Lonely Angel

I was once sad and lonely. Having nobody to comfort me, so I wore a mask that always smiles... to hide my feelings behind a lie.

She's all alone
Away from the crowd
Staring at nowhere
No one understands her
And no one seems to care.


Her heart was like of stone
Never want to love and to be loved
Her eyes was like that of a blazing fire
That even a single tear
Wouldn't drop.


She was beautiful
Yet so mysterious
Behind her dark eyes you could see
The hurts and pains she suffered
But the tranquility of life
Was within her.


Deep inside, she was just afraid
The scar left by the pain
Has never left her
Since the day someone broke her fragile heart
And left her all alone.


Behind her lips
That seems to be a verge of smile
A silent tear falls from her eyes
The pain was too much
She can't help but only cry.


She's a lonely angel
Afraid to be hurt again
With her dark eyes and silent cries
She'll remain mysterious
To everyone's eyes.


You may wonder
Who could this lonely angel be?
But she is no other


Than ME.


© 2012 Mycee. All Rights Reserved.

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Olde Cashmere 4 years ago from Michigan, United States

Enchanting writing that hooked me from the first line. You are a gifted writer unknown spy, I always enjoy your poems, beautiful work. Voted up, beautiful and interesting. Never stop writing, you have wonderful talent (:


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bravewarrior 4 years ago from Central Florida

Beautiful, yet so sad.... Without pain, however, we will never recognize joy and comfort. Let those wings of your give you freedom to soar with all that is beautiful!


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rahul0324 4 years ago from Gurgaon, India

Heart-wrenching, stabbing right to the core... people who break-hearts do not understand the sins they do! They break souls down... they rip the wings of angels and fall in the eyes of god...

Beautifully written sad poetry... feel the pain... every bit of it!


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

You are such an inspiration. you inspire me to write..im a frustrated writer, but your comments motivates me to become better.thank you for reading :)


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Yes, i agree bravewarrior. we suffer pain in order for us to appreciate the joys of life. I know that one day..we would be able to soar freely into the open skies.


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Hearts are fragile..they supposed to handle it with care. you are such a great poet Rahul..every line in your comment was crafted with genuine words.


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Michele Travis 4 years ago from U.S.A. Ohio

Very beautiful, very sad, but there is some understanding. You have talent, you care about others, you love others. You are an angel. I felt all of that in your poem. Thank you for writing it.


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Michele, you made my heart smile, because you have looked deeper behind the words i carved on that poem. They used to call me a loner at school because i stay away from the crowd. but no one asks why... Thank you and thank you again for reading and commenting.


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Vellur 4 years ago from Dubai

Great poem, the angel must break out,fly into the world and experience the joy and wonders of this world. There are many people out there to love and care, if only you give them a chance to show, that they love you pretty angel. Voted up and beautiful.Shared


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Yes, the angel has broken wings and need someone to help her mend it to fly again.. so many people tried to fix her wings but no matter how much she tried, still the wings could only be mended by the one who broke it.

Thank you for sharing Vellur.. I really really appreciate this.


lovedoctor926 4 years ago

Lovely poem. You are very good at expressing your emotions. In this poem, the angel needs to get away from it all. She needs time to heal on her own. Nobody can't do it for her. It's about loving herself, finding a passion and keep doing it until you become really good at it. Not only will you feel alive, but you will have that drive and energy. This is excellent therapy for the angel. By keeping her mind occupied and focused on other activities, the angel will get better and better and regain her strength once again.This time, the angel will be able to reignite that hope and hopefully fall in love again.


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Hi lovedoctor..you were right to say that this angel should keep her mind occupied and focused on other activities instead of waiting and crying for a lost love. and eventually, her wings will soon heal and will have to gain strength to fly again. but sad to say, she's moving very slowly, as if she doesnt want to go on with her life now the love was gone.. yes, she may fall in love but i think she didnt want to.

Thank you for the comment :)


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ananceleste 4 years ago from California

Thank you unknown spy, for giving a voice to all the lonely angels out there. You are a talented and true poet. Be true to your inner voice, and the world will know how to see the world through your eyes... Beautiful. Voted up and sharing!


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

:) I love your comment Ananceleste. Thank you so much for appreciating my poem. Yes, we have to be true to ourselves and not deceive it. the rest will follow.


