Little Red Ridah's Halloween in the Hood

Little Red Ridah in the hood

bopping along it was all so good.

Sexy kewl, all new threads,

new weave on my head,

jeans real snug and tight,

got them cheap just last night.

~

Ipod really blaring,

all the homeys they do be staring.

Just as life was seeming right,

along came the source of my strife.

Round the corner and what do I spy?

Three pimps being robbed by a crack head too high.

He gets sloppy and they cap his ass.

Keep on strolling. This too shall pass.

Further down the block sees me,

gangstas, thugs, and hoes make three.

Rule of three... three bad guys do there be,

feet get moving! Out of here is me.

~

Still bopping, moving on,

oh hey, I really like this song.

Jamming on a funky beat,

what the hell is on my feet

messing up my new shoes?

Damn crackheads made poo.

But hell no! And you know you didn’t

do that right here for me to step in it.

~

Motha Fu__er, you low life freaks

it’s Halloween fools. I’m out for treats.

Headed over to MeeMaw’s place.

Tonight’s time for a happy face.

Chilluns coming one and all,

come for MeeMaw’s candy fall.

Once a year she makes it from scratch.

Won’t tell no one how, natch.

~

That’s ok. It’s all good.

Gonna help her out like I should.

Gotta get there I’m running outta time.

Damn gangstas always getting outta line.

Right in front of me what do there be?

Big, burly, ugly dudes do I see.

Three rival gangs with neighboring streets,

the ones with the most guns is the ones to beat.

Think I’ll go around. Later.

Tell me the story one of you haters

of how many of you fools will die tonight

so tomorrow some other kids can sell here, right?

~

MeeMaw’s place is right up the street.

Finally, gonna get something good to eat.

MeeMaw makes the very best treats.

All the kids will come for eats.

Through the door and into the kitchen

Alright now Red, you better listen.

~

MeeMaw pulls a wicked long draw on some killer chronic.

“Come on little Red Ridah, hand MeeMaw her Gin and Tonic.

Bout time you showed up little Missy.

I was about to have a hissy.

Where you been and why you so late?

Don’t you know MeeMaw don’t like to wait?!

Sit ya narrow ass down and let’s get busy,

gonna be the best treats in the whole city.

Sugar, spice, lard and butter

MeeMaw’s secret stuffer.

This here’s what makes it so nice.

This year gonna get it thrice.

Putting in three times as much secret sauce.

Wait and see girl. I’m gonna be the boss

of the whole wide hood watch and see.

After this Little Red, it’s all about me.”

“What you mean to say MeeMaw? Old lady,

you about to go do something shady?

How you gonna go be the boss?

You know how many players you’d have to toss?

You too old and loosing yo mind.

Cop a squat and try to unwind,

before I gotta go save your old behind.”

~

SMACK!

~

“Listen up you little witch.

You aint too old for me to switch!

Little Red Ridah needs a clue.

Figure out what’s good for you.

Don’t make me kick your smart ass.

I aint putting up with no more of your sass.

Little miss mouthy ma’am,

Make me show you who I am.

I’m the old lady that can wipe the floor,

Won’t be no more Little Red Ridah no more.”

~

“Damn MeeMaw why you gotta go hit so hard?

You know that’s why Uncle Willys’ a tard.

Hit him upside the head is what you did.

Messed him up when he was just a kid.

You trying to make me go tard too?

That what you is trying to do?”

~

“Shut it Red and get to kneading

or little girl you is gonna be bleeding.

I gotta work on the sauce here.

Aint about to let you get near.

You aint about to mess up my sauce with your dumb ass.

Aw hell girl, It’s not enough. Fetch MeeMaw’s stash.

Might as well really do it up right.

Gonna be a takeover tonight.

Yea, yea, that’s gonna do it up real nice,

make all them dumb ass kids go and think twice.

~

Running around fighting and selling smack,

hoeing, banging, and smoking crack,

looking for that all mightly high,

pimping, thieving, all out there to try,

Hmph! More like to see who can be mo ignorant,

Hooligins, thugs, sharks, and miscriants.

~

Gal, give me that dough. It’s time to drizzle.

Stand back now it’s gonna sizzle.

My MeeMaw was a voodoo queen.

You got no idea what I is seen.

She taught me the magic when I was a child,

before the world done up and gone hog wild.

Open that oven this here candy gotsta bake.

