source

A Poem

Dawn creeps in

Rays of Light

Close the curtains

Extend the night


Flee the morning,

Drift back to sleep

Escape to shadows

of lingering dreams


Leave me here

Where I know peace

With the dawn

Comes reality


Let darkness surround me

Blanketed and warm

Consume my mind

Let is swarm


Leave me here

In this realm of dreams

Leave me here

I beg you please



Sometimes it is really hard to fall asleep at night because my mind wanders. It's difficult to shut it off and not think about all the things I have to do the next day or should have done today. Then the alarm goes off and I feel like I've just found my peaceful place of rest and contentment. It's even more difficult to get out of bed in the morning. My dreams play out like a movie and all I want to do is see what happens next. All I want to do is sleep in today and maybe tomorrow too. I feel the need to rest. REALLY rest.

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James-wolve 3 years ago from Morocco

Beautiful.I know how it is..I am experiencing the same thing


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dwachira 4 years ago from Nairobi, Kenya

Short but excellent, i like it, thanks KellyPittman


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Tams R 4 years ago from Missouri

I understand what you mean about not sleeping. I struggle to fall asleep and when I do, I dream so vividly it's terrifying sometimes. Even when they are not bad dreams (which is rare) they come with such stark beauty and powerful colors they are hard to ignore. The seeming meaningfulness in my dreams seems like I need to do more with them than have them in my head. Love the poem!


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Sky9106 4 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

Beautiful kelly and I think many of us agrees with your sentiment . Leave me here.

When one has the ability to translate what beauty entails , it's agreed they should not settle for anything less.

As I saw the name kelly I knew there was something I had missed . I found ourt what it was.

Great poem .

Bless.


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tammyswallow 4 years ago from North Carolina

Kelly,

I feel that way sometimes.. during those sweet dreams. I feel bad for people who wake up and can't remember what they dreamed about. Gorgeous poem!


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Deborah Brooks 5 years ago from Brownsville,TX

Hey Kelly you write like I do.. Dreaming and then writing what we dream? Awesome,... these are my favorite kind of poems... I voted up and awesomely beautiful...


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carol3san 5 years ago from Hollywood Florida

Hi Kelly. Sometimes putting thoughts into a poem is very helpful. I like the way you wrote it. I have a similar poem (expressed a little differently) you may like.

http://hubpages.com/literature/Beat-Depression-by-...


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KellyPittman 5 years ago from Walker, LA Author

Thanks Guys!


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona

Dreams are our escape, aren't they?


Ghaelach 5 years ago

Hi Kelly.

Enjoyed your poem.

Just the way i like to read them.

Take care and have a nice Sunday afternoon.

LOL Ghaelach

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