A journey into the unknown.
A vast abyss...

           Waiting to be shown.
           Waiting to breathe...

                               Inhale. Exhale.

Every moment you either succeed, 
                                     or you fail.


You never know what you're going to get.

             The good. The bad.
             Things that havent happened yet.

                                  Its all a risk you take.
                                  Its all a chance.

             To live.
                      To love.
                                 To cry.
                                           To dance.

In the instance that you
          that your life has Meaning,
only then can you truly
          and live Freely.

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Joshua Kell 6 years ago from Arizona

Absolute and wise. Thanx,

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Roman Trend 6 years ago

Nikkij, you have done an amazing job with layout on this one.

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Nikkij504gurl 6 years ago from Louisiana Author

thank you!

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Nellieanna 6 years ago from TEXAS

Lovely! I'm glad you ventured on the layout. :)

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pinkhawk 6 years ago from Pearl of the Orient

..woh, such a wonderful "Life"- vote this up!..the message is indeed meaningful and true..^.^!! thank you for sharing!^.^

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Uriel 6 years ago from Lebanon

Amazing~ i can't express how much this one has touched me. I can definitely say that you made the best out of the wise words we are told by our elders. I hope you don't mind me sharing this with a couple of friends who are fighting over what dreams and life have to do with living and reaching the stars and stuff. I truly appreciate the message withing those amazing verses :D AMAZING

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Nikkij504gurl 6 years ago from Louisiana Author

thanx a lot uriel. and of course share it. thats what i hope my poetry can do..help others. or give them a sense that they are not alone.

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Senoritaa 5 years ago

Very beautiful. Got referred to your page from Eddy's poem. You really are an awesome writer.

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Nikkij504gurl 5 years ago from Louisiana Author

thank u senoritaa! I am glad you stopped by. I will check out your hubs as well. :)

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damian0000 3 years ago from Belfast

Well Nikki.... I hope you don't mind but I have been rummaging around in your back-catalogue and I unearthed this little gem :-)

I love the simplicity of it and the lay-out... peeling away at all the unnecessary accessories of life and getting back to the simple act of breathing in and out, the heartbeat and simple pleasures.

Beautiful and inspirational work!

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Nikkij504gurl 3 years ago from Louisiana Author

I dont mind. in fact I quite appreciate it. I wish more people would rummage through my hubs and leave me awesome comments like yours. Thanks damian

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damian0000 3 years ago from Belfast


Always a pleasure Nikki... keep up the good work!

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ahorseback 3 years ago

Nickii , Thank you for baring your soul !........Ed

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