Lost in you...A vampire poem

 

Why is it danger that I see deep in your eyes

What terrible truth do you cover with your lies?

Your words soft and seductive as we dance

Spinning in your arms, I am lost in you, entranced

 

What is this strange power you have over me?

This passion so blinding, I can barely see

About you I know nothing at all

Yet I cannot resist your seductive call

 

Still this magical night holds a danger untold

As I succumb to your kisses hot and bold

As the moon glows softly in the night

It is into my soul you gently bite

 

 

Lost in ecstasy, lost in dream

It’s only the heights of pleasure that make me scream

As nights of blood and passion fill my head

Each morning when I wake alone in my bed

 

Rumpled sheets and virtue gone

I can’t help but hate the dawn

Lost and empty throughout the day

Not knowing what keeps you away

 

Love or curse, fear and attraction

Totally lost in your overwhelming seduction

I yearn for the return of the night

When you will hold me again so tight

 

Tell me my love what secrets you hold

And why your eyes seem so old

Show me where it is you go

Everything about you I want to know

 

Yet when at last you appear

Your voice is the only thing I hear

In your arms I lose all control

Your ancient blood replacing my soul

The moon glows softly as we dance

Moving as one, lost in trance

Eternity to live our life

With me as your dark vampire wife

 

 

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Meg Ingram 5 years ago

hi! i read your poem an i just wanted to say i liked it a lot.


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blaise25 5 years ago from close to you...

Beautiful, seductive, tainted and magical like a vampire love. Voted up :)


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QudsiaP1 5 years ago

Exquisite, absolutely exquisite. This is beyond words; I love the combination of both lust and passion in equal bites (every pun intended). :P


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Wrath Warbone 5 years ago from Cleveland, Ohio

Absolutely excellent! What fine talent you have! I enjoyed every word of it. It is flawless.


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Seeker7 5 years ago from Fife, Scotland

This is spookily superb. Un-nerving but beautiful with it and I think you capture the hypnotic allure of the vampire excellently.


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always exploring 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

Geez, If this don't get the blood red hot, i don't know what will. Steamy, seductive, flows like lava. Beautiful poetry. I'm always thrilled when i see that you've written poetry, and i'm never disappointed.

Cheers


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saddlerider1 5 years ago

I'm with AE you took us on a path of beauty, how two souls long for the thirst that's never quenched, yet like two spirits they dance,laugh and twirl in each others hearts and souls. Grasping for each other, knowing where and when to meet for the embrace of red and then to quietly fade back into their individual worlds of mystery. Well done, awesome and voted UP..always.


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Shalini Kagal 5 years ago from India

Incredibly passionate as evil becomes ecstasy and dangerous becomes desirable. Voted up!


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acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

Wow steamy and so, so seductive. Totally awesome, I absolutely loved this poem. Voting up and pressing your buttons again.


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SilentReed 5 years ago from Philippines

What lures me to your tales? The Dark sensuous desires hidden within each of us :) Another captivating and entrancing write. Danger is a very strong aphrodisiac.It holds us spellbound and stimulates.... :)


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nighthag 5 years ago from Australia Author

Meg Ingram

thank you so very much Its always a pleasure to hear that someone liked my work :)

blaise25

wow thank you so much for the compliment and the vote up :)

QudsiaP1

It must be a confusing ride to fall in love with a vampire such as this, thank you so much for your very complimentary comment, it still sometimes surprise me when others like my writing so much :) again thank you :)


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nighthag 5 years ago from Australia Author

Wrath Warbone

wow I am so flattered that you liked this sooo much,you have left me blushing, thank you so very much

Seeker7

'spookily superb' I love it thank you so very much, I really wanted to capture the danger and the overwhelming allure of being the object of a vampires affection. I am simply thrilled that you liked it. I am a huge fan of your articles dealing with the many aspects of the paranormal, so it means a lot that you like this :)


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nighthag 5 years ago from Australia Author

always exploring

WOW... you have left me speechless with such a wonderful comment...'Flows like lava' what a stunning compliment thank you that is going to keep me smiling all day

saddlerider1

It always blows my mind when other poets that I admire so much,such as you and always exploring find beauty in my words. I am simply awestruck thank you


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nighthag 5 years ago from Australia Author

Shalini Kagal

there is a certain appeal to dangerous love, crazy as it is it can go straight to heart bypassing the much more logical head... Thank you so very much for the vote up I am simply thrilled that you liked it :)

acaetnna

coming from the Queen of Love Poetry that is a huge compliment,thank you

SilentReed

Its always a true pleasure to have someone understand not only what I write but why, thank you so very much


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samiaali 5 years ago

Hey nighthag, This was a most beautiful seduction! I loved every word of it! I vote up!


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nighthag 5 years ago from Australia Author

Thank you so much!

I am so very pleased to hear that you liked it!


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epigramman 5 years ago

...romantic and dangerous at the same time - not too many writers can pull that kind of 'fine line' off but of course you succeed brilliantly - and that's why you're an inspiration to me too .... off to work now - see you in the morning!


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nighthag 5 years ago from Australia Author

thank you so much!, I was trying for the thin line and I am so flattered that you think I reached it, we ourselves I find are our worst critics, so thank you for your kind words they Never fail to inspire and uplift. Thank you


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Stigma31 5 years ago from Kingston, ON

As usually immortally good!! Love it! Nowhere to go but up....


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nighthag 5 years ago from Australia Author

ah its so nice to have you visit again :) I am thrilled that you liked this Thanks heaps :)


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LCaverson 5 years ago from Virginia Beach, VA.

Oh man, I can't wait to read your para-normal romance. This was everything a good story should be.


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nighthag 5 years ago from Australia Author

Thank you so much!!

I am so so thrilled that you liked it :)


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Nat Amaral 4 years ago from BC Canada

WOW! Very hypnotic! It's also nice to read a paranormal romance from someone else who's into this sort of thing. I love your work. I intend to read more of it. :)


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nighthag 4 years ago from Australia Author

I am so glad that you enjoyed this, and yes I have a huge love of the paranormal romance too, its best form of escapism, :)

I look forward to your visits :)


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jenslibra 3 years ago

I love how the rhyming in the poem flows so smoothly. Also, great imagery created with the words.


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nighthag 3 years ago from Australia Author

Thank you so much!

I have a real soft spot for paranormal romance so I'm always thrilled when others like my vampire poems :)


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Anna Haven 2 years ago from Scotland

Your poem is darkly beautiful. You weave the vampire's spell perfectly and the tension in your words is tangible.

Paranormal fiction is my favourite genre as well. :)


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nighthag 2 years ago from Australia Author

Anne haven

I am so glad that you enjoyed this one, I have such a deep love of this genre that I'm always happy to find another to share it with. So thank you so much it means a lot that you enjoyed it so much :)


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LCaverson 2 years ago from Virginia Beach, VA.

Lovely as ever...


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nighthag 2 years ago from Australia Author

I am so very glad that you liked it :)

I have such a deep love frothing softie paranormal and sharing it isa true pleasure

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