Move it gal. The treats can’t be late.

Now go start getting ready

Kids gonna be here directly.”

~

Smells of ginger, malasses, honey and spice

waft through air smelling so nice.

Something subtle danced underneath,

the aroma so enticingly sweet.

A knock upon the back door sounded

MeeMaw to the door almost bounded.

Throwing the door open with delight,

“I knew it was you,” she stated into the night.

“My three oldest sisters come home to roost.

Thanks for coming. For this I’m gonna need a power boost.”

~

“Ah girl, now you knew we couldn’t resist when you wrote.”

“Little Red Rider get your butt over here and take yo great aunties’ coats.

Go on. Take them in the back and find something to do.

Me and your great aunties gonna need to talk for a minute or two,

Grown folks business and not for you little ears,

go on get, for I beat your smart mouthed lazy rear.”

~

Little Red hustled out the room fast as you can blink.

“ I smart off she might wash my mouth out in the sink.

MeeMaws on a wicked old lady roll tonight.

She’d do it in front of them old heifers just for spite.

How bout I sneak on the phone?

See, you be broke before long.

Run up your phone bill then you will learn some respect.

You’ll forget it by morning. It’s oldzheimers I suspect.”

~

As Little Red Ridah sneaky quiet picked up the black box,

the granny ladies circled around MeeMaw sly like a fox.

“Bout damn time it was Mabel, when I got your letter.

Look here. Hell girl, it couldn’t a worked out better.

You know we agree with you sister about the way of things.

Damn fool youngsters in this place done lost they minds,

better to take control while there is still some time.

Gonna have to start all over. You know we are.

That why your part of the treats is gonna be the star.

~

We ground and mixed ours into a fine delicate powder

of mandrake, hemlock, belladonna and passion flower.

Got it all blessed thrice and a sifter run through,

then we made a decoction to strengthen the brew.

Girl, this Halloween is gonna be the most.

Anyone who takes one bite gonna be toast.

But it’s your secret sauce that will provide the labor.

My sister, you gonna be the ghetto’s savior.

~

We gonna take over the hood, be MeeMaw’s crew!

Then what them fools gonna go and do?

By the time they know it will be too late.

The whole hood’s gonna get a new slate.

Time to start and we will have labor to burn.

Maybel girl, you know you doing the hood a good turn.

Bout damn time someone brought them fools to heal,

make the thugs and gangsters kneel,

bring respect and honor back to our lives,

make the streets safe for mothers and wives.

What you put in that sauce anyhow?

You know you ain’t never said. Tell us now!”

~

“And I ain’t gonna give all my secrets away today,

but maybe a peek at a few things that came into play.

Added blood of bat, and eye of frog,

tongue of newt and hair of dog,

petal of a black rose and feather of a raven,

sulphur, puffball mushroom root, skin of viper,

black widow’s venom and crushed up spider,

that’s all I’m a telling. You aint getting the rest.

Been working on this sauce for years and tonight’s the test.

~

Now let’s get this party started ladies and hope for the best.

Come on girls let’s get ready to start dishing it out.

Younguns gonna be here very soon have no doubt.

Biggest party of the year, Halloween is what it’s all about.

~

Chilluns gonna come from blocks and blocks around

and all them teeny bopper thugs. Red is on the rebound.

Got on jeans so tight you can see all the junk in her trunk.

Sides all the little bastards are expecting the funk,

as in live band, dancing, with all Red’s hoochy mama friends.

All them little boy gangsta wantabe’s be just dying to get in.

So we gonna let everything slide ladies you see,

let em get just as crazy as they wanta be.

Around midnight we hand out one of each candy, yours and mine

to each guest with a smile and show some old lady sunshine.

Play the loving granny part be really, really sweet

to be sure we get some into each one of them little freaks.

~

I hear the band tuning up in the basement so everyone get to it.

Everything is ready now gals, aint nothing left but to do it.

Ida, mix us up a batch of frozen daiquiris girl cause we gonna pile up in this kitchen.”

“It’s starting I could use some help” popped off Red in the next room. “ “Aw girl, go stop your bitchen.

Me and my sisters gonna stay right here and do some reminiscing.

You go on now, you and your friends get this party commencing.

Have a good time little Red.

Go on girl knock em dead.

MeeMaw always tells you right.

Go on now. We’ll be down later tonight.

