Let’s untie the string | poem

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I long have wished a world alone with you

Beauty ranks next to my obsession

This is my world, my life and my passion

The craving I’ve long nurtured along


To sought home at the field of love

This rings loud within the flutes of my heart

Poems come like the silent melodious tunes

Rumblings my heart wild


Oh here is the world you apprize

Simplicity never eluded love’s lyrical tunes

Your sparking eye so lure me to stardom

Enriched at your bosom feast of banquet


There is an intense feeling in my heart

Surging like the confluence of flowing rivers

An irresistible banquet upon your arms

Beckoning me to mortals fleshly least


Oh! Let‘s untie the strings of our heart

Let’s play the flute of the soul

And tune up to endless ecstasy

Let sooth tranquility

© 2014 Abba Elijah also known as elija_god (elijagod)

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abbaelijah 2 years ago from Nigeria Author

Yea !

in the process


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abbaelijah 2 years ago from Nigeria Author

humm !

How did you know ?

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Thanks for the comment dear !


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teaches12345 2 years ago

Sounds like a relationship about to bloom.


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abbaelijah 2 years ago from Nigeria Author

Thanks Gypsy Rose Lee !


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Gypsy Rose Lee 2 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Voted up and beautiful. So gently flowing. Enjoyed.


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abbaelijah 2 years ago from Nigeria Author

Really !

Thanks BossomSB for reading and commenting


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BlossomSB 2 years ago from Victoria, Australia

An interesting use of words.


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abbaelijah 2 years ago from Nigeria Author

thanks KJ Force for the comment!


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kj force 2 years ago from Florida

abbaelijah... Loved your words...as I started reading association of Mother to Newborn ( birth ) came to mind..reference to " nurturing " and " Enriched at your bosom feast of banquet " ( breast feeding )"...reading further it became a Love between what we want to interpret...AWESOME...

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