Left Me Lonesome

Autumn wind hum through the night

As its leaves be set free to twirl and twine

----But I---

Unlike the wind, unlike the leaves--- has yet not set free

Although I have tried----to set this heart free

But the demon has took control of me

----It took the love that I have given, it wasn’t just any kind of love

But a love I called eternity

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Mhatter99 3 years ago from San Francisco

Beautiful. With me, it was not a demon. It was death.


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James-wolve 3 years ago from Morocco

Beautiful .You will be set free only if you open your arms to change, but don’t let go of your values.Voted up.


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Sunny River 3 years ago from A Place Without A Name which resides somewhere between Fantasy and Belief, just north of Reality

Love the images your words brought to mind and the minimalist form of the poem.


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suzzycue 3 years ago from Ontario, Canada

Great picture to enhance your words. Interesting that you let the demon rob you of an eternal love.


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Minnetonka Twin 3 years ago from Minnesota

Love the poem and the photo to go with it. The images sent chills up my spine. Well written Dark poem. Hope the demon lifts it's grip on the stolen heart. Voted up and Hit many buttons.


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thost 3 years ago from Dublin, Ireland

So nice, it makes one want to walk with you. Thank you.


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Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Expressive and tragically sad.

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