Right around the time party gets going

we’ll come down and make a showing,

give the candy out to everyone by hand.

Hell girl, we even made some for the band.”

~

MeeMaw sat down at the head of the modest table.

“Ida where’s them daiquiris?” “They coming Mabel.”

“Come on girls let’s play some cards

while these damn fool kids act like retards.”

~

The music blares within an hour all down the block.

The basement is busting with funk and hip hop.

All the thugs, hoes, pimps, gangstas and thieves

dancing in the basement. “Girl, you would not believe

the hoochy dancing going on,

the humping out on the front lawn,

the drugs being smoked, shot ,snorted and sold

for sex, money, favors, girl even gold.

Some bastard crackhead selling the gold outa his dead mama’s mouth.

You know it’s a sad day. Whole world done gone south,

as in straight to hell. Look at what these fool children do.

See that little gal? She aint but twelve now one gonna be two,

and with wino junky Scary no teeth Larry to boot.

~

Aw hell, I done had me enough, can’t stands it no more.

Come on now girls we gonna take it down a floor.

Grab up the candy lets kick this plan into gear ladies.

Remember now don’t tip off the crazys.

Smile and call all of the bastards dear and son.

Smile and dote on each like they the only one.

Don’t turn away until you see them swallow.

Gonna be a new day come tomorrow.”

~

Into the hip hop haze of smoky, smelly party went

the granny brigade with candy giving off an enticing scent.

Every mouth in the place started to water.

Never did a single granny smile faulter.

For Each person she did receive,

off her tray two pieces of candy relieved.

Each one ooed and ahed it was all so sweet,

until each every mouth had taken some treats.

~

MeeMaw smiled “that’s all folks. God Bless and good night.

Come on sisters let’s leave these kids, get outta sight.”

The old ladies went upstairs once more.

“How long before they all dead on the floor”

MeeMaw asked of her partners in crime.

“Should not be too much time.

I’m thinking about twenty minutes give or take.

How long will it take you to the corpses awake?”

~

“Just long enough to state the command,

just gotta stand over them with my talisman.

First, I’m gonna wake em up you see.

Then I’ll tell them fools how it’s gonna be,

that they work for me.

Yes lord, and working for free.”

~

The card game continued around the table,

but meanwhile downstairs no one was able

to get their groove on anymore.

People just started sitting down right on the floor

wherever they happened to be right then and there

was where they just fell down, totally out of air.

None bitched, moaned, raged or complained

but seemed to be just totally drained.

One by one each laid over as if asleep.

~

“Now listen. There my sisters, finally, peace and quiet at last.

Ida, I’m impressed. You were right, it done kicked in fast.

Come on girls, let’s get to It downstairs.

Get them corpses up and awares.

Let them see how it’s gonna be,

peace, respect and propriety.”

~

Down the stairs and into the sea of bodies moved

four old ladies slow and steady with attitude.

And on this most scary of all nights

grannys set the ghetto to rights.

MeeMaw stood chanting in time,

chanting an old voodoo rhyme.

Amid the bodies strewed here and there,

she waved the talisman with a dramatic flare.

~

“Wake your dead asses up and hear what I say.

Welcome my slaves to a brand new day.

From here on out you gonna do what’s right.

Follow my orders forever on from this night.

Now pull up your pants over up your behind.

Stand up straight and get in line.

~

You’re going out into the world to do good,

clean up the mess you done made like you know you should.

Start with my house and the front lawn too.

Gonna start giving instead of taking is what you gonna do.

Paint over all the graffiti in the entire city,

go clean the cages at the city pound, help the kitties,

go deliver meals to the elderly and the poor,

not be out fighting, dealing, and stealing no more.

Clean up the parks and plant some gardens

stop running around acting like heathens.

Clean up the world now go get with it.

~

When the dawn comes upon the land,

You come back here each night under my command.

You pass the day in the basement away,

but each night you gonna do what I say.

~

In life you acted like damn fools,

welcome children to being my tools.”


© 10-21-10 Vix a.k.a. Rhonda Enrayne



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Granny Rules!


I have always loved funny sitcoms with strong African America matriarchal characters. The pictures displayed here are some of my favorite characters from TV and movies. The poem above is just one example of what can happen when one does tequila shots while watching Medea and looking at Little Red Riding Hood costumes for Halloween. Lesson learned…Drink responsibly.


