I am a soft gentle rain .....

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A warm rain falling soft and gentle as
perspiration from a lovers brow
and so now let it in .....

Open your mouth and look up
to the heavens and
just imagine the taste

Close your eye's and feel the caress on your
cheeks as if my fingertips
touch softly your flesh

I can cleanse your soul but
only if you give in .........
.....close your eyes my dear
as I wash through you

Haven't you ever swam in the river
in the rain
in the summer
in the nude

And haven't you ever felt my wetness
in you
around you
becoming you?

Lower your beauty into my river
become weightless with me
while I
lift you up

I'll carry you in under-currents of magic
until we are spent
you
me
and the rain













16 comments

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Michele Travis 3 years ago from U.S.A. Ohio

Very nice poem. Reminds me of rain in the spring gentle and warm. Soft and gentle. Very nice.

Oh, and voted up


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Nikkij504gurl 3 years ago from Louisiana

Loved it! Very sexily written. Very enticing poem.


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Petra Vlah 3 years ago from Los Angeles

Between images and feelings, you created a Masterpiece Ed, from the first to the last word. SPLENDID


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Cantuhearmescream 3 years ago from New York

Wow Ed, this is beautiful and a little steamy too! Where was this the last couple of days when it was raining here?! I will now have a new appreciation for the rain :D What a writer, what a soul!

I do love a warm gentle rain.

Hugs Ed,

Cat


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writinglover 3 years ago from Lost...In Poetry

This was beautiful and steamy! Loved it! Voted it up!


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Minnetonka Twin 3 years ago from Minnesota

OOOO La La! what a wonderful weaving of words, images and double meanings. Makes me want to go skinny dipping :-)


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SilentReed 3 years ago from Philippines

I will limit my comment to "This is beautiful" in order not to break the spell of the undercurrent of magic your poem seems to have carried away your numerous female admiring fans.;) Also sharing it in FB


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Eiddwen 3 years ago from Wales

What a wonderful poem Ed ;so sensuously told and voted up of course. Have a wonderful weekend.

Eddy.


Poetic Fool 3 years ago

Very nice, sensuous piece here, Ed. The call to immerse oneself in another, to lose oneself in another is beautiful. I love the water imagery you've used and the image is perfect. Very well done!


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ImKarn23 3 years ago

Welllll, that is some s-e-x-y rain ya got going there, Cowboy! Whew, gettin' a little, er, moist in here...lol..

As always, incredible passion and imagery! Is it possible you're actually improving? Who knew you had the wiggle room!

Beautifully written my friend..

sharing, pinning, lovingxx


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tobusiness 3 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

Wow....this is sensual and arousing!...Not quite sure if the sudden glow I'm exuding is due to this racy piece of art, or the menopause. :)

Beautifully done.


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Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Voted up and awesome. A romantic journey down a lazy river. Loved this. Passing it on. Hugs.


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ahorseback 3 years ago Author

By the way do any of you find this writing or photo too racy ?....someone did !.....:-}


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Minnetonka Twin 3 years ago from Minnesota

Hi Ed~came back to comment on your last comment. No~I didn't think this photo was racy~if anything I thought it a little scary.


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Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Your poetry and pics are never too racy for me. In fact the pic you chose was just right for this piece.


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Nikkij504gurl 3 years ago from Louisiana

the photo definitely not. I think its perfectly racy lol

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