Lillian's Garden

Garden Path, 1902 Claude Monet 1840-1926
Garden Path, 1902 Claude Monet 1840-1926 | Source

In Lillian's sun-dappled yard,

Wild flowers drift across the lawns,

Lakes of Monet blue.

A brocade:

Pools of pink and white,

English daisy weaves

through the green.

Borders of frothy blue forget me not

between,

Black wings whisper where we walk.


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whonunuwho 3 years ago from United States

Reflective of a soulful awareness and expressions of a gifted spirit from within. Thank you for sharing these special words.whonu


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snakeslane 3 years ago from Canada Author

whonu, thank you for your beautiful comment, much appreciated...


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Becky Katz 3 years ago from Hereford, AZ

Beautiful poem, and a pleasure to see you are still around. I have missed seeing you lately.


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snakeslane 3 years ago from Canada Author

Hi Becky! Thank you, yes, missing the café visits too, hope you are well, and Happy Mother's Day to you...


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marcoujor 3 years ago from Jeffersonville PA

Serene wanderings to ponder...beautiful, snakeslane.


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always exploring 3 years ago from Southern Illinois

Lillians garden aglow with beauty...Loved your thoughts, especially, " Black wings wisper where we walk "...


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mckbirdbks 3 years ago from Emerald Wells, Just off the crossroads,Texas

Your words have sent me in search of a garden chair and table and a pitcher of tea. Your poem is beautiful and shines in the early morning sun.


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snakeslane 3 years ago from Canada Author

Dear mar, always and mckbbks, Oh, I'm so happy to see everyone here, thank you, thank you, thank you!


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Nellieanna 3 years ago from TEXAS

Just exactly the right words in the right amount to paint a breathtaking, yet serene picture of the garden. . . . possibly your mother's?


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snakeslane 3 years ago from Canada Author

Hi Nellieanna, thank you, good to see you! Lillian is an old friend who I do gardening for. It's such a pleasant place to be, and where I've been spending a lot of time lately. :)


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AudreyHowitt 3 years ago from California

Such a beautiful write!!


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tobusiness 3 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

Lillian's garden seems heavenly, this beautiful poem reads like a dream. Thank you for sharing.


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wayne barrett 3 years ago from Clearwater Florida

Very beautiful!


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epigramman 3 years ago

Well you got me with two names: Monet and Snakeslane! I have missed you my friend and I myself was away from the Hub for awhile because of serious mental and physical health issues. It is currently 3;44am and I woke up again after falling asleep late last night and it is a clear bright sky over the lake - I can see the lights from the U.S. from the other side and both cats Tiffy and Gabriel took the opportunity to go outside and check out their deck.

I hope sincerely all is well with you these days and that you got over your computer woes. Are you receiving summer weather now?


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snakeslane 3 years ago from Canada Author

Audrey

tobusiness

wayne barret

Your comments are music to my ears! Thank you, I want to return the visit (s), been away so long... :)


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snakeslane 3 years ago from Canada Author

Epi, Oh gosh, I'm so sorry to hear the troubles you are having, not fair! I'm hoping you can take some time off work, get some rest, and get better. Good to hear from you, and the cats. I'm still hitching a ride on my neighbour's WiFi. Working (gardening season in full swing) and started a new job. No rest for the wicked!


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epigramman 3 years ago

Good luck in your new job my friend and you are wickedly talented as a writer and be safe, be happy and be well. lake erie time 1:25pm


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Becky Katz 3 years ago from Hereford, AZ

Good to hear you are working, bad to not see much of you.


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snakeslane 3 years ago from Canada Author

Hi Epi, Thank you! Right back at ya...


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snakeslane 3 years ago from Canada Author

Hey Ms Becky, How are you doing? Celebrating Mother's Day with your feet up I hope!


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BlossomSB 3 years ago from Victoria, Australia

Lovely little poem and great photo, too. We're having a Monet exhibition in Melbourne at the moment.


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Nellieanna 3 years ago from TEXAS

Ah - Thank you for the explanation, Snakes. What a lovely place to work - if it could be called that - and you didn't! Life is so interesting! Hugs to you, sweet friend


Jami P. 3 years ago

Very lovely! I said, as I strolled through the lilac that lined the cobble stoned walkway into Ms. Lillian's back yard garden. My steaming pot of coffee and tray of extra cups, daintily adorned with a jar of cream and sugar. Morning coffee with Lillian and Snakes lane was to be a delight the mornin'. We all fixed a cup and took each a sip. Taking in all the time the backsplash of the lake and the pools of vivid color that surrounded one half of the garden so brilliantly. English ivy twisting tantalizingly around stems of each flower. Discussing each, as if a treasured heirloom of times past and present. We all look at one another as the laughter passes, and the black butterfly makes his way to the table and rests upon the tea pot lid.

