Lonely Cloud !

the lonely cloud !
the lonely cloud ! | Source

It rained and rained with all its might

eyes with tears slept not whole night

accompanied all griefs though by side

yet felt alone on that showering plight !

teemed out eyes, whole lot of springs

thoughts in mind than calmed all kinks

How lonely the humble cloud was, that night

throughout in pain he poured but quite !

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Mhatter99 4 years ago from San Francisco

Thank you for this delightful poem

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shara63 4 years ago from Delhi Author

you are welcome Mhatter...and thankyou too, for you find it pleasing!

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DREAM ON 4 years ago

Another fun poem.Thanx for sharing.

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shara63 4 years ago from Delhi Author

thanks DreamOn that you enjoyed it!

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rust 4 years ago from East Texas Woods

I'm a little bit slow t0 commit myself here but I do say I'm getting what you're wanting me to. Everytime you're wanting to

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shara63 4 years ago from Delhi Author

even your presence at comments counts..so, thankyou rust!

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Olde Cashmere 4 years ago from Michigan, United States

This is an excellent and beautiful poem. Great writing shara63. Voted up, beautiful, and awesome :)

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shara63 4 years ago from Delhi Author

Olde Cashmere, Thankyou for visiting and your very kind comments.

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dghbrh 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

Hey dear, so lovely....thanks for your kind fan mail...i tried to send one to you also but could not manage...lol

nevertheless...checked you hubs and this poem is so nicely done.....all votes up and away. I also done one on tear drops.....you may go through if you get time.

happy to know you.

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shara63 4 years ago from Delhi Author

You are very welcome, dear . I appreciate your visit and comment. and i wud love to read the hub on the topic, for sure!

thank you, and nice meeting you too!

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skye2day 3 years ago from Rocky Mountains

shara You really are a poet precious woman. Love it. This reminds me after a storm there is a rainbow. Joy does come in the morning.

My Love, Skye

keep em coming girl.

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Ian Dabasori Hetr 2 years ago from Papua New Guinea

Beautiful poem by a precious woman. I enjoyed how you knit the words perfectly together, drawing out the deeper emotions.

You are a lovely sweet writer.

Much Hub love


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Nell Rose 2 years ago from England

I loved your poem shara, what a great idea, the lonely cloud, I won't look at clouds the same way again, nell

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Jodah 2 years ago from Queensland Australia

Lovely poem, poor little cloud ;)

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shara63 2 years ago from Delhi Author

Thankyou Jodah!

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