This was a fun write to do. Sadly, some of the social conditions contained within are far from fictional. Have you looked around in an inner city lately? From Dallas to Jersey, L.A. to Nashville, it's getting bad out there guys. What do we think our world will be like in a generation if this is the world our children grow up in?

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inkwell780 6 years ago

WOW!! APPLAUSE MUSE!!! When I read it I was reeling off a rap song in my head from the style in which you wrote it. What else can I say? It is Brilliant!!! This was definitely worth the wait to read!! Your vocabulary range as far as slang/euphemisms is wide and infinite... If I could I would VOTE THIS HUB AS A TEN (10) OUT OF TEN! I am so proud to have you as a friend. You never cease to amaze me Muse!! Humbly and gracefully yours, Matthew, aka little Inky! =:)


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poetvix 6 years ago from Gone from Texas but still in the south. Surrounded by God's country. Author

Inky ~ Thanks bunches bud for your super sweet words, your tags and for always being so supportive w/ your comments.


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epigramman 6 years ago

...I always knew you were one little sweet funky mama - but this obviously proves it - lol lol lol

..and again this is an epic offering full of your boundless imagination and wit!

To show you how great minds think alike - I once wrote a piece called LITTLE RED RIDIN' AND THE HOOD - lol lol - so I am pleased and honored to be in your sacred company because you definitely inspire me to no end .........


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MartieCoetser 6 years ago from South Africa

Beautiful prove of your vivid imagination. Voted UP!


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poetvix 6 years ago from Gone from Texas but still in the south. Surrounded by God's country. Author

Epigramman ~ Thank you so much for your kind words. You did a Little Red too? I want to read! Happy Haunted Halloween my charming friend.

Martie ~ Thanks for reading and for being so sweet. Happy Hubbing!


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Richlove 6 years ago from Denver,CO

hahaha I like it its really good!!


kimberlyslyrics 6 years ago

LMFAO

except no candy you'll bite

ho, you whitter dan white

Yet here yiuz iz up herez on my side of da streetz

Youz tinks for candy, on tinkin tou'k getz da treat?

Get real beatch, We beez owning long dis is our beat

'arite? Now we own your za price of luvz

Cuz youz just published anoder luvdy doo dahz hubz

"K?

cheers sis, but not no kiss

but i will miss

but not while we are in da hood

dis hub don't show cauz itz dat good

a'rite? *cough* dang girl where did you get this sh-t


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nighthag 6 years ago from Australia

This was fantastic, a great story told with a wonderful style and rhythm..Loved it


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poetvix 6 years ago from Gone from Texas but still in the south. Surrounded by God's country. Author

Richlove ~ :) Thanks for dropping by and glad you liked it. Happy Halloween Hubbing!

Kimberlyslyrics ~ Hey there girl friend! Love the flow! Thanks for hanging in my hood and your words is always good. Take a treat, one for the road, before we both return to our dark abodes. Happy haunted Halloween in the hood!

Nighthag ~ Thanks for stopping by my little Halloween in the hood hub and for your sweet words. Happy Hubbing.


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Highvoltagewriter 6 years ago from Savannah GA.

So funny! The best Halloween poem I ever read! voted up!


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Wayne Brown 6 years ago from Texas

Woooo...Red Ridah's meemaw done kick some gangsta ass in the hood. She done caught mo' flies with honey and led them off to slaughter don't ya know. This verse had so much hip hop action going on I almost got out my beat box while I was reading it. Thanks for sharing! WB


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poetvix 6 years ago from Gone from Texas but still in the south. Surrounded by God's country. Author

Highvoltagewriter ~ Thanks for dropping in on this little tale and for your kind words :). Happy Halloween Hubbing!

Wayne ~ Yes, never mess w/ MeeMaw. She will get you every time. Thanks for stopping in and for your sweet comment :). Blessing to you for the scary season.


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Nell Rose 6 years ago from England

Hi, ha ha I was going to say never mess with MeeMaw! hee hee brilliant!


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Micky Dee 6 years ago

Clean up the HOOD! Write on Poetvix!


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poetvix 6 years ago from Gone from Texas but still in the south. Surrounded by God's country. Author

Nell ~ You know it! MeeMaw always wins :). Thanks for reading and your kind comment. Happy All Hallow's Eve!

