Life tracks ( a poem of Haiku)

Amazing life...
Amazing life...
You never really know what to expect...
You never really know what to expect...
What will tomorrow bring?
What will tomorrow bring?
Happiness or distress...
Happiness or distress...


The maze of our lives,

A concept quite amazing.

New trails we're blazing.


Guided by our faiths,

Each, their own chosen belief.

Other's wishes not phasing.


Predestined success,

Determination, suppressed...

Or that we're so blessed?


Complex or simple,

A product of a dimple...

Aptitude expressed?


Life is quite amazing,

So well worth our rephrasing...

The positive stressed!


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Just take it with a grain of salt...do our best!

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Ericdierker 11 months ago from Spring Valley, CA. U.S.A.

Wonderful timing for me. I needed a great poem and a marvelous frog this morning. Right and wrong are not always the only arbiter of good. My attitude is the cause of my reality. I like your reality.


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swalia 11 months ago

Beautiful poem with cute images!


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Reynold Jay 11 months ago from Saginaw, Michigan

Beautiful and uplifting. Well done.


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whonunuwho 11 months ago from United States Author

Thank you my friend. whonu


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whonunuwho 11 months ago from United States Author

My thanks to Eric, swalia, and Reynold Jay for your nice reviews. whonuu


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bravewarrior 11 months ago from Central Florida

Excellent message and fun visuals, whonu. Does your frog have a name?


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Nell Rose 11 months ago from England

Beautifully done! I am useless at Haiku's so totally love it when someone gets them right! lol!


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MsDora 11 months ago from The Caribbean

Every verse has a message and I like the conclusion in your last verse. Thanks for sharing your gift.


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whonunuwho 11 months ago from United States Author

Thanks MsDora and many blessings on this cold mid-western day. whonu


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aviannovice 11 months ago from Stillwater, OK

Very upbeat and inspirational.


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whonunuwho 11 months ago from United States Author

Thank you much my friend. whonu

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