Lips in my Shoulder

I’m driving in the forest

Where the wind sings a sound

The trees have their stories

Poetry penned the ground


Felt your hands in my waist

Hugging me, not letting go

Your lips in my shoulder

I know where we going


I’ve prayed to meet you

Can’t count how much

Your kisses taste bubblegum

I remember when…


I was a comet fallen

You were a supernova

We were friends back then…


On a night of Friday blaze

You were standing there

Counting stars, crème brulee


I wanted to kiss you

If not only for

the Curly Woman

I love so much


And you run inside my head

in vanilla circles, round and round

The trees have their stories

Poetry penned the ground


Your lips in my shoulder

I know just where we going…



There’s this sexy girl…she kept running inside my head…she bumped into me in the forest…I rode with her in her bike…and she brought me in her galaxies…

I dedicate this to her...


This poem has a special connection to the beautiful hub, The Halfway Space, written by Astra Nomik.



© Copyright 2013 by Fehl Dungo

Dedicated to Cathy Nerujen

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Astra Nomik 3 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

Oh Fehl this is so magical.... and I was whisked away immediately to that dream we had, remember? And yes that forest... and us... and so many things.... it is as though the forest and her voice have heard me... heard us... and answered.... I know the answer already.

I have known for the longest time how much you love means to me. This poem is so beautiful. And I love the references in here... I feel at home with you, honey. You know how to melt my heart so much....

Your words and your poetry are beautiful... just like the sweet girl who wrote this. Mwaaaaaaaaaaaah :)

Thank you for this lovely poem. I want to hug you like this now and not let you go. I love you so much. XOXOXOXOXOXOX


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blaise25 3 years ago from close to you... Author

Yeah the Halfway Space...Someday I wanna go to that forest...to know if it's true and real. And yes, it heard us. And the answer is the most beautiful thing that happened to me.

I'm glad you love it. I hope Curly would love it too :)

Oh wow I noticed my hubs before this were naughty straight LOL

Mwaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah. I love you too, baby...xoxoxoxoxo


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Mhatter99 3 years ago from San Francisco

Wonderfully done. Thank you for the experience.


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blaise25 3 years ago from close to you... Author

Happy to see you Mhatter and thank you :)


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Astra Nomik 3 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

Wow, I had to sneak back here again, Fehl :)


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blaise25 3 years ago from close to you... Author

Sneaky woman :) Mwaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!


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prasetio30 3 years ago from malang-indonesia

Beautiful as always. Thanks for share with us. Cheers...Prasetio


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blaise25 3 years ago from close to you... Author

I'm glad you liked it my friend. Thanks a lot!


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DDE 3 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

I enjoyed reading and think you are one of the best on Hubpages


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always exploring 3 years ago from Southern Illinois

Beautiful..I have a feeling you like bubblegum..Hee. Enjoyed...


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Dim Flaxenwick 3 years ago from Great Britain

Absolutely beautiful imagery from your words.

Loved it.


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Rosemay50 3 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand

Bubblegum, crème brulee, vanilla... someone has a sweet tooth. Lol

I love the way you have woven the words in this poem.


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blaise25 3 years ago from close to you... Author

Oh wow, thank you so much for the beautiful comments here :)


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frankieonfire 3 years ago from Eureka, CA

Where? Where? Where are you going?? Tell me! Ha. :-) Loved it. Very whimsical and delicious.


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Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Voted up and beautiful. This was wonderful. Enjoyed.


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Astra Nomik 3 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

This is so beautiful and magical.... I am rubbing my eyes and making sure these words are actually written here. Hehehe...

Fehl you are so amazing. Anybody reading my poem The Halfway Space will be smiling now like crazy... :)

Thank you for this wonderful gift... Mwaaaaaaaaaaah :)

XOXOXOXOX


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frankieonfire 3 years ago from Eureka, CA

Yes. This poem is beautiful :)


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blaise25 3 years ago from close to you... Author

@Frankie thank you for reading my latest. Haha I am going to..um..I can't tell it here..LOL If I did, no one would read me again...

@Gypsy thanks and I'm glad you enjoyed reading this

@Astra would you like me to blow your eyes so you'll read it better honey? hehehe

I will add the Halfway Space link in this one. Thanks for the reminder :) Mwaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!


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Astra Nomik 3 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

Um, yes... blow my eyes.... Hehehe. :P

Seeing your words here... I love it. I feel so loved. You are very beautiful, Fehl. Mwaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah :)

Oh thank you for the link to the Halfway Space, Fehl.

I want to hug you so much, babylove :)

XOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXO


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blaise25 3 years ago from close to you... Author

*blows your eyes now and blows you a kiss...* :)

I will visit Half Space again. It's one of my favorites. :) It's so special..so very special. Mwaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah. (I hate that I can't put hearts in here) XOXOXOXOXO


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SiberianWolf 3 years ago from MidWest

Wow... this played as a movie in my head... the longing is palpable... a very savory stew you've cooked here... and I catch myself licking the bowl :)


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blaise25 3 years ago from close to you... Author

Your comment made me smiling here now..I didn't expect I could cook a savory stew LOL I'm glad you loved this one. Please read "The Halfway Space" by Astra Nomik. It has a special connection with this hub. This one is actually just a dessert. The main dish is "The Halfway Space" :)

Thank you, Wolf! Have a great day!


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SiberianWolf 3 years ago from MidWest

thanks blaise... did just that... can see and feel the connection... Powerful indeed... thanks for showing me another awesome writer to read :)


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blaise25 3 years ago from close to you... Author

Oh thank you :) I'm glad you did. It's a pleasure. It's one of the most beautiful hubs here and I think an ace like you would want to read more aces here :) Cheers!


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Astra Nomik 3 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

Hehehe.... just dessert... gosh, I think not, Fehl. Your words are so beautiful and I love them... and I love you more... XOXOXOXOXO


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blaise25 3 years ago from close to you... Author

Oh good morning, love! Wow you are here :) Want my lips to be in your shoulder now :p I love you, baby. Mwaaaaaaaaaaah! Please read Wolf's hubs. They are so powerful and enigmatic


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Astra Nomik 3 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

I love you sexy woman of mine..... Lips on my shoulder.... I love this title.... I will read Wolf's hubs yes.... :)


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Vinaya Ghimire 3 years ago from Nepal

So passionate, so tender, so beautiful.....


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Veronicarain 3 years ago from Cincinnati, Ohio

Oh wow! Now, that was yummy, passionate and just a great piece. Great job.


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Dim Flaxenwick 3 years ago from Great Britain

Came back for another read and guess what? It's is still Beautiful, Fabulous and many more adjectives all of beauty.

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