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Lot Rillera 4 years ago from Philippines

You are such a very angelic person Unknown spy!


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Lot, your kind words are very much appreciated.


iamaudraleigh 4 years ago

I really liked how you were able to describe yourself in the words of your poem :)

it can be difficult to write about yourself sometimes. You were able to do it so beautifuly even though sadness prevailed. I was impressed. I voted your lovely work up indeed :)


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Thank you Iamaudraleigh.

People tend to call me a loner sometimes. I just love to be away from the crowds, they wouldn't understand me anyway.

Thank you for this wonderful comment. I really appreciate your kind words.


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lifeoflata 4 years ago from Tacoma Wa

Beautifully writtin poem, even angels can cry...good job i enjoyed your writting.


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Hello Lifeoflata! Thank you for enjoying this piece. Have a nice day!


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MsLofton 4 years ago from IL

This is awesome!!!! I too like to be away from the crowd!


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Hello MsLofton.. Seems we have some thing in common! :)


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snowdrops 4 years ago from The Second Star to the Right

Very very lovely poem!


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brittvan22 4 years ago from Atlanta, Georgia

Refreshingly honest and beautiful poem!


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Thanks Britt! :)


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brittvan22 4 years ago from Atlanta, Georgia

Ur welcome! Have you ever wrote a hub that scared you?


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

hmm..i guess not yet. but maybe one day i'll stumble to it :)

You're such an excellent writer Britt! Love it.


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brittvan22 4 years ago from Atlanta, Georgia

Thanks, my last hub the pic was too much for me! I was like dang, guess I can take my breathe away.


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Yeah..i've seen it Britt..the pic was indeed too much. Oh man.


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josh3418 4 years ago from Pennsylvania

I want to start off by saying that I happened to find myself here because I am friends with bravewarrior, shiningisrisheyes, billybuc, and Ttoomb08.

I have seen your comments in the midst of all of our comments on various hubs. So I decided to come take a look for myself and see what you are all about!

And having said that, I am glad to have found you here on HubPages. This is an excellent poem, very relevant to what many people feel from time to time. You expressed deep emotion in a powerful way because of the imagery and careful wordage. Great job "M" (your profile told me I was licensed to call you that, so I am taking advantage :) )

Voted up, and then some more, and sharing immediately!


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Hi J.

Thank you soo much, for the read, for the votes for this lovely message to me. I'm so glad that you really take time to visit my hub.

the poem is really me..what i feel when i'm alone. Thank you so much for appreciating.

xoxo,M.


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josh3418 4 years ago from Pennsylvania

You are very welcome M, anytime! :) Glad I could be of encouragement :)


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Thank you again J.

Take CAre! :)


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josh3418 4 years ago from Pennsylvania

You are welcome M, check out your Crazy Thought hub, I made a visit there! :)


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Yeah!! Oh you're sooo cute J. Thank you!

(blushes*)


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josh3418 4 years ago from Pennsylvania

You are welcome! :)


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

You're very awesome J. :)


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josh3418 4 years ago from Pennsylvania

Aww, thanks new friend :)


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

:p hehehe


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josh3418 4 years ago from Pennsylvania

mwhahahahaha :)


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

hahahaha!!

and why are you still up?


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josh3418 4 years ago from Pennsylvania

Hehe I work overnight at a hotel, tonight I am not working, but my sleeping habbits usually keep me up til like four, and then I sleep in til like noon :) It also is a great time to publish hubs :)


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

waahhh.. yeah, I've been there too. It's like im not sleeping on my day-offs and will just sleep when the sun is up.. but I did not survived night shifts.. hehehe!


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josh3418 4 years ago from Pennsylvania

hehehehehe, I am fine with them, my body doesn't mind it which is good :)


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Wow, that's good. You just take care always :)


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josh3418 4 years ago from Pennsylvania

Yep :) Have a good night, catch you early after noonish :)


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

its 3:15pm here in Neverland :)


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shalini sharan 4 years ago from Delhi

this is so beautifully written unknown, i could feel the pain, for most of the time i felt the poem described me

voted up


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

Thank you so much Sha.. One time or another, we all feel the same..like we're alone and no one seems to understand or care what we're feeling.. :)


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girishpuri 4 years ago from NCR , INDIA

Beautiful, deep, touching yet so sad, i m touched, voted up.


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unknown spy 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up. Author

thank you so much Girishpuri!

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