Micky ~ Thanks for riding through the hood dude :). Blessed be for the scaryboo time of year.


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prasetio30 6 years ago from malang-indonesia

You are still my favorite. How do you make this so beautiful? I give my thumbs up for you. Thank you very much.

Prasetio :)


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Ginger Meow 6 years ago

Wow, how cool is your poem/song. I wouldn't be suprised if you have 50 cent knocking on your door asking to record the lyrics. I love the title as well, 'Little Red Rihah'. Love your work.


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poetvix 6 years ago from Gone from Texas but still in the south. Surrounded by God's country. Author

Prasetio ~ Aw, thank you. You say the sweetest things. You're always thumbs up in my book.

Ginger Meow ~ Gotta say, I love the sleepy, squished up kitty face on your avatar... too cute. Thanks bunches for reading and your kind comment.


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Mike Lickteig 6 years ago from Lawrence KS USA

My goodness, this was amazing! I enjoyed the rhythm and pace very much. You had quite the narrative going on here. Voted up and awesome.

Happy Halloween, a day or two late.

Mike


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poetvix 6 years ago from Gone from Texas but still in the south. Surrounded by God's country. Author

Mike ~ Thank you sir for taking the time, for your votes and for being your very kind self. Happy Halloween to you too even if it is a bit tardy.


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BobbiRant 6 years ago from New York

This is so funny and entertaining, it kept me smiling from beginning to end. What a great rap/poem, I love it!


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poetvix 6 years ago from Gone from Texas but still in the south. Surrounded by God's country. Author

BobbieRant ~ Thank you for reading and for you sweet comment. Glad it made you smile :).


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mythbuster 6 years ago from Utopia, Oz, You Decide

OMGosssssssssssH! I was completely entertained here and thank you, poetvix. I'm going back to the top of the page to read again!


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poetvix 6 years ago from Gone from Texas but still in the south. Surrounded by God's country. Author

Mythbuster ~ Thanks for dropping in and for your kind words. Happy hubbing!


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the pink umbrella 6 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me.

read it thrice!!! amazing! thoroughly enjouyed it.


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poetvix 6 years ago from Gone from Texas but still in the south. Surrounded by God's country. Author

Pink Umbrella ~ Thanks for reading and glad you liked my little ode de hood.


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samiaali 6 years ago

Hey poetvix, This was a great 'gangsta' in the hood, Halloween story! Enjoyed this very much! :)


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poetvix 6 years ago from Gone from Texas but still in the south. Surrounded by God's country. Author

Samiaali ~ Glad you liked it :). Thanks for reading!


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michael ely 6 years ago from Scotland

Hi poetvix, Great stuff. Entertaining read, with a lot of good rhymes and very funny. Cheers. Michael.


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poetvix 6 years ago from Gone from Texas but still in the south. Surrounded by God's country. Author

Michael Ely ~ Thanks bunches for dropping in and for your kind comment. Happy hubbing!


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sligobay 5 years ago from east of the equator

Better late than never, I say. like Kimberly said: 'yo whitter den white'...waz up wit dat? Yo bin robbin sum white gurl pic Vix?

The funniest bit was when you made 'dem zombies' pull up their pants...so funny. You are masterful at your whimsy.

This is a modern day Epic and should be converted into a full length animated feature film for next Halloween. I'll help you find the animators and producer despite my lack of experience. I do know a few media types. Send me an email if you're 'down wit dis'. You and your talent are priceless. Don't let this swell your head. Keep your head and stay out of that bottle. Been there and done that. Do not give alcohol any credit for your talent and do not believe that alcohol is your muse. Your raw talent is resplendent.


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poetvix 5 years ago from Gone from Texas but still in the south. Surrounded by God's country. Author

Sligobay ~ You and Kimberly are both right. I am whiter than white! I think I was possessed by the ghost of ghettos past during the scary season.

I wish I really could make the youth of America pull up their pants! That would be a Merry Christmas to me.

I'm so glad you enjoyed this little tale. Thank you so much for reading and for your kind words.


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sligobay 5 years ago from east of the equator

Great talent Vix.. Keep up the good work. Merry, merry!


MrDSpade2 5 years ago

Beyond funny and well written, the way you wrote it you would think u were from the hood, good read...


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InspiredHippy 5 years ago from Old Town, California

AS ALWAYS...I applaud you dear one...

Peace ... Becky Jo


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poetvix 5 years ago from Gone from Texas but still in the south. Surrounded by God's country. Author

Sligobay ~ :) Thank you. You really are the sweetest.

MrDSpade2 ~ Your kind words are most appreciated dear sir as is your visit.

InspiredHippy ~ Thank you Becky Jo. Blessed be.


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Mentalist acer 5 years ago from A Voice in your Mind!

So much for the weed,Now there's no Need,lol.;)


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poetvix 5 years ago from Gone from Texas but still in the south. Surrounded by God's country. Author

Mentalist acer ~

Thanks bunches for the read.

Your words are kind indeed.

You know, you made me smile.

Thanks, for its been awhile :).


Ghost32 5 years ago

Dang. Didn't know Stephen King & Dean Koontz had hooked up to produce a rap-writin' girl child!

Voted up and every button on the bar.

At last the mystery is solved, where Obama's Zombies be comin' from....


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poetvix 5 years ago from Gone from Texas but still in the south. Surrounded by God's country. Author

Ghost ~ Now how did you know those were two of my fave. authors? Twilight Eyes by Koontz and of course The Stand by King are just so very darkly yummy.

Oh geez, they are working for him??? My happy horror ending just went the way of Greek tragedy :(. Holy crap!

Well, come to think of it, having the grannies take on the current administration might just be worth a write.

Thanks for your visit and your kind words.


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pan1974 5 years ago from Columbus,Ga

Bravo, bravo. Hey that was real funny, you had me laughing and crying. You need to try to sell that script to Tyler Perry, that is just to good.You are something else, you need to go to Hollywood and write scripts.


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poetvix 5 years ago from Gone from Texas but still in the south. Surrounded by God's country. Author

Pan1974 ~ Aw man, that's the sweetest thing to say! Thank you so much. You are too kind. Wouldn't that be kewl? Me in the hills... hmmm now there's a scary thought! Happy hubbing!


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bellawritter23 5 years ago from California

Poetvix, This is pretty bad ass story you had going on. Great write and read.

>_< winks

bella


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poetvix 5 years ago from Gone from Texas but still in the south. Surrounded by God's country. Author

bellawritter23 ~ Thank you! Right back at ya w/ the winks :). Happy hubbing and God bless.


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Frank Atanacio 5 years ago from Shelton

This was off the wall kwel damn Loved it up and awesome!


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poetvix 5 years ago from Gone from Texas but still in the south. Surrounded by God's country. Author

Frank ~ Thanks bunches!


MrDSpade2 5 years ago

You know i miss your comments on my hubs, as something drew me back here to say that to you on ur creative comic write such as this...


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poetvix 5 years ago from Gone from Texas but still in the south. Surrounded by God's country. Author

MrDSpade2 ~ And I miss seeing your hubs. I have not been able to spend near as much time on Hubpages as I would like of late. It's that time of year. One more month and it will be summertime and thankfully I will have more time which is really no excuse no matter how true. I look forward to seeing your hubs soon my friend. I have missed your dark inspiring style.


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WillStarr 5 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona

Whoa! Look at you girl!

(And I'm not even a rap fan!)

Wow!


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poetvix 5 years ago from Gone from Texas but still in the south. Surrounded by God's country. Author

WillStarr ~ Thanks... funny, but ya know, I'm not a rap fan either. Personally I like metal, classic rock, alternative rock and occasionally classical.


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AudreyHowitt 4 years ago from California

Red and MeeMaw are a bit wicked! Fabulous job!


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poetvix 4 years ago from Gone from Texas but still in the south. Surrounded by God's country. Author

Audrey ~ Thank you for reading and commenting. Oh, yes ma'am they really are. I wrote this for the scary October day so I most likely went a bit too far. My imagination tends to be a little over the top at times.

God bless and happiest of hubbing!


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josh3418 4 years ago from Pennsylvania

poetvix,

WOW, this is absolutely brilliant! Awesome, amazing, terrific, stellar, clever, imaginative, and many more adjectives that I could come up with if it wasn't currently three in the morning. Great poem!

Voted up and across the whole board and sharing!


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poetvix 4 years ago from Gone from Texas but still in the south. Surrounded by God's country. Author

Josh3418 - Thank you so much for your kind words and for taking the time to read something so long. It was a lot of fun. God bless and happiest of hubbing!

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