Look Through My Words Into My Soul

What Do You See ?

All my thoughts are out in the open

Pick and poke

Stir each around and around

As they boldly present themselves one by one

Watch as they perform like a dancer skilled on their slightest move

Encouraging you to tag along

Escorting you to a world

Filled with every positive emotion

Watching , enjoying then participating

Filling your mind with pleasure

Feelings so incredible

Look not for they are your own

With poise and confidence

You now can see

All the emotions that move me

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annart 2 years ago from SW England

What lovely emotions and ideas. I like the idea of finding one's own emotions through the words of others. Ann

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DREAM ON 2 years ago Author

annart Let the good emotions carry you away to endless hours of fun and new thrills. We all deserve to be happy and there is nothing happier than seeing people making other people happy naturally. Thanks so much for being the first to read and leave a comment. You made my day even better.Have a beautiful one at that.

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Jodah 2 years ago from Queensland Australia

Very nice Dream On, this just seemed to flow like a dance.

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Gypsy Rose Lee 2 years ago from Riga, Latvia

Voted up and beautiful. Wonderful sentiments.

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Michael-Milec 2 years ago


So very true. We are walking as an open book; written pages shoving results of our deep spiritual conviction who is the master of our soul, making our thoughts public display who we really are. Often without saying a word. Fine read.

Voted up and interesting.

Have a great week.

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DREAM ON 2 years ago Author

Jodah Life has so many opportunities and blessings if we learn to share and make each day that much nicer.Gypsy Rose Lee We all contribute so much to the world as a whole and don't see it. Every day we can give and give more.Michael-Milec Learning from so many friends that are so special and filled with fountains of love and kindness.Thank you all for your kind comments and have a wonderful comments.

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Phoebe Pike 2 years ago

Another triumph. How much longer until I get to put your book on my shelf?

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DREAM ON 2 years ago Author

Phoebe Pike I couldn't be more thrilled and honored to have a book some day in the near future. Hopefully I am moving in the right direction. It might be a limited edition of two one for you and me. I am not sure most people want to read what I find important. You are so kind to read so many of my stories and poems. I am happy you enjoy what I write. Thank you so much for reading and commenting. I will try to make each writing a little sweeter than the one before. So you will keep coming back for more. Have a beautiful night.

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Phoebe Pike 2 years ago

Dream on- I love all your work, so far, and I bet everyone else would want a copy too.

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DREAM ON 2 years ago Author

Phoebe Pike Loving the people in our life and enjoying what we love to do makes everything alright. Thank you for spending your time commenting and seeing the positive peek around the corner. It is so nice to be appreciated and to slow down and show others how they change our life each day in good ways. Have a beautiful morning.

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