Lol .. I love your poem!, It gave me visions of my own, and a delightful story that I engulfed all of my senses with! Thank you for a beautiful journey!! I voted thumbs up and all the way across the board, of course! Have a wonderful day my friend! :) Lots of Hugs , Jami


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jhamann 3 years ago from Reno NV

What a great way to say, I am here. Such beautiful poetry. Jamie


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snakeslane 3 years ago from Canada Author

Hi Blossom, Thank you, would love to be in Melbourne for the Monet exhibition, I'm assuming you've seen it?


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snakeslane 3 years ago from Canada Author

Yes, Nellieanna, it's good work if you can get it, so rewarding. And then the poetry it inspires...and then a visit from the Grand Dame of poetry Ms Nellieanna, ah...life is good!


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snakeslane 3 years ago from Canada Author

Hi Jami! We are walking on air...So glad you came along. :)


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snakeslane 3 years ago from Canada Author

Jamie,Thank you. :)


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Becky Katz 3 years ago from Hereford, AZ

I am busy trying to get my yard in shape. Just got a lawn mower and the grass was higher than my knees. Finally got it all mowed down and now one more day and I will have it all one length. It took me a week to get it all mowed, LOL. Too many years of an apartment and all of my yard stuff had been sold. I got some tomatoes and some herbs planted in pots and flowers planted in the one flower bed. The herbs and tomatoes are on the patio, right by the back door so they will be easily accessible. I am really enjoying having a yard again.


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snakeslane 3 years ago from Canada Author

Becky, Wow! I hope that lawn mower is self-propelled...please tell me it is. Good to hear you have a yard again, and a garden. I'm all over the place, can't keep up. The weather's been so amazing. I can't count the number of plants and flowers in bloom. It's crazy! Love it.


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Movie Master 3 years ago from United Kingdom

Beautiful poem, absolutely lovely!

Hope all is well with you, best wishes Lesley


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Fossillady 3 years ago from Saugatuck Michigan

Very lovely


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Nellieanna 3 years ago from TEXAS

No grande dame here, love - just a friend and fellow-poet. But I also appreciate a visit from a friend ! Hugs!


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snakeslane 3 years ago from Canada Author

Hi Lesley, Thank you...I am still kicking as they say, well, still digging anyway, love this time of year! Hope you are well too.


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snakeslane 3 years ago from Canada Author

Fossillady, Thank you, your visit and comment is much appreciated.


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snakeslane 3 years ago from Canada Author

Nellieanna, you are so modest! I've been keeping an eye on your hubs, and missed so many lately it is embarrassing to be me. Hope I can make it up eventually, looking forward to it.


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Deborah Brooks 3 years ago from Brownsville,TX

Hello ... great poem.. I love it... absolutely wonderful ....this is what a poem should look like.. how poetic..

thank you so much for sharing

Now i know why Nellieanna loves your work

blessings

Debbie

sharing


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PegCole17 3 years ago from Dallas, Texas

What a treat to find a new poem from Ms. Snakeslane. I must have missed the notification as I would have been around much sooner. I love the imagery and cadence of your verse. You pack so much into so few words. It is so wonderful to see you publish this beautiful poem. I miss seeing you.

Peg


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snakeslane 3 years ago from Canada Author

Deborah, Thank you! What a lovely and generous comment.


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snakeslane 3 years ago from Canada Author

Hi Peg, You are too kind Sister...Thank you very much.


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Kathryn Stratford 3 years ago from Manchester, Connecticut

This is a garden I would love to walk through! You have painted a beautiful picture of it!


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snakeslane 3 years ago from Canada Author

Kathryn, Lillian's garden is poetic, I was hoping (I am hoping) to write more as it changes.


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Carl8033 3 years ago

This is a beautiful poem. You really are talented.


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Thelma Alberts 3 years ago from Germany

This is a beautiful garden for me to walk through. Thanks for sharing.


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snakeslane 3 years ago from Canada Author

Carl8033, Thank you for that vote of confidence! I've been working in Lillian's garden all summer, and it's been an inspiration in so many ways...


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snakeslane 3 years ago from Canada Author

Hi Thelma, Thank you!


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Jackie Lynnley 3 years ago from The Beautiful South

Sorry I missed this, very beautiful. If you have published anything lately I have not gotten notice, that seems to be happening quite a bit lately, so sorry and will check your hubs. ^


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snakeslane 3 years ago from Canada Author

Hi Jackie! Thank you for reading and commenting, I haven't been doing a lot at Hub Pages since back to work, I really miss the writing/creating Hubs...


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Greensleeves Hubs 2 years ago from Essex, UK

Beautiful use of words snakeslane, and evocative of an attractive, tranquil garden. Alun


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snakeslane 2 years ago from Canada Author

Alun, Thank you. It is a special place. I'm happy to see you here!

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