Poem: Life!

Hanging in the balance



Parents teaching a fighting chance.



Death's lurks ever so close

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Sky9106 4 years ago from A beautiful place on earth. Author

Great to see you phdast7. My mind just ran on that lady after seeing something here. My mom always say when you think of someone and they show up , they will live very long.

Will tell you about it. Time is all we have because tomorrow it's there for us again.

When I think about the animals , or insects and the little part they play, it always amazes me. A mosquito, born hits the surface , taste a little blood from us , wham ,gone what was the purpose of that life? Just a thought that can be applied to every life.

Thanks for reading, and you comments are always welcome.

Will be around quicker thank even I know .

Hope all is well for the season so far and will continue throughout.

Bless.


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phdast7 4 years ago from Atlanta, Georgia

Nice haiku. Not much time today, sorry. :)


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Sky9106 4 years ago from A beautiful place on earth. Author

And this beautiful lady whom I gratefully met from the very start and felt blessed ever since, the beautiful

"Always Exploring."

Thanks always what you did will always sit as current with me. You are very special.

Have you ever gained a friend?

Bless.


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Sky9106 4 years ago from A beautiful place on earth. Author

You know that it's by your critique I look for my points , its been that way from the start.

Thank you so much Cardisa , when you smile, or even stop to think while reading my work, I am somewhere .

If you are surprised , it's feels great to come from the other side.

Sincere thanks.

Bless.


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always exploring 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

A haunting truth in a few words. The pictures were perfect for this piece...


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Cardisa 4 years ago from Jamaica

Wow, Sky! You surprise me with haiku. Your poems are always so intense and this one is no different. Those three lines said everything.

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