Look at me and do likewise

Let me enjoy each moment with you

tomorrow is positive

Today is negative

criticism is a tool

that improves objective skills

yet, it will kill subjective creativity if applied to soon

I have read your words

and seen your tears,

sometimes, I just have to take

the good with the bad.

however, it is so sad.

Let us take sweet counsel together

until help comes, rather than seeking to be understood,

help me to be someone who seeks to understand

The way of man is forward and strange:

love me now

hate me tomorrow,

we need emotional

remodeling, inside and out

we must seek counsel together

because I need someone who understand me.

Satisfy us in the morning with unfailing love

that we may sing for joy and be glad our our days

according to his words.

come seek counsel with me

we need more laughter,

less sadness in our life

lets' lighten up starting today

Come take counsel with me.













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makusr 4 years ago from India

Dark,

Greetings from MAKUSR. That's good. I like it. Keep up the good work you are doing.

Lots of Love,

MAKUSR


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Darknlovely3436 4 years ago from NewYork Author

Makusr thank you ... so good to see you

one love Annie


mikeq107 4 years ago

Annie :O)

It is like a couples letter to God

Love the ending

"Satisfy us in the morning with unfailing love

that we may sing for joy and be glad our our days

according to his words.

come seek counsel with me

we need more laughter,

less sadness in our life

lets' lighten up starting today

Come take counsel with me."

Beautiful !!!!!

Mike :0)


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Darknlovely3436 4 years ago from NewYork Author

come to counsel with me... actually I think i might need some counseling.(theories to help me overcome some problems and realize my full-potential. (:)


mikeq107 4 years ago

I,m here Annie :0)

Jesus came to set you free so you can run wild and ROAR...be all that you can Be!!!!!!

Mike :0)


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epigramman 4 years ago

..love the way you write - there is a delicate and poetic thin line between cerebral and emotional and you pull it off with sublime aplomb - especially love the line - come take counsel with me - well, I just did and I feel much better for it - hubbravo to you